The only things that hold it back is that it doesn't have alot of images, and those that it has are kinda weird when it comes to the eyes (well it is a text game so that shouldn't be a problem). Second problem is that it isn't updated enough.
Somewhat good idea, but that's it. Every event or step of the MC is written with 1-2 sentences as if story is told by a nervous 10 year-old kid. It's also pretty short. I have to write more so i can reach 200char limit, so I'll also add that I did not see any pictures in 0.8.
