VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.3.1] [JDOR]

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Avaron1974

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JJJ84 said:
If flight is a rare ability
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In one clip if you watch news on MC's tv in his bedroom it shows certain countries that have been purposed for certain powers.

France is the country full of people with flying powers. While it isn't common, it isn't rare either.
 
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Wi-fi NTR bois, you heard it here first!
This is like those jokes where the wife gets mad at her husband because she dreamed that he cheated on her. :FacePalm:
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You won’t believe it if I tell you how angry my wife has been for a week because she saw in a dream how I fucked all her girlfriends...o_O
I’m trying to forget this incident, but it reminded me again because of this showdown :KEK:
 
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Avaron1974 said:
In one clip if you watch news on MC's tv in his bedroom it shows certain countries that have been purposed for certain powers.

France is the country full of people with flying powers. While it isn't common, it isn't rare either.
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I did watch all the scenes in MC's tv before but I must have totally forgotten about that. :HideThePain:

Though it does make me wonder, assuming France is the country filled with Supes with flying powers, what stops them from being the Superior nation out of them all?
Do other nations have flight countermeasures if they ever go to war due to conflict?
Perhaps Jacquesdor could answer this one also.

Perhaps it's the MTF whom have such measures and supplies each nation a countermeasure for each Supes power which are far too OP. I dunno (me just throwing theories out there :KEK: ).
 
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JJJ84 said:
I did watch all the scenes in MC's tv before but I must have totally forgotten about that. :HideThePain:

Though it does make me wonder, assuming France is the country filled with Supes with flying powers, what stops them from being the Superior nation out of them all?
Do other nations have flight countermeasures if they ever go to war due to conflict?
Perhaps Jacquesdor could answer this one also.

Perhaps it's the MTF whom have such measures and supplies each nation a countermeasure for each Supes power which are far too OP. I dunno (me just throwing theories out there :KEK: ).
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At a rough guys, they seperate them by powers in order to monitor them and probably have countermeasures in place.

If they didn't then those invisibles in Japan could easily walk out.

Actually, actually, actually ..... when MC looked at Emeralds poster he mentioned she has a sort of flight ability so MC might already be able to fly.
 
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Just did a quick search and couldn't find any post about it.

Am i the only one who thinks Ghostraven is Riley?
Same figure and body details. Ghostraven states that she can't babysit MC for obvious reason and the final trigger for me was the look between Lady Steel and Riley when they teleported home and MC is greeted by Parker.

Did i miss something or am i not imagining things. Would love to hear your input about this. Or the debunk :ROFLMAO:
 
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JJJ84 said:
You mean this scene here?
From the current update?

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Okay so it's more floating than flying.


Klopdwerg said:
Just did a quick search and couldn't find any post about it.

Am i the only one who thinks Ghostraven is Riley?
Same figure and body details. Ghostraven states that she can't babysit MC for obvious reason and the final trigger for me was the look between Lady Steel and Riley when they teleported home and MC is greeted by Parker.

Did i miss something or am i not imagining things. Would love to hear your input about this. Or the debunk :ROFLMAO:
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I didn't even think about that.

That seems to make sense.
 
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I prefer virgin female characters in games too, that you can corrupt and share. Doesn't really work if they ho around already. No fun in that.
But in real life that's an insane thing to try and find. People have lives before you met them.
If a dev wants to have female characters that have had partners before the MC that's fine.
I agree with the Parker comments and I agree with many things people have said about this game for sure.
But yeah it is what it is I guess. Dev said they have 20 chapters pre written, let them cook I guess. They might be overestimating their writing ability, many devs here do, some of them actually have real writing ability and makes me not even care about the porn aspects. This game currently doesn't do that, but hey. who knows later maybe.
 
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Compiling all the story's info regarding Evelyn's power...
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Anyways, just putting this out there for anyone that wants to discuss in more detail.

Regards.
 
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MrBenny said:
Compiling all the story's info regarding Evelyn's power...
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Anyways, just putting this out there for anyone that wants to discuss in more detail.

Regards.
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damn, seems you didn't pick lesbian-variant 3some
 
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Amazing example on a completely different note a lot of entertainment recently has been focusing on preaching to the audience instead of focusing on the story and enjoyment (Hollywood specially Disney, video games journalism) been losing a lot of money because as you can guess people don't like to be told what they should think and this dev is preaching in his Adult visual novel instead of engaging story you get to listen to Woke boring ideas, that is why there are games that came almost as long as this and are more popular even though this game look better.
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Dude, I'm conservative as fuck and I find her viewpoint 100% agreeable. You don't have to be a feminist to acknowledge that there are some basement lurkers that fantasize about women exactly like that. Besides, I don't think that scene was meant to be some commentary on society. I think that was a very pointed criticism by the dev of a very specific group of malcontents on F95 that leave flamewars and groans everywhere they go.
 
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MixQQ said:
damn, seems you didn't pick lesbian-variant 3some
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Ya, I'm not a fan of it. And I went with avoiding MC's first time sex with Moon, as it shows Evelyn MC cares and has respect for her (that route avoids hurting her feeling...and you still get solo sex with both girls).

Also Evelyn shows how much effort she did practicing on her toys...to please MC.
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Aaaah shit, JJJ84 post, here we go. I will only be answering certain questions ;)

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You may be correct.

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Yepyep, Lady Steel will be a big part of upcoming chapters and I love her a lot. You may be bang on the money with your assessment of her ;).

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Yep, each of them will have their "getting to know you" moments... including Emerald.

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Nowhere near as advanced as the danger room, but yes, there will be training.

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All powers pretty much bang on except the duplication is not Marina... Cat is the duplicator. You'll find out what both Cat & Marina are about in Chapter 4.

And side note, Isabella will return in the future.

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I mean, I'm not ruling anything out yet but there's a few I'd probably consider too OP. I won't name them though. Fun to keep people guessing what's coming (and what isn't).

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Profiles is not found on the main menu. It's a tiny semi-transparent icon top right of the screen. It's not anything super in depth, literally name, alias (if any), age, power, a picture of them, a LI/side girl status icon and a link to a special render gallery (for some of them).
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Thanks again for you comments :)
 
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JJJ84

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Klopdwerg said:
Just did a quick search and couldn't find any post about it.

Am i the only one who thinks Ghostraven is Riley?
Same figure and body details. Ghostraven states that she can't babysit MC for obvious reason and the final trigger for me was the look between Lady Steel and Riley when they teleported home and MC is greeted by Parker.

Did i miss something or am i not imagining things. Would love to hear your input about this. Or the debunk :ROFLMAO:
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Well, I don't mean any offense when I say this, but I hope you're wrong about that.

Cause, if that's the case, ngl, I'll be really disappointed.
Part of the big appeal (well for me), of Ghostraven was her hair (the long, natural purple hair, I really, really dig) and the fact that her character is someone who is a stranger to MC's character.

If it just turns out to be it was Riley in a wig or a Ghostraven disguise with the whole "I've been watching you all along." stepsis-stepbro relationship, I'd seriously consider Ghostraven's characterization a downgrade.

Not saying stepbro-stepsis relationship is all bad, it could be great in some cases, but in Ghostraven's case, I'd say it's far better off to have her as a total stranger whom MC gets to know from a clean slate instead of the whole "I thought I knew you, but I didn't know you" as well as "I've been protecting you because you're my stepbro" reasoning (those kind of backstories, I feel like I've seen in other AVNs or other media before, and I'm hoping for something much more original reasoning than that).
 
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The first page says that in later chapters the MC will be able to make more choices. What chapter is this game on now?

Also, it says MC can decide to be a hero or a villain. How villainous can we be? Because he also says he isn't interested in adding any 'hard' BDSM, so where is the 'bad guy potential' located?
 
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