VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Only a Dream [v2024-02-23] [tightbuns]

It’s a short and straightforward game. Just a heads up, you play as a FMC (female main character). There’s not much in terms of story (yeah there is some kind of supernatural stuff going on in the story but i don't consider it as a story yet as the game ends before we even get into it, talking for 2024-02-23 version); it’s designed more for fapping. Maybe the story will develop in the future, but for now, it veers away from bestiality and welcomes you with vanilla sex. Other than that, like I said, it’s a short game ideal for a one-night fap session.

Great little game.
Stream of consciousness listing of things I like:

- So, so refreshing seeing something else than the usual stock Daz models. Someone actually took the bother to tweak a model into something unique.
- And as such, the span of Maddie's facial expressions is great (and hilarious)
- Lighting and posing is excellent.
- The Dev jumping in as narrator with snarky comments here and there is new, and actually fun.
- The concept of a VN with occasional minigames and click-to-find-something is novel, but works to break up what would otherwise be the space-read-space-read... routine (Dixon minigame was absolutely hilarious)
- Dialogue is light hearted and funny.
- And, last but not least; Maddie is a sexy freak, my kind of gal'. So the sexytimes content was right up my alley.

Very much looking forward to the follow up.

For a very short story, the game has all it needs. It does not jump to action - even though it does in a way . You are not only a horny little girl, but there is something to discover, even several things:

For a short story, the story is quite deep. The visuals are nice and especially the composition of the pictures and the short "animations" are great. The games keeps its sex-pace and does not delay uneccessary.

Of course, you cannot demand features of a big game, so the 5 stars are only counting in this category.

Only downfall: The climax is a little more tame than the build up and it ends with a longer conversation without hot scenes. Godd if you are in for it because of the story, but a little disappointing if you were looking for something else . But a thousand times better than many stories because the story here feels almost complete.

The game is indeed short, I would say it's about a 15-minute journey. The game tries adds 2 minigames to make it feel less empty. The Visuals are decent, but there isn't really any storey. You're basically just a horny girl. It's definitely worth a try, tho.

This is a little gem: nice and well characters, the plot is well developed and the graphics are really good, including the naughty ones . I understand that, despite the game has already the "Completed" status, there is more to come and I'm eager to discover what

Good sex scenes, good characters, good renders and models an possibly an interesting plot.

Not giving it 5 stars because it's too short and above all because I would've enjoyed it more without the bestiality and animal abuse part.

Nice short game. The renders are super hot and well made. It lightly touches on a few different fetishes but doesn't get very extreme. The title image might be a bit misleading for some because there is only sex between the two main characters, but what we do get is pretty hot.

The two mini games are about the right difficulty and duration, IMO. It's interesting to have some different gameplay but some games forget that people play for the eroticism and don't want frustrating or lengthy mini-games. That said, the mini-games aren't really erotic in nature but the themes do at least tie into the story.

However, the game doesn't overstay its welcome. The story comes to a logical stopping point and gives just enough story and sex to leave you wanting more without feeling cheated or blue-balled.

I'm also really happy to see the dev is listening to feedback but seems to be planning to largely stick with this format (which works!). It's hard to strike a balance between accepting constructive feedback and not compromising the vision, so I wish them luck.

Version played: Completed

Pretty good game, wish it was longer. Interesting mini-games that were well done.

The reason I took a star off is that Maddie's face can look a little strange at times. I think she's pretty cute overall, and I get having some extreme expressions, but sometimes it's too much. Of course, facial expressions seem to be pretty difficult, so this an outstanding effort for the dev's first game.

Short but sweet, no animations but the render's are good enough that I didn't mind. I will say that it doesn't really feel like a complete game as the outro heavily implies there's more to the story (hopefully a sequel?).

One specific thing I gotta give credit on is the attention payed to Maddie's asshole. I feel like in most games the asshole is just tacked on because it's supposed to be there, but doesn't really get emphasized much unless there's an anal scene. Maddie's asshole is heavily emphasized and is constantly flexing whenever she's stimulated which is really hot and not something I think I've seen in other 3d games.

I came for the bestiality tag, but I didn't.
This because the content wasn't satisfactory.
However I did like this short VN, I didn't get to see all content as I failed perhaps intentionally the "fight"
The renders were great!

Based on: Completed

This really is well done... I could have done without the dog mini-game, but other wise it's really well done. The images are great, I loved the split screen and the animation is top notch.

Too bad it's so short.

Hope to see more from the developer.

Maddie is really hot and I love her horny attitude, the renders are really good too with lots of attention to detail, like Maddie kissing the cock after the bj or how she slowly dismounted his cock letting us see all the cum flow out of her.

This VN is pretty fun. Short, a bit weird, and I'm certainly curious to see a sequel.

Pros: The art is pretty hot (even if the MC's eyes are a smidge weird). The scene with the doggo was kinda fun (except.. see Cons) and would've liked more of that. The characters are pretty sweet and you generally like them (once you figure out what happened).

Cons: The doggo scene feels like a missed opportunity. Enough to make it in the genre, not enough to really collect on where it was going, and I'm not happy with the doggo being hit (even if seemingly not hurt). The minigames and small interactions seem to just be there to say this is a game (has interactions), not really for affecting anything in any meaningful way. Also, short.

Great job, I can't wait to see more from you! The story, the scenes, everything is top notch. My only suggestion with this particular game would be if the player can name the male character. Keep it up sir

Amazing quality. Like top notch renders with attention to detail.
Short kinda story but its fine. It has BGM,minigames it has what you would expect from a high quality +18 game honestly.
I hope you make a fully fledged game.

Good little effort on your first attempt! Nice little story but it has left you wanting more which, I suppose, is a good thing if you wanting to write a sequel. Who is this other character Norman (if I recall his name correctly)? What is happening to Anon's soul? The game was pointless trying to kick the dog's dick because there was no way you where going to stop it so he was going to get his wicked way but the poor bugger didn't knot Maddie... WTF!!!???
I would also suggest that when writing you use normal lettering, as you did, for speech. Use italics for when a character is thinking about something which I would guess Maddie was doing when talking to Anon's dick. Otherwise, if she is whispering then put... ***Whispering*** in front of the whispered speech.
Other than those little tips keep up the good work

v1.0-compressed

Great short porn story

Plot

• light humor, highly erotic
• horny af FMC
  • a lot of dick craving (lowkey worshipping) really is one of the hottest parts about this
  • lots of horny and ahegao-type faces
• majority of plot focuses on the chase for sex rather than a long sex scene
  • what it lacks in length it makes up for in a quality sex scene

Visual and Sound

• high graphic quality - great lighting and texture use
• unique FMC face, a bit derpy but i rather that than a generic one
• outdated dog model - it's overused in DAZ-render stories and looks bad
• graphic glitch: black lines on hand in maddie_shower_shock png files
• no real animation but the 2-frame style is better than no animation at all
• incorporates sfx for some parts
  • spank sfx doesn't sound anything like it should

Other

• the 2 minigames are a fine addition to shake things up a bit but is a little tedious
• consistent scripted auto-forward - if you like the game to pace itself

I have a strong bias for sleep sex, especially when the female is the one taking the initiative and if she is horny af - so this game scratches an itch although I wish it was longer!!!! The small but distracting enough issues come from the technical side. Otherwise I would love to see more from this dev. Quality work and no time wasting BS imo

This game is 11/10! render quality is top notch, the history is pretty entertaining and the minigames are hilarious.

Straigh on subbed to your patreon. Please keep them coming dev, preferibly with larger scope and more besty content

fun little story, on rails for the most part, but as a first sample of what he can do, is amazing. resolutions and graphic bulk in renpy causes mild lagging issues, but that's more of a problem due to the engine than anything else imo.

Its short. But it's hot. The girl is super hot. And super thirsty. And she manifests her thirst on her neighbor boy. Its so very much better than it needs to be. Dev has some real talent. I'm guessing this is a bit of a dry run to flex some rendering and coding muscles. I'm very much looking forward to what he works on next.