VN - Ren'Py - Completed - One Aggressive Futa Step Sister [v1.03] [Zelltin]

The game's characters are pretty original, and the dialogue is engaging without dragging on, that's definitely a win there. However, the storyline isn't very deep. The adult content is solid, especially the scenes featuring futa, like waking up together after a steamy night. I enjoyed it, but the game is too short, only lasting about 15-20 minutes. Currently, there's just one adult scene, but it's well done. I'd recommend giving it a shot if you're looking for something quick that includes futa content.

Renders are pretty solid. Hanna's pretty hot. Zack, on the other hand, is super-effeminate. Somehow, he's the polar opposite of androgynous. Androgynous people are hard to discern because they don't have features that make them obviously male or female... Zack on the other hand has both a decent cock (which you can see when Hanna flips him on his back for a side fuck... though it's nowhere close to the size of the third arm Hanna's carrying between her legs) while also having a B-cup (this can also be seen when Hanna flips him over on his back for a side fuck... those aren't pecs--they're too rounded).

Additionally, Zack is such a babyface that he almost looks underage despite being in college. Hanna's got him dead to rights... Zack is a bitch boy, and boy will she ever make him her bitch. He finally proves how much of a bitch he was the whole time when he admits to the audience that his dildo will not have prepared him for this event!

Now, I'm not saying an Zack can't have a dildo--and as far as MCs go, he looks like the type who might would have a dildo--but he can't be playing with a dildo and be pining for this girl he's known for six fucking years unless he knows she's either a futa or a dominatrix on the side. Though you would think either of those things would get a mention somewhere along the way, so I'm guessing those aren't canon. I guess my point is: This is too much.

I give it three stars, and those are only coming from the renders (there aren't many, and there's zero animations, explains why the downloaded archive was a gargantuan 91MB /sarcasm). There's just not a real story here to speak of. There was a single moment at the bathroom door 30-seconds into the gameplay intended to tell the audience that there is a futa in the house... and tomorrow night, she's gonna come barreling through that ensuite door and break down Zack's asshole like the Kool-Aid Man, oh yeah! That's it, that's the whole story. That's... a really bad porn writeup.

Not saying she can't fuck him at some point, just that it shouldn't be such a clearly lifted-from-a-porn-scene kind of work. Zack makes it too easy and Hanna's too hard-up for it from the get. This premise had the makings of a story 10k lines and all we got was a quick 10k words? Disappointed with that.

The dev mentions in their thanks that they might consider adding to the story, but what more can you add?

Setup: Oh look, Hanna has a large penis. Wonder what she'll do with it...
Confrontation: Oh look, Hanna's large penis is... in my room. Wonder what she'll do wit--ow, wai... oh!
Resolution: Hanna's large penis is... still in my room? i guess this is my life now.

You want more story, it's going to require a rewrite/reboot. Don't make the title so obvious, don't make the setup so obvious. Give us tension. Not that kind of tension. Okay, maybe that kind of tension. Does Ashley mean something to the story? Is she a closet futa that the MC found out about? Does she invoke a sense of dominance that the MC fantasizes about subbing to? How about other girls? Is MC the only bitch boy Hanna has an interest in or has she been weighing her options? Is she interested in deflowering virgin girls or does she only have a thing for pounding out Debussy's Clair de Lune (Debussy? Bussy? Oh, yeah... I got jokes). Just how big is that dildo of his? These are questions that need to be answered long before Hanna shoves that Bad Dragon™-sized monster down his throat.

... and once she does, there need to be consequences (good or bad). Does this affect the family dynamic? Maybe Jane already knows. Was Jane just being nice with breakfast, or was she trying to buy loyalty to her and her futa daughter? Notice she didn't break down the door to his room despite how obscenely loud they were? Does the MC still pine for Ashley after this? Can Ashley be incorporated into this relationship in some way? Maybe they'll both be subs? Maybe Ashley will tag-team the MC with Hanna (either with a second futa cock or with a strap-on as a dominant). Is there a long-term to this story? This story could easily be a multiple chapter affair, and male protagonist / futa domination isn't really a well-covered niche, so there's probably room for it here.

... but until it gets a revamp, it's three stars.

PS: The paper airplane tattoo is cute, I've never seen that before and this isn't my first VN.

Good game. Content is little but beautiful . Renders are awesome. Flow of the game is excellent. I want to see more aggressive Futa content like it. I was searching for FUTA fucking boys. This is one of the master piece with small content

short but super hot! Highly recommend if you are into it

was slightly hesitant at first but super glad I gave it a try. The models are amazing and it all just looks super great. Definitley looking forward to more releases from zelltin!

Did i miss something? its says 0.91 but the game is quite short for that number.
Id rate it 4/5 because gorgeous futa, quality renders, good grammar, but the dialog & quick change between scenes wasnt very immersive. MC looks like a dandy, not sure if its the correct term for it. Not very sympathetic, just overly soft and pampered. His behavior is not overconfident quite the opposite but his resting face still gives that dandy vibe. I guess making a femboy isnt easy.
Game has potential. If the dialog was made to flow a bit better, not much but a few extra lines that detail movements and feelings. No... scrap that, there is enough of that most places. The writing style is a bit direct and simplistic and operates with common porn tropes in between a few lines that actually express the pacticulars of the situations and personalities originally. MC being afraid / insecure about a big cock & sex is quickly overridden when they get into it, other situations are similarly simple and quickly changing and therefore hard to get into. Idk how am I supposed to feel about the friend/crush , one moment he fears asking her out on a meetup, next it seems hanging out at eachothers place would be natural, next shes forgotten because step sis appears. I think the frame is there, but his dilemma of thinking of her in a different way wasnt expressed very well and then stepsis pushyness about stealing him also wasnt expressed well, just enough to understand something like that is going on.
I wish stepsis would bully him more physically before the first sexual encounter. I could ramble on endlessly but im not sure it would be more helpful than the previous examples. I think its worth polishing, visuals are great and i do hope to see where the story goes.

Wish the current episode would have been a bit longer, but otherwise, I think this will probably turn out to be a good AVN. I liked the step-sister character. Looks like she has a "huge" bonus going for her. Looking forward to the next episode. Good job.

v0.91

Everyday i sink further and further in depravity, Slaneesh would be proud of me. Sometimes i feel discovering F95zone was a mistake. I went from being a stranger to the whole futa thing, to playing futa games now. Am i sick?

Anyways, this feels more of a demo. Pretty short. I hope it will turn into a full fledge VN with a good plot. Theres definitely potential, premise is there and the characters all look great except the MC. Not into sissy content. Hopefully dev goes more towards the futa step sis seducing, babying and corrupting the MC instead of pure dom storyline.

It's super short and there is no buildup at all, neither to the relationships nor the plot. Secondary characters are there but serve no purpose. There is no plot either. It's basically a porn scene with a little flavor. But you can play it in under five minutes, so there is that.

really short but hot futa on male game so gonna be a short review

even though the game is short it's really well made and hot the models are really good her dick looks massive but also not unrealistically big just really pushed to the limit the story is simple but good the characters are decent but kinda flat but that's to be expected with how short the game is

i would have liked it a bit longer but aside from that it's really good and gave me a hentai futa on male manga or doujinshi vibe if you know you know

all in all great little game my only complaint is that it's a bit to short but that's it and i guess i wish the blowjob was longer and had more angles with more variation but those are my only 2 complaints and doesn't ruin the game at all

i wish all futa games where like this hell all porn games in general where like this just simple fun and hot with good to great characters and not a overly complicated story and characters 9/10 almost perfect

When I said there's smoke in the air but stove still hot after hours of dimmed, that means you know what it's about to happened next.
This game is primarily example of that; where you see it, forewarned (in a goodway) for what's about unveils next even though your totally aware of it. Loves the character design and build up moments even it's a short game play.
I'll like to see the more extended version and would be excited for what this game holds in future updates!

short, sweet and hot!

I didn't expect much out of <100mb file size, but the art was good and the story did what it needed to do to make you care about the characters before the fun bits. I hope to see longer, narrative focused stories out of this developer instead of shorter, succint stories like this