Art is alright. Not really my things but that's alright. The story though. Man. This is absolutely terrible. Basically the boyfriend (the MC) just found out his girl loves reading NTR manga. She disappeared at the convention for a long ass time and he doesn't put two and two together. I shouldn't say doesn't because he can, but that ends the game instantly. So the only option the reader has is to have him literally ignore all of the evidence that she is indeed cheating on him. This is to the point of absurdity. Literally watching it in front of his face with a Chad who claims that the MC is taking photos of the Chad's girlfriend (Yuki, the MC's girlfriend). This start when he literally sees his girlfriend walk down a hallway in make-up, disappears, and suddenly there's a girl dressed in the exact outfit that would match her make-up and her body type getting railed. And instead of walking down and checking it out he sits back and watches it too afraid to approach because, "what if it's not her." If it's not the only thing you've done is ruined someone else's day. Tough. What the ... anyway. This eventually leads to the MC taking photos of a cosplay model the Chad claims is his own girlfriend. She's conveniently got a blindfold on, the exact same makeup and body. And at no point do the MC ask, "could I see your face, I just like to look someone in the eyes when I meet them." But no, this is "the ruse" and the MC is dumbest man on the planet.
Look if you're into NTR this isn't a comment against you. You do you, mate. Seriously, not judgement here. But this story is so bad, even in the NTR space, it's unreal. And that's the problem. It's literally unbelievable. Nothing here give the suspension of disbelief. The idea that anyone would be so gullible as to not put these pieces together is simply just not possible. It would be one thing if this guy was into it and was intentionally setting up these situations to get off on his girl's infidelity, but that's absolutely not the case here. He can't force the issue at any point all to get her to admit it and the MC absolutely refuses to acknowledge the egging feeling that he's missing something here. You are never given the scenario of the MC learning about it and discovering he's actually into it, which could result in him banging Yuki better than he's ever be capable of before. Making for a hot scene where he treats her like the slut she is.
Unfortunately, this is actually worse than most of the cucking games out there in the VN space (which GD there are a lot), only in this the MC isn't able to even watch a large chunk of what's being done to him so the reader misses out too. What's the point then. So how can this be fixed? Make the MC smart instead of frustratingly stupid. Let him figure it out fairly quickly and try to set up his girlfriend. Actually having him follow her. When he finds out she's been cucking him allow the reader to decide "am I okay with this or not?" If they choose "yes" have this become his kink. Wanting to see his girl get railed by some other guy. Using that as his sexual motivation when he sleeps with her. Next, have the MC set her up with other guys for a porn site he's started to fund their cosplay, travel and expenses. All of this while she has no clue he's in on the scheme. Have him watch from a distance in another hotel room with hidden cams to catch it all while he engages in his own fun. Whether that be with another girl or not should be up to the reader, but this could be done at the conventions they visit, hotels they stay in, after parties, restrooms, whatever. Then have her find out what he's been doing and see how she reacts. Does she accept it, take responsibility for her actions as well, put a stop to her affairs or does she help bring in more talent for their games? This should be based on whether she feels the MC has been paying attention to her needs as well. If she accepts what she's done and what he's done she could approach him with either another man to bang her in front of him or a fellow cosplayer to fuck him in front of her. Testing herself if she could handle what he's endured watching what she's been doing.
Anyway, this is just an idea. Feel free to use it. I won't mind in the least. The problem with most NTR NVs is the lack of substance to the stories beyond just cheating. And having the MC be so gullible is just tragic. It's like asking a couple to unlock their phones and switch them for an hour, the guy says "sure" but the his girl refuses and this goomba just says, "nah, it's fine. There's no way she has anything on there that'll jeopardize our relationship." Living in ignorance is one thing. This is willful ignorance. The MC is afraid of loosing this girl so bad he'll just ignore all the signs because she let's him touch her, which happens less and less in this story btw. The month long no sex because of a bet she made with her Chad lover was absolutely obscene. This isn't some old couple who have lost their sexual drive for one another. What man would put up with that shit? Evidently this wet rag. And the more she's banged outside of their relationship the less the MC gets laid from Yuki whom he banged three times in a row within the first ten minutes of the opening. Come on, no man wouldn't question this.
But with all that said, this game wasn't terrible. I've definitely seen worse, but this is by far one of the worst stories I've ever pushed myself to finish. And it's literally the MC's lack of intelligence and unwillingness to scheme as well. But this is clearly not for me. I still wish the Dev the best of luck and I genuinely hope for their success. If you like this title don't let my opinion change you outlook and show the dev some support by becoming a contributor. Write your own review. Point out the things you like and/or the things you'd change.
Look if you're into NTR this isn't a comment against you. You do you, mate. Seriously, not judgement here. But this story is so bad, even in the NTR space, it's unreal. And that's the problem. It's literally unbelievable. Nothing here give the suspension of disbelief. The idea that anyone would be so gullible as to not put these pieces together is simply just not possible. It would be one thing if this guy was into it and was intentionally setting up these situations to get off on his girl's infidelity, but that's absolutely not the case here. He can't force the issue at any point all to get her to admit it and the MC absolutely refuses to acknowledge the egging feeling that he's missing something here. You are never given the scenario of the MC learning about it and discovering he's actually into it, which could result in him banging Yuki better than he's ever be capable of before. Making for a hot scene where he treats her like the slut she is.
Unfortunately, this is actually worse than most of the cucking games out there in the VN space (which GD there are a lot), only in this the MC isn't able to even watch a large chunk of what's being done to him so the reader misses out too. What's the point then. So how can this be fixed? Make the MC smart instead of frustratingly stupid. Let him figure it out fairly quickly and try to set up his girlfriend. Actually having him follow her. When he finds out she's been cucking him allow the reader to decide "am I okay with this or not?" If they choose "yes" have this become his kink. Wanting to see his girl get railed by some other guy. Using that as his sexual motivation when he sleeps with her. Next, have the MC set her up with other guys for a porn site he's started to fund their cosplay, travel and expenses. All of this while she has no clue he's in on the scheme. Have him watch from a distance in another hotel room with hidden cams to catch it all while he engages in his own fun. Whether that be with another girl or not should be up to the reader, but this could be done at the conventions they visit, hotels they stay in, after parties, restrooms, whatever. Then have her find out what he's been doing and see how she reacts. Does she accept it, take responsibility for her actions as well, put a stop to her affairs or does she help bring in more talent for their games? This should be based on whether she feels the MC has been paying attention to her needs as well. If she accepts what she's done and what he's done she could approach him with either another man to bang her in front of him or a fellow cosplayer to fuck him in front of her. Testing herself if she could handle what he's endured watching what she's been doing.
Anyway, this is just an idea. Feel free to use it. I won't mind in the least. The problem with most NTR NVs is the lack of substance to the stories beyond just cheating. And having the MC be so gullible is just tragic. It's like asking a couple to unlock their phones and switch them for an hour, the guy says "sure" but the his girl refuses and this goomba just says, "nah, it's fine. There's no way she has anything on there that'll jeopardize our relationship." Living in ignorance is one thing. This is willful ignorance. The MC is afraid of loosing this girl so bad he'll just ignore all the signs because she let's him touch her, which happens less and less in this story btw. The month long no sex because of a bet she made with her Chad lover was absolutely obscene. This isn't some old couple who have lost their sexual drive for one another. What man would put up with that shit? Evidently this wet rag. And the more she's banged outside of their relationship the less the MC gets laid from Yuki whom he banged three times in a row within the first ten minutes of the opening. Come on, no man wouldn't question this.
But with all that said, this game wasn't terrible. I've definitely seen worse, but this is by far one of the worst stories I've ever pushed myself to finish. And it's literally the MC's lack of intelligence and unwillingness to scheme as well. But this is clearly not for me. I still wish the Dev the best of luck and I genuinely hope for their success. If you like this title don't let my opinion change you outlook and show the dev some support by becoming a contributor. Write your own review. Point out the things you like and/or the things you'd change.
