To be brutally honest since you asked... I was bored!
01) The screen, portrait, is annoying but I suppose that makes it easier to play on a mobile, I am on a PC.
02) There is no 'back' option so if you missed a scene then tough shit.
03) No 'save' option so you couldn't try a different path from a certain point, you have to play the entire game again.
04) Obviously English is not your first language because you need to understand when to use him, he, his and her, she, hers and also I, me and mine.
05) The script (or story) was very pointed, I felt like I was in a meeting with a PowerPoint presentation.
06) The sex scene could have been clickable to move through it a lot faster.
Valiant effort but take the above into consideration. What I wish a lot of newbies would do is work with some of the big game producers even if doing it for free and then gain some tutelage and experience from them.
I hope this helps.