Sorry to the dev. I only made it to where you sit down with the family for breakfast. I just couldn't get around the MC looking like he's 12.
So on to the review.
PROS
Animations were decent
Renders are ok
The ladies look good
CONS
I just couldn't get past the MC looking like he was 12.
Overall
To me, I like a VN where the MC is at least as tall as the other people you interact with. It takes away from the emersion of the story and how you interact with the other characters.
The writing from what little I did actually read was decent enough.
The only critic that I have is maybe make the MC look like an 18 yr old young man, or at least make him taller. You can still have the nerdy look on someone that is bigger than 4 feet tall. Only my suggestion. Maybe start the VN off without the landlady already looking like a slut. Build up to the change with characters. You don't want to make it easy for the MC to get his way with corruption or turning the women into sluts. Make us desire the change.
These are only my thoughts and opinions.
I wish the dev good luck with this project.
So on to the review.
PROS
Animations were decent
Renders are ok
The ladies look good
CONS
I just couldn't get past the MC looking like he was 12.
Overall
To me, I like a VN where the MC is at least as tall as the other people you interact with. It takes away from the emersion of the story and how you interact with the other characters.
The writing from what little I did actually read was decent enough.
The only critic that I have is maybe make the MC look like an 18 yr old young man, or at least make him taller. You can still have the nerdy look on someone that is bigger than 4 feet tall. Only my suggestion. Maybe start the VN off without the landlady already looking like a slut. Build up to the change with characters. You don't want to make it easy for the MC to get his way with corruption or turning the women into sluts. Make us desire the change.
These are only my thoughts and opinions.
I wish the dev good luck with this project.