Ren'Py - Abandoned - Love Instructor [v0.1.2] [Stoli]

graffics: AHHH MY EYES!!!! IS SO BRIGHT!!!!

characters: actually they are preety good.

draws (cg): good.

scenes (erotic ones): good.

story: is a meh... for now.

conclussion: the strongest point is the factor "revenge", YOU WANT to get revenge from this womens, and you also ( in a lower level) want to know wwhy they are, so mean with you. thats a interesting point in a game.
the story could be really well with , characters like this.

this story deserve your time.

[Rev @v0.1.0f1]
Good premise, but dat pacing is fuuuuuuuuucked.

Art's Honey Select, so good if samey.

Writing is weak, pacing is outright bad. Characterization is surprisingly strong given the rest. I ***HATE*** the POV MC. Dude is stuck in Dipshit territory spinnin his wheels goin nowhere. Natasha I actually liked.

No porn squicked me, cuz there isn't much.

TLDR: Get the renders done, then burn the plot and start over. Premise is strong but this early attempt is lacking. Good luck & Godspeed.

for a 0.1, this is looking like a great game. I don't understand the lower scores of some of the other reviews. This game has a really strong start, an inventive premise, great looking models, a good balance between narrative and dating sim gameplay. The dialogue never falls below decent, and is at times down right funny.

If you want a game with a nice balance between story and gameplay that doesnt force you to grind and doesn't take an hour to get to any good stuff, you should keep your eye on this.

If the creator can keep this level of quality up, this game will end up great.

Very impressive first version release, quite large with a lot of playable content. Artwork is lovely, and more than one or two characters are fun and engaging.
True, the overall premise is flimsy and stretches believable. True, a couple of girls are quick to say yes to a poke, but it is also true several others are most definitely slower.
All in all I think it shows great promise. I really enjoyed working through v0.1, and I'm looking forward to see what is next.

2 sex scenes and you dont even see dick going into pussy, only 2 bodies rubbing against each other, that is soooo terrible, I would not even call it a sex scene... for me thats the worst mistake you can make as a Dev, sex scense where you dont see any sex, so the vaginal sex scene tag should be removed, cause you dont see it. So I think 1 star is generous.

The story is good, the girls look really nice and the animations looks really nice too, but you animate worthless stuff. A mistake too many make, such a shame... Really hope this wil be fixed, other vice the game is not worth playing at all, since you dont see any sex.

If all first releases were as good as this we'd be a lucky bunch! It is an easy to follow plot line with varied amount of girls to play with Although It would be nice if they didn't drop the pants at a drop of a hat! So i'm giving the Dev 4*'s due to the amount of game play he's given us.

Review as of 0.1.

At first, I wanted to send Natasha to mental institution and be done with it, but then I thought, maybe it won't be that bad.

Well, it isn't. This could be a nice "Get em' All" comedy considering the dev seems to be capable to write one, but thus far it falls short. I don't know the scope of this game, but with the current lightning speed pacing, it looks like it will be finished by v.0.3. In my opinion, toning down the lewd aspect and upping the comedy one would make it a lot better.

Now, the plot itself is just pointless. It goes without saying that the player will generally try get every girl available. I don't think it's something that needs to have a quest giver or advisor. Makes the MC look just like a pawn in a perverted non-sensical scheme. Is this a good way to build a harem fantasy? I don't think it is.

THE GOOD:
- Good visuals
- Good variety of girls
- Somewhat humorous.

THE BAD:
- The plot is too silly.
- Natasha is downright creepy.
- Pacing. The game throws girls at MC too quickly.

THE UGLY:
- Nothing really.