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[Ren'Py] [VN] Little Man [v0.1 Demo] [Mr. Rabbit]

Discussion in 'Games' started by N7, Sep 11, 2018.

[Ren'Py] [VN] Little Man [v0.1 Demo] [Mr. Rabbit] 5 5 2votes
5/5, 2 votes

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  1. Tweaker69

    Tweaker69 Member

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    I was being obtuse for shits and giggles. I'm glad I wasn't the only one laughing for a change :)

    I played the game for 20 minutes, but it ended up being about 6 minutes of hitting the take a nap button, 6 minutes of searching every room, 6 minutes of trying to talk to people who either had nothing to say to me or couldn't be bothered, and 2 minutes of appreciating the art including a handjob animation. I'd kinda like the 18 minutes I spent fruitlessly searching back...

    @Mr.Rabbit - I really enjoyed the intro and the artwork. I do think there needs to be some guiding factors to avoid walking and searching all over the place only to find disappointment. Maybe color an arrow, and outline a map location if and only if there is a new conversation or event to happen there. Also, I'm assuming the demo ends after I get a "bedtime story", since then "Mom's" affection drops to zero and nothing seems to change after several days of interaction... The teacher seems to have zero content, as well. Please let the player know that they've reached the end of the content for a specific character. I (and your future patrons) will thank you super hard for that.
     
  2. anschwww

    anschwww Well-Known Member

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    like:
    the art, reminds me to snow daze
    ren'py
    story / Characters

    dislike:
    the rest :D it's more a "napping simulation"
    navigation could be improved (or at least bigger arrows)
    more alternatives for time skipping (TV,...) - i'm pretty sure, there will be more in the future, but for now the naps are annoying ;)
    and generally more possibilities to do stuff in the world.
     
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  3. firetemplar415

    firetemplar415 Member

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    I agree wholeheartedly with this post.
    I also want to add that there are many grammatical errors throughout the intro to his new home with MILFY new mom.
     
  4. misterSS

    misterSS New Member

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    fuck yes more shota
     
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  5. PeggyBlackett

    PeggyBlackett Active Member

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  6. WaerM

    WaerM Active Member

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    is there nothing to do besides napping?
    How does school work ?
    doesn't proress time and I can't seem to talk to Molly :/
     
  7. Mr.Rabbit

    Mr.Rabbit New Member Game Developer

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    Thanks for the feedback, all this is already being taken into account for the next build. :)


    Yes, there will be other things to pass the time, a way to make money, and missions in which it will be necessary to use this money ... Some leisure objects ... no more napping, unless you want to haha



    Yes, it's not my native language, I have to find someone to help me with this...


    It's never too much.

    Yes, Molly has no content in this build, for now.

     
  8. kkraftpunk

    kkraftpunk Member

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    Awesome game guys i like what i see already
     
  9. Rhinon

    Rhinon New Member

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    Can't wait to see more
     
  10. sagela

    sagela Active Member

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    More ss is always welcomed o/
     
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  11. tanningchatum

    tanningchatum New Member

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    IS THAT "SLIPPIN" JIMMY MCGILL AS YOUR LAWYER? That's it, instant 5 star game.
     
  12. Raerngaming

    Raerngaming Member

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    It really need to have you do more things after all you nap most of the time, talk just a little at the house and once she gets you off the relationship meter drops back down, In school you have nothing to say to Molly just class and that about it.
     
  13. StroheimGargle

    StroheimGargle New Member

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  14. Gabs

    Gabs New Member

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    esse jogo promete!!
     
  15. Arius Zauber

    Arius Zauber Member

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    What are the planned fetishes for this game, like footjob or sleeping for example ?
     
  16. MegamanMegas

    MegamanMegas Member

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    Glowing Golden Approval from Jotaro Kujo.

     
  17. Mr.Rabbit

    Mr.Rabbit New Member Game Developer

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    Thanks :)

    Me too... stay tuned for the next update. :)

    Always

    Hell Yeah!!!

    Thanks for playing, we are improving all of this, stay tuned for the next update ;)

    Not now ... maybe in the future.


    [​IMG]




     
  18. sdibolcrif

    sdibolcrif Active Member

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    Please tell me the kid has more expressions than the one in all the screenshots... that thin smile and soulless eyes are the stuff of nightmares :p
     
  19. Mr.Rabbit

    Mr.Rabbit New Member Game Developer

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    Yes, he has, in the dialogues he has a variation of seven expressions, the scene was a problem that went unnoticed. :test: