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jpsimon

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Apr 3, 2017
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Adding the interracial tag. This wasn't obvious in the earlier release that only showed the main character's hands, and the daughter just looked Mediterranean. 3DCG is known for messed up skin tones, so I didn't think anything of it. The new release makes me pretty sure this is a generic porn plot (petite blonde haired girl lusting after the BBC of the rich black businessman). Not that there's anything wrong with that. You'd never know if they didn't show his legs in one of the new shots. And even then, I'm still not 100% sure that the leg shot wasn't just badly rendered and the main character is white.

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User_10739

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The free version takes less than a minute to play, very disappointing!
 
May 31, 2017
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This demo version ... I have to wonder if this is simply to see if there is any interest in the story so that he can decide what to put time into.

So far the plot is unbeleivable
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seden

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Just in case, the point of start is not always (by far) the beginning as to relationship/interaction. As to why + how the mentioned "spoiler" happened, there could be quite some paths leading to this. Of course, its very different dependant of where (country, adults, education, individual sensibility etc).
Seduction then, .. Mental or even totally unbalanced treks are possibles, such are the girl knowing the Guy before the start, having him as (being close + known, as incest if a barrier, it happen quite often (The anime portraying child age relationship, sic). So, no worry as to the lack so far, it start heavy and so what ?
What would be interesting is how it is handled afterwards, from education to clear manipulation, the paths are quite open from there on.

There also the 18 limit, as to both legal (quite a topic there) and social views, does matter.
 
May 31, 2017
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@seden

I'm aware that there are possible plots for this story to explore beyond the seduction, but how much plot do you honestly think there will be? When you remove the seduction, you have the period of enjoyment where we see the relationship grow, sex scenes galore. after that, possibly marriage, or daughter involvement (she's underage, so doubt it), then what?

I wasn't saying at all that there is no story to be told at this point or that there wasnt some back story that happened before the story begins. the problem becomes ... where do you go from here?
 

seden

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Life is not linear ;)

There are any type of events who can happen, from the ones originating from humans to the mechanicals ones and of course others (natural, artificial, combinations) etc.

Then, where to go, if an example is required, it could evolve as he/she discover a kink, as the track for any as several steps before the best starting point. Or, as she is not legally at all linked to him, she has relatives (or not, then, friends or others relationships ?) who would also weight one way of another (if she disappear without warning, its an alert signal for nearly anybody).

In any case, its up to the game designer to see what to do with the story, as it is, his choice is not a bad one as most will look to the quality of a sex scene as to define the linked interest (graphics, animations, every detail count).
 
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User_10739

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Porno appears to have put on a clinic on how destroy a game with this one. I played the demo and liked it, you have the girl bonding with the daughter building herself as a suitable replacement for the dead mother and I expected a slow burn building romance.

Jump forward to the free edition and from where the demo leaves off, this girl turns into an absolute slushbag! I mean if I was the MC and she starts getting naked around the apartment with my little daughter home, I would be unhappy and about the time she pulls out my dick telling me that she has been "practising with the boys at school" just before jamming it down her throat, I would be dragging her ass to her room and telling her to pack up her things and get the fuck out...

Like honestly she turned 18 that day and couldn't save herself while dreaming of marrying the MC and being a role model to the little girl that loves her so much?
 
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RatherPervy

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May 25, 2017
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Wow, that was disappointing. A bit of nice art with some very strange inner dialogue and a big whorish FU of a Patreon plug at the end. Not worth the DL.
Personally, I hate Patreon. Beyond the difficulties I have had with the pay system, the whole monthly payment for support thing doesn't work well with new and amateur game designers. Well organized dev teams can put out a steady enough flow of material to justify the monthly subscriptions, but single and especially newer writers do great at making a demo and then after a couple of months hit a slowdown and end up having to make microscopic or buggy releases to keep their subscribers happy, or missing releases/ disappearing. I guess it happened with Offbeatr and other single pay support sites too, but at least you weren't spending money monthly while getting nothing.
Sorry bout the rant.
 
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lupy30

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Looks great hopefully he seduces daughter too. option add..

Hopeful premversion added hear.
 

AlphaWolf

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May 9, 2017
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it appear that he posted an update on his patreon page today.

Edit: Nevermind, He posted that he was done.
 
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