Bloodpoison

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Sep 20, 2018
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im just insta dying first night nonstop....

so im trying to use SugarCube.state.active.variables.{variable} to change stuff so i wont die but i have no idea what causing me to die since i do eat and drink, any idea?

also on another note is there a way to SugarCube stats Permanent?
like making Hunger stat stay full incase i dont want to eat?
 

RedRidingWolf

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Got the $money error after the maid job. Also stat inteligence is $intelligence after reading books in the university.
 

temporaryuser

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I mean, what do you expect? It's a first version. Don't be too harsh about it in that aspect. Every developer has a different interpretation of numbering their versions.

Really want to say to @BlackKnight6666 not to be discouraged by all the negative comments. You have a decent story and I'd like to see how you develop it. But you should either credit the sources you got your images from or state that they're temporary (if you plan on replacing them).
Man, its almost 1GB. I did expect kind of story?
 

moudy

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im just insta dying first night nonstop....

so im trying to use SugarCube.state.active.variables.{variable} to change stuff so i wont die but i have no idea what causing me to die since i do eat and drink, any idea?

also on another note is there a way to SugarCube stats Permanent?
like making Hunger stat stay full incase i dont want to eat?
I tried this game out but had to quit because it is full of bugs and my patience ran out.
Money changes to $Money, intelligence does the same thing and other stats as well almost every time they change. It's so full of bugs that you will need to constantly cheat or reset game/save just to get somewhere in this game..... kinda like Fallout 76 or Anthem.....
 

BlackKnight6666

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@Shadowhunter9:
You are right, a lot of images are from other games and I have plans to upgrade the images/videos etc. I can't give you an ETA, but I'll do my best.
The version is, as you said, very experimental. It's tested only by me and I am aware that they might be issues that I didn't found, problems with events chances etc.
I am working on a story update and I will be more careful with spelling errors. I made this game for me to play and only then I thought to share it :)
The energy drains slower when you have a vehicle (motorcycles are your the best bet), but of course I will tweak depending on what the community asks, maybe even update the energy system a little. Now you spend a lot of energy for travelling (if you don't own any vehicle, which you will not at the beginning of the game).
1 - You are right with the morale drop. I will look into that.
2 - For now the university route only gives you a place to stay. I will make the courses free for the university route in the next version. The job aren't different at the moment. And the money you get depend on the reputation, intelligence and some other stats. The $tmpmoney it's a bug an I will fix it ASAP.
I will add more content to the university and the job system at some point in the future. For now they are more like place holders.
That's what I plan to do in the near future (but the images update will take a little longer).

@baconater1234:
That's what I plan to do.

@Larry11:
There are some ideas to explore. If you have something more specific in mind please tell me. It will take a some more time because I will probably need to find images for some kind of content.
For now the start selection changes only a few variables, It doesn't offer totally different content, but I will look into that possibility and if other people will request if I will move it on my priorities list :D
1 - there's a plan to change the images and videos. And I see that it's a pretty popular request so I will done it sooner that I planed, but I can't really give you an ETA.
2 - for now you can get pregnant, but if you don't find out and have an abortion after 3 months the game ends. It's again a little harder to find videos for this (I'm only one guy and work in my free time) but it's a nice idea to explore and I will add it in my todo list.
3 - The city is divided into regions and I really can't put all the stuff in one place. I think it will be very weird, but I can add some short cuts. I will look into it. Of course if you have another idea, you can tell me.
4 - I actually have something like that in my TODO list. The possibility to get a boyfriend , get married etc (it's in the image files, but it's not implemented yet). I also have plans to add the possibility for her salvation. I can't tell you how soon I can do that, but I have the stuff I need and I will be done sooner that features when I need to search for videos, edit them etc...

@CreepyGhost:
10x. Yes, I'm the dev. I plan to listen to all who play my game. Of course the patrons will get a little extra, but all the community will be heard!

@Doruna:
Yes the writing was a bit rushed. Actually the main changes that will be in the version that it's available now to patrons is about the writing. I only started it so it will take a while, especially since I now have to fix issues, spelling errors and issues you found.
You are probably right... it's pretty hard to corrupt until some level and then the character becomes a slut in no time. From what I have tested is pretty much the same in my game. I can improve on that but it will require a lot of testing and tweaking (and I probably be done in a few version until I will get it right) and it will also require to upgrade corruption, reputation and some other variables from 100 max to 1000 max.
I must also think of a way to make the girl corrupt without making the same action over and over again. But I will try do this pretty soon as I am also a little unhappy by the way corruption (and reputation) evolves in my game.
If you want/have time you can tell me exactly what you didn't like in the story. Anyway 10x for trying my game and 10x for the feedback.

@Linger_Dinger:
ok +1 for milf... Again not sure when I will do it, but....
I will try to make the corruption slower. The problem is that it will require a lot of testing.
I will update the story in the next version. I actually work on that.
10x

@GunLinser:
Can you please describe the issues you are having?

@Banschi:
It will be pretty hard for me to have both male and female protagonist. I can't really think of a way to implement it in this game. Maybe a new game, but that's not going to happen soon...
You can escape rape if you have some fitness and I will ass more possibilities in the future.
If you can describe some of the bugs it will be very helpful. I tested the game, but obviously not enough.
As for the drop corruption idea... I must see what other people want. And if most of them want that, then sure.
It is a passion project. It is also a project that I do in my free time. I can't say I'll deliver three versions a month, because I can't! I also can't say "give me your money and I will publish something somewhere between one month and 10 years" Patreon is something to keep me motivated and I don't expect to really make money after it. I don't expect to earn more than a few hundred bucks a month (at most)! But I also want to do what I say I will do, and I can't promise something that I'm not pretty sure I can deliver. If I will finish a version earlier of course I will publish it earlier.

@I need serious help:
In a game... That or course will not happen in the real world, or at least I hope it will not :)

@Livididi:
10x for the feedback. I'll do that!

@vvsadtgte errt:
I will fix it ASAP

@junito:
I will into it

@fotistse:
It's a bug. Sorry about that. I will publish a fix ASAP

@erikhuis:
saving? what bug?

@BurningSun:
It is a priority to fix the spelling errors and bugs. I also send you a PM

@Krabe:
I only work on windows. That's why I wrote only windows on the OS. because I couldn't test on other OS. I will try to fix, but as I said, I can't test the result.

@temporaryuser:
From some actions you had to increase the corruption level. Try the first start "You want to make money" but even in that the corruption has to be higher. Other than that It's

@pellizza:
It's accessible from home, but nothing much to do in it at the moment.

@Shadowhunter9:
10x a lot :)

@Dracornis:
He is right. I did messed up and I'm sorry. He searched for the images and arrange them etc and that requires time!
To be honest at first I wanted to make this just for fun for myself, and then I though of making it public. And at that point I should have replaced the images, but I didn't.
I will try to replace the images as soon as I can, but it will take a while.

@Zaiizen:
Can you please describe that more? What didn't you like? I mean if the community wants it, I can replace it, but I think that if I remove stuff like that the game will just loose it's purpose. However I can increase the morale gain by doing different actions and decrease the morale need or drop.

@Kid554:
Relax in the park. You can also go for a walk but by doing so you can also get some negative events.

@pastreloks:
I will try to add that some time in the future. For now you can get pregnant, but after the pregnancy reaches 90 days, the game ends.

@pepette:
sorry about that. I will look into it

@dormambo:
I will look at some point into this possibility, but not soon. As it will require a lot of planing and images.

@picobyte:
can you remember in which screen you where? 10x. I will look into it, but it will be helpful if you will help me with that.

@All:
10x for playing my game and feel free to contact me for any issue or suggestion.
I am very surprised about the amount of feedback I received in such a short amount of time and I will work to make the game better.
For now I will work on fixing bugs, balancing issues, spelling errors and other problems the community will point out.
Those hot fixes will be made available for the patreon version and for the public version also. The new features will be added a little because of that, but that's what the game needs the most at this moment.
Sorry for the issues you are having with the game. I will try to fix them ASAP
 
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__Skyfire__

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@BlackKnight6666 Please ignore the haters. Especially unwarranted criticism coming from other .html developers. They don't own the space. I for one am very HAPPY to see new projects being developed. So I tip my hat to you sir.

I'm certain you'll get around to fixing the bugs and typos to the best of your capabilities. I hope you in that sense can take note of all the constructive comments levied. In this context, CONSTRUCTIVE feedback is the key people. Do you really want to drive away a new surely inexperienced but enthusiastic dev by making this thread a negative space?

Thank you for the new project. I encourage you to stay true to your vision of the game. Often people who like your game stay silent whereas you only hear from the complainers. So please keep that in mind. The best of luck.
 

BlackKnight6666

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@Sjoher:
Sorry about that. I will try to fix the problems ASAP. Can you remember the screen you where in or the action you where doing? 10x
 

rhev

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Hi, I wrote a review and it may sound a bit harsh, but I wanted to come and let you the dev know that I have faith that you can turn it around and make something good. I'll check out a future version when you've pulled things together a little more. please do continue development, I think you've got a great start.
 
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BlackKnight6666

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@rhev:
Actually I don't think I had a great start... but I did had much more feedback that I though that I will have.
And I think it's a fair review. The game needs a lot of work. I know about the webcam think, I actually will fix this in the new version. The webcam can make you a lot of money, but it should start much slower. I wasn't however aware that there are so many bugs.
I will continue to work on the game, fix the issues and then add more content. Of course I'll start by fixing the issues first.
 
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Frazzanova

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The debt route is impossible to start with, as your morale is 0 and isn't raisable with anything I've found in the game (walking raises it a bit, but sleeping outside just drops the morale back to 0 again).
Go to the park and use the first day to relax 6 times, go beg, buy food, go to the gang territory, brothel, shower, and go to work. Or just spam click beg until you pass out, I got about $480 the first day. Second day I could afford the 500 rent for an apartment.
 
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BlackKnight6666

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@ :
You also die if your health drops to 0. That can occur from BDSM or rape. You can restore health at the clinic or by doing sports or in jail :p
 

__Skyfire__

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Nov 15, 2018
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After playing a little, I feel both the time & needs system could be tinkered with a bit.
Hunger / Thirst; in general these seem to be dropping too fast. Especially in relation to how time functions in this game.

Energy / Day; At least early on seems like I can't discover any content since any single action seems to take a lot of time. As an example, waking up homeless and going to the park to drink water takes you from 55 to 41 energy and also seems to advance the day. (Or is this large energy drain only when you are homeless?)

& both of which are up there in game quality use only clock to advance time, a simple mechanism that seems to work well. Granted Idk if u are limited by the .html format. Just my 0.02c
 
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@Larry11:
There are some ideas to explore. If you have something more specific in mind please tell me. It will take a some more time because I will probably need to find images for some kind of content.
For now the start selection changes only a few variables, It doesn't offer totally different content, but I will look into that possibility and if other people will request if I will move it on my priorities list :D
1 - there's a plan to change the images and videos. And I see that it's a pretty popular request so I will done it sooner that I planed, but I can't really give you an ETA.
2 - for now you can get pregnant, but if you don't find out and have an abortion after 3 months the game ends. It's again a little harder to find videos for this (I'm only one guy and work in my free time) but it's a nice idea to explore and I will add it in my todo list.
3 - The city is divided into regions and I really can't put all the stuff in one place. I think it will be very weird, but I can add some short cuts. I will look into it. Of course if you have another idea, you can tell me.
4 - I actually have something like that in my TODO list. The possibility to get a boyfriend , get married etc (it's in the image files, but it's not implemented yet). I also have plans to add the possibility for her salvation. I can't tell you how soon I can do that, but I have the stuff I need and I will be done sooner that features when I need to search for videos, edit them etc..
Thanks for taking the time to respond, I appreciate it.

For the MILF approach, I think there's a lot of materials available that you can probably download and cut from pornhub to shape whatever story you might want. My favorites are Cory Chase, Kendra Lust, Jodi West, India Summer but which MILF you want to use is up to you. You might also want to make the MC a guy so you can maximize the number of MILFs you can work into the story.

I push for the MILF approach because as it stands the current game is very similar to Life Choices which is already a very good game. Focusing on MILFs would open up a genre that has not explored and has a ton of video material. And given the number of likes my original suggestion has gotten, I think there is interest for a more MILF-centered HTML game.

1) Thanks longer clips would really add to the game.

3) Some shortcuts would be great. Maybe put them on the sidebar where you can travel to the "mall" with the time and bus fare automatically deducted.

4) That sounds good. I think the problem with some of these games is that it's too black/white between "being an innocent virgin" and "being a hard slut." If you can let the MC slowly grow into her sexuality or sexual relationships, and then move in and out of being a slut depending on major life/game turning points, that would be really interesting.

There are also some navigation/user experience suggestions I have but I will wait till some of the bugs and issues get worked out.

Just some ideas. Really like this sort of game and hope it can work. Thanks for listening and I am happy to help.
 

aigimilan

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Oct 9, 2017
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The game is so full of bugs it's practically unplayable.

Money changes to $money instead of a value and can never be used.
Other stats are doing the same

The game remembers your previous life if you have to restart. You'll restart in debt and just die at the end of the first night, keep anything you bought on your previous life, etc.

Almost all of the art assets have been lifted from other HTML "games".

Morale stat drops to 0 almost instantly it seems and then takes forever to get back (multiple days at the park relaxing or whatever just to work a single shift... which then breaks the money stat.)

And the English is fairly poor. "You don't thing about boys or sex as you want to be the best you can and remain a vigrin until you found the right guy." as an example.

The whole thing just kind of feels like someone just wanted to slap together a quick html porn click "adventure" and try to milk out some patreon cash.

Hard pass. Maybe in a year or so if it's given some loving attention, but as for now it's just stolen art assets you can click through in more coherent less buggy games.
 

BlackKnight6666

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@__Skyfire__ The homeless half energy idea it's a little f***d up. I will try to rise the energy to 75 or something for now and I will look into the clock thing.
The hunger and thirst should get you trough the day without much problems. I will take a look.
 
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