Summary
This is a fantastic game and one of the best VNs I played. Albeit "abandoned," there is more than enough content, and at the very least, the final chapter served as a conclusion for 'Book 1'.
The story is compelling for a lewd game. The writing leads to interesting characters with character development throughout the chapters. They have personalities that go beyond your desire to want to lay with them; instead, you'll find yourself caring for the dreams and ambitions of said characters. There is some tongue-in-cheek and a few fourth-wall-breaking humor, but nothing that detracts from the story.
The art style is unique and hence refreshing. Initially, I was on the fence about the art style. The animations were initially lackluster, but they improved with each evolving chapter. The characters seem to be diverse, which is always lovely to see. The bodies presented are more-so 'thicc,' albeit some characters are what some would consider "slim-thick."
Criticism
The second half of the game is more captivating than the first half -- albeit one can argue that it's partially due to the first half focusing on introducing the reader to the overall world and characters.
There is one character with whom the story was amping up a relationship, but unfortunately, we ultimately didn't get a conclusion with this character, as the PC was not given the opportunity to lay with her.
Other Things To Address:
Checking out the thread a bit, and I see all this talk about NTR. I don't understand the controversy. This game has one 'controversial' scene towards the beginning chapters. It's technically not NTR, by definition. Essentially, you witness a bully who is laying a girl you fancy. This girl is not in a relationship with you, and you eventually get the opportunity to win her heart and completely kick the bully out of the picture. Where is the controversy? Have none of you ever touched grass and fancied someone who was sadly already taken? I could've sworn NTR was more of a kink about getting cheated on, not the scenario described above. If anything, this is voyeurism, one scene of voyeurism. Anyhow forget all that, and give this game a try!