VN - Ren'Py - Family Vacation [Ch.05 & 06] [MCK]

First off: I'm not an expert, a connoisseur of art and literature. I'm just a guy who likes porn games for what they are: porn.

I'll be honest, I treated this game like the others I play: Enable Skip, then slow down at the interesting parts, have fun, be done with it.
Then I realized what I'm playing is actually the type of game I've been missing for months! A game where there are other males, not just MC with his big dick. I know, many many people feel the opposite way about this, but I do welcome this change of pace. There is MC's friend in the prologue, MC's son, tennis teacher, dog, etc. And no, this is not NTR, no cucking. MC doesn't hold some kind of birthright to own every woman he lays his eyes on.
And there is so much content. There are no bad choices in the game. It's not always good to spy on someone or to go to a tennis practice. It's a choice, and if you choose differently next time, you'll see something else.

In short: I love this game, the story is nice, the dev made sure to have things and choices make sense. The characters look nice, there are multiple routes you can go on. It's a great game, even with it's flaws (which will be fixed after some proofreading.)

Very unique take on incest that I didn't see on any other game before and I like the dynamic between MC and his girls.

Pros:
Great character design
Good chunk of content with multiple paths

Things that i like to see improved :
English translation
Animations

Personal cons:
The dick piercing is weird and like others said it breaks immersion
Bestiality content seams not optional

My hope for this project is to succeed and for dev to improve thus the 5 stars can be revised later depending on how the game moves along.

What i like about this game:

• There are many characters with different looks and personalities
• It has multiple story strings and so far all of them are intruiging in their own way.
• The game takes a different approach than many incest games. The player character is not (or almost not) manipulating/corrupting the other characters of the game but rather are all/most love/sex interest characters sexually open in varying degrees. You as the player character don't have to initiate every relationship but are often approached by them. All this gives the game a very erotic vibe.
• So far there is no grinding for stats or money in the game

Stuff I don't like or that needs improvement:

• The spelling and grammar needs improvement. The writing itself is good but there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes which is understandable considering the developer is not a native speaker. But maybe there is a kind native speaker on here who will help.
• The MCs dick piercing: It's just immersion breakingly large in my opinion but that may as well be personal taste.
• The animations are rather clunky with very few frames. It would be nice if they were a little smoother and if that's not possible maybe no animations at all would be better.

It's a pretty good game that has a lot of potential. Good fap material and a lot of fun.
Positives:
- Good renders
- Lots of fetishes

Ok:
lots of paths (its both good and bad - too many to view so multiple paythroughs. :/)

Bad:
- Story is forgettable
- Contradictions galore (Gilf is suppose to be reserved then shows her puss lol)
- Everyone is into you all the time. Kinda takes away the fun of corrupting/romancing a character...

All in all potential for good... will see... for now 4 stars

All in All, there is promise to the game. There are some translation error here and there as well as some choppy-ness on the transitions, but nothing "game breaking".

One of the major concerns I have is the text coloring. Without a text box (I don't normally like them), it's VERY hard to read some times. The dark colors make it even harder. I think other reviewers have mentioned, but just coloring the Name would be fine with white text.

Ch.05 & 06

This is a wild one so far. If you are into swinging & incest then this is a good one for you.

I'm not in love with the looks of most of the models (except Franzi), but I still enjoy it.

The English needs a serious overhaul. I thought about undertaking it, but didn't feel like having to go through so many files to do it.

I enjoyed that the first release was all the way to chapter 6. Plenty of content to start.

Good luck dev and I'm looking forward to the coming releases.

A great game. I love that the family is so free and open about their relationships and so it seems that other characters that appear are about that freedom as well. I personally don't mind the trans content ( which is not much yet ) but for other who do, it is avoidable so far.

Can't wait to see more of the game and how it develops!

his is a very interesting game and can't wait to see the next updates.

Pros:
- the models look great
- the story is interesting
- lots of choices and hot content

Cons:
- too many branches which require the player to play multiple times


All in all I like the Game and I want more of this

I hate to say it since the overall scenario seems interesting enough and the renders are at least okay, but I couldn't make it out of the prologue... Or "prolog", as it says in game.

I just couldn't get past the constant bombardment of poor grammar, misspellings and oddly constructed sentences. Mayhaps I'll revisit it once the writing has been given a once or preferably twice over.

story is weird
Every woman jumping on mc .
the incest is just teasing
I gave up after just not feeling this game is something i would enjoy as i'm not a big fan of lesbian And swinging and sharing is a nothing i like
I picked the choiches where mc wants the woman for his own and it still feels like i'm not gonna see much sex scenes for the mc only path
no bugs

This is a very interesting game and can't wait to see the next updates.

Pros:
- the models look great
- the story is interesting (although the bad English translation need improvement)
- lots of choices and hot content

Cons:
- too many branches which require the player to play multiple times
- bad English translation

All in all, the game has some flaws, but also great potential.

this game is bad...and i mean it, it is really really bad.

putting aside its "original plot" where middle aged man fucks any female (just waiting to be fucked by him ofc) with his wife blessing as typical harem power fantasy, ridiculous font/what colors, unnecessary side avatars, enforced walkthrough (with every "meaningful" choice you instantly know is it "bad" or "good" measured by +/-love/lust points included in those choices/answers)...yeh, putting aside all that and few other things, the game looks like it was made in 2016 (at least) - renders are among the worst ones around, character models are, well, unappealing at the best, and the writting..oh...my..god...unless you are 7 yo you will find it hilarious..not in positive sense unfortunately (not humor/parody game, yet it aims to be a serious one? - and that is one of the best jokes regarding this project).

though im sure it will get love from its target group - it has almost everything to please that kind of players.

all in all - two stars due to lot of content it has.

Story fo the game is way cooler and diffrent from normal games. Lot of content for initial release with a hint towards new kinks. Enjoyed verymuch playing the game and looking forward for timely future release.