VN Ren'Py Daily Challenges [v0.1] [TheAlex]

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Overview:
You play as a young girl in her twenties. You live together with a friend of yours and an older guy (most relationships can be chosen freely). Together you start a road trip to your mother and that road trip is the stage for your adventures. You can expect unsettling encounters with strangers, unpredictable mishaps with questionable outcomes, exciting meetings with adventurous people and many, many spicy situations in which you can decide how they will end.​

Thread Updated: 2024-03-24
Release Date: 2024-03-23
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Version: 0.1.1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[Bob69]

The_Alex Congratulations on your first release! Good luck!

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[♍VoidTraveler]

Is it me or something is veeeeery off with proportions on preview1?
Oh well, just another day on F95, i guess.

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[L3z1l3]

Seems like Indiana Jones picked up a few

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

You play as a young girl in her twenties. You live with a friend and an older guy (most relationships can be chosen freely). Together, you start a road trip to see your mother, and that road trip is the stage for your adventures. You can expect unsettling encounters with strangers, unpredictable mishaps with questionable outcomes, exciting meetings with adventurous people, and many, many spicy situations in which you can decide how they will end.​

I took a road trip with the overview.
Thanks. The Alex
And congrats.

 

[Jashmyne]

Not a terrible start. But even if you rename the MC, her name is still Trixie.
Also will we be able to change the relationship of the old man?

 

[rKnight]

You can expect unpredictable mishaps with questionable outcomes, and many spicy situations in which you can decide how they will end.

You live together with a friend of yours your brother, and an older guy your father.


THX for sharing...

 

[Hungover00]

There's not enough of a game here for there to be a release.

 

[AnyName'llDo]

Even if you change them, as mentioned by Jashmyne above, Trixie's name remains the same. Also, Bob's name remains the same, even if changed.

The word "distinguishing" below should be changed to extinguishing.

 

[Sugoi!]

Grey hair is sexy!!!

 

[FMag]

Looking good. Hope to see more.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[The_Alex]

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Seems like Indiana Jones picked up a few

That was the idea

Not a terrible start. But even if you rename the MC, her name is still Trixie.
Also will we be able to change the relationship of the old man?

Thanx for the bug report. Found the error - will be fixed in next version
Yes of course you will be able to rename the old guy. I'll add that in v0.2

There's not enough of a game here for there to be a release.

Yup, you're right, but I wanted to do the first step to see if the characters are fine. You know... agile development

As usually the case, why I just ignore 0.1's. The majority get abandoned before there's even a 0.2 anyway and saves prob get broken before it's finished if not.

Let's hope for the best.

 

[I-Love-Adventure]

nice game thank you

 

[Comaco]

Good luck with your project. Looks like it won't be for me though. I only really like female protagonist games where I can play a pure lesbian route.

 

[L7Bear]

Shorter than I expected, but some promise there.

A few typos/mistakes

"anoying" should be "annoying"
I had NOT set the relationship to "brother"

"Indy" would refer to Indiana Jones. ("Indie" would refer to independent film/music/etc.)
"artefact" should be "artifact"

I didn't name him "Bob", and is the Uncle (who seems to be missing all his teeth) seems to be in two places at once.

"Missy" probably should be lowercase "missy" (but I'm not sure) since it is not a name.

should be "Bad enough" rather than "Worst enough"

Thoughts are usually indicated with italics
For example, in Ren'Py dialogue - "{i}But you'll see I'm gonna do it anyways!{/i}"

 

[The_Alex]

Shorter than I expected, but some promise there.

A few typos/mistakes
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"anoying" should be "annoying"
I had NOT set the relationship to "brother"
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"Indy" would refer to Indiana Jones. ("Indie" would refer to independent film/music/etc.)
"artefact" should be "artifact"
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I didn't name him "Bob", and is the Uncle (who seems to be missing all his teeth) seems to be in two places at once.
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"Missy" probably should be lowercase "missy" (but I'm not sure) since it is not a name.
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should be "Bad enough" rather than "Worst enough"
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Thoughts are usually indicated with italics
For example, in Ren'Py dialogue - "{i}But you'll see I'm gonna do it anyways!{/i}"

Thanx mate, I appreciate. ^^

 

[JenMistress]

Short game, but curious as to where this is going. I see someone else already brought up the name not changing on the character dialogue, so you know about that already, only thing that I really didn't like, because having a female protagonist and being able to change her name, perfect time for having her named after yours truly , but didn't change it. But other than that small problem, did like it thus far, and interested in seeing where this goes. Thank you so very much for this!!!

 

[OU812]

First off, it's not a bad start and I'll be looking forward to future updates. I won't repeat some of the other comments concerning the renaming not working completely, but there is another small fix you might consider. When MC is talking on the phone with "Ella", the phone says "Megan".