hoshimota

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Game looks promising, nice to at least see something new that isn't shitty cartoon art or FUTA or femdom-oriented.

The NTR thing is going to cost you too many fans, just fucking make it optional trust me on this one...

And as others have said, lose the stupid cartoony blue alien/bug thing it's very out of place.

Good luck dude, I will be watching this one to see how it progresses.
 

Gorse

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DMHator, there seems to be an issue with your game regarding too high RAM consumption... After some time clicking through the images on screen, there's a significant increase on the latency of text display as well.
Maybe the solution for this issue is the Ren'py statement you used in the script file to display images. If you primarily used show for displaying the images, all images are still present in RAM. That's not the case if you use the statement scene instead (as explained in the ). ;)

Furthermore, I can only support hoshimota 's feedback: don't show scenes with people/monsters banging any girls outside the MC. Even they aren't LIs, it is too easily considered as the ugly kink with the three infamous letters (which I do not need to speak out loud here).

And please consider to reduce your very expansive narratives (whenever there's no dialogue). Don't tell the player what's just shown in the images. And don't let the player read through extensive narratives in action scenes (particularly the fight scenes would really profit from much less narrative descriptions!).

Just my two cents. Hopefully constructive enough for you...

Btw, so far I could play without RAM overload, I do like your introduction to a potentially interesting fantasy story! All the best to the future development!
 
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Xicor

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What kind of corruption is in the game?
Will the MC be completely corrupted to the dark side and/or will he corrupt the innocent love interest towards darkness?
 
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Voyeurism or NTR is always shit, different color and smell but always things I prefer to avoid, I won't even try.
It's one thing to call it voyeurism when the sex scene does not involve a LI but just two random people having sex. As I mentioned to someone else about voyeurism with a LI, it's like having a real-life crush on a woman knowing she is in a relationship being either married or just dating and seeing her having sex with her spouse or boyfriend (or girlfriend) and the player starts to feel jealous as they would in RL because it is not them, they are having sex with. It's also not fun to watch one of your favorite LI's getting raped by someone else. No matter how one tries to sugar-coat voyeurism with a LI having sex with another person that isn't the MC it is still a form of NTR because it does make the player jealous and humiliated for having to watch that because they like that LI.
 
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It's one thing to call it voyeurism when the sex scene does not involve a LI but just two random people having sex. As I mentioned to someone else about voyeurism with a LI, it's like having a real-life crush on a woman knowing she is in a relationship being either married or just dating and seeing her having sex with her spouse or boyfriend (or girlfriend) and the player starts to feel jealous as they would in RL because it is not them, they are having sex with. It's also not fun to watch one of your favorite LI's getting raped by someone else. No matter how one tries to sugar-coat voyeurism with a LI having sex with another person that isn't the MC it is still a form of NTR because it does make the player jealous and humiliated for having to watch that because they like that LI.
Totally fucked up to show other people's sex and especially LI's. In my books it is already NTR so I will never touch such a game.
 

Faxe10%

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It's one thing to call it voyeurism when the sex scene does not involve a LI but just two random people having sex. As I mentioned to someone else about voyeurism with a LI, it's like having a real-life crush on a woman knowing she is in a relationship being either married or just dating and seeing her having sex with her spouse or boyfriend (or girlfriend) and the player starts to feel jealous as they would in RL because it is not them, they are having sex with. It's also not fun to watch one of your favorite LI's getting raped by someone else. No matter how one tries to sugar-coat voyeurism with a LI having sex with another person that isn't the MC it is still a form of NTR because it does make the player jealous and humiliated for having to watch that because they like that LI.
I totally agree...I hope it's avoidable...but either way I'm out...I don't like it.
 

primoo357

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Y'all getting attached to pixels too much. Everybody not liking NTR lol...
Brah... You close the game and forget about the girls. Why you guys are getting attached to characters?
 
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Totally fucked up to show other people's sex and especially LI's. In my books it is already NTR so I will never touch such a game.
My thing is IF you want to show voyeurism have it be with a non-LI or don't force the player to watch it IF it is with a LI. I get there are people that are into that sort of thing but there are also people that aren't and if you want more people to support your game than meet people half-way and don't force people to watch something they don't want to see or aren't into make everything optional.
 
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Y'all getting attached to pixels too much. Everybody not liking NTR lol...
Brah... You close the game and forget about the girls. Why you guys are getting attached to characters?
Why does anyone get attached to anything now days? Because we can and because we want to. Why ask why? Everybody has their attachments being virtual or non. I am sure you have your own attachments in your life and shouldn't judge people for theirs.
 

Faxe10%

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Y'all getting attached to pixels too much. Everybody not liking NTR lol...
Brah... You close the game and forget about the girls. Why you guys are getting attached to characters?
Because most on this forum are Gamers. (classic video game) But we also like AVN...I think you're just for the porn part, pornohub is for you...lol First of all we are VIDEO GAMERS...Fuck