I think that the concept is great, but the focus on three characters destroys immersion. I'd recommend that the dev stick to Conan for the main story and, if they want to take a break, make optional side stories for the other POV characters.
The art is generally attractive, but the characters are not consistent in dress or hairstyle/color between frames, and there are several situations where there are multiple people in a scene that clearly should have one. None of that is game-breaking, but it is distracting.
The meat of any story is the writing, and I have no complaints/suggestions there. There's some really funny Eater Eggs, good parody and characterization, natural-sounding dialogue, and even some character growth.
Can't wait for more!
The art is generally attractive, but the characters are not consistent in dress or hairstyle/color between frames, and there are several situations where there are multiple people in a scene that clearly should have one. None of that is game-breaking, but it is distracting.
The meat of any story is the writing, and I have no complaints/suggestions there. There's some really funny Eater Eggs, good parody and characterization, natural-sounding dialogue, and even some character growth.
Can't wait for more!