VN Ren'Py City of Broken Dreamers [v1.14.0 Ch. 14] [PhillyGames]

[Snugglepuff]

Absolutely.

Hate to be the one to break it to you but... That's not how porn, the world, and life works.

Pornographic content, and what makes content pornographic in the first place is very, very simply defined.
"Printed or visual material containing the explicit description or display of sexual organs or activity, intended to stimulate sexual excitement."

:EDIT:

Man, I love how that 3-star review was removed.

For it being misleading in only one part, yes.
Without that part it looked fine.

 

[Hyped]

It's kinda misleading.

You said it's not a porn game however it has sex scenes. Just because you don't happen to like them doesn't change the fact that it is indeed a porn game.

You saying it isn't would lead people to believe there are no scenes not that they just aren't to your tastes.

Commented earlier in the thread. There is some nudity, there are some h-scenes. Not erotic to me yet, for a vn I need to be invested in a character. Especially when its sci-fi and there's additional layers of fiction the mind has to buy into.

 

[Jon_Sleeper]

@Philly_Games If you don't mind me asking, how was the intro made? Did you use a premade AE template or you built it yourself? Loved your game btw.

 

[Hyped]

Hate to be the one to break it to you but... That's not how porn, the world, and life works.

Pornographic content, and what makes content pornographic in the first place is very, very simply defined.
"Printed or visual material containing the explicit description or display of sexual organs or activity, intended to stimulate sexual excitement."

You're right, edited. I did say 'fapworthy' though, which adds some subjectivity.

 

[Lord_b]

I will be honest the graphics may be the best I have seen. From the very introduction seeing the capillaries in the eyes I was struck because I can't honestly say the last time I have seen that level of detail given throughout. DA was one of my favorite VNs because I really enjoyed the noir detective setting and now this is hitting all the right cyberpunk notes.

I will have to play it again with music this time. Don't want to let that expense go unappreciated.

 

[Hyped]

Man, I love how that 3-star review was removed.

I've messaged the mods for an explanation. We'll see.

 

[Jerzy]

Oh... WoW... What a start....

 

[Philly_Games]

@Jon_Sleeper oh template for sure no way i can do that lol. I just started using AE and AP in the last 2 months.

 

[Floga]

Commented earlier in the thread. There is some nudity, there are some h-scenes. Not erotic to me yet, for a vn I need to be invested in a character. Especially when its sci-fi and there's additional layers of fiction the mind has to buy into.

It's the first version buddy. Are you seriously docking points because the first version doesn't have h-content? Quality story-telling is gradual and takes time. If you'd have told with for maybe a 5th update I'd understand. I wouldn't agree, but I'd understand, but for a v0.1? Seriously?

 

[ccav999]

hope there will be more about Meredith in the future.

man, i just can't refuse dangerous, powerful, blonde milf

 

[Snugglepuff]

It's the first version buddy. Are you seriously docking points because the first version doesn't have h-content?

It does have porn content, and he's explained his reasoning.
6 pages so far, isn't that difficult to either skim the pages, or just look at his posts alone.

 

[Akamari]

I'm a bit on the fence here. The game has great visuals as expected, an interesting setting (it reminds a lot of Shadowrun), somewhat intriguing and mysterious story, and optional well made sex scenes.

However, none of the girls really impressed me. They're not bad, they just seem kind of too easy to get. I would like to see the MC having harder times (and no I don't mean that kind of harder). It actually made me opt out of all the sex scenes for this reason in my main playthrough because it's just too early and too easy for me to really enjoy. In my opinion, spending less time on the sex scenes and more time on introducing the characters would have been better for the first release.

So, to get to the point, it's a good game, but I'll wait and see how the story will shape and if any of the characters will have enough depth to win me over. The potential for greatness is there.

 

[Draakaap23]

Fuck yeah

 

[Philly_Games]

I plan on getting an android release out but i have fires at my real life work i need to work on this weekend ...

 

[Hyped]

I'm a bit on the fence here. The game has great visuals as expected, an interesting setting (it reminds a lot of Shadowrun), somewhat intriguing and mysterious story, and optional well made sex scenes.

However, none of the girls really impressed me. They're not bad, they just seem kind of too easy to get. I would like to see the MC having harder times (and no I don't mean that kind of harder). It actually made me opt out of all the sex scenes for this reason in my main playthrough because it's just too early and too easy for me to really enjoy. In my opinion, spending less time on the sex scenes and more time on introducing the characters would have been better for the first release.

So, to get to the point, it's a good game, but I'll wait and see how the story will shape and if any of the characters will have enough depth to win me over. The potential for greatness is there.

Exactly my point. Lots of characters. There's no seduction, there's no context or sexual tension to most of the relationships.

As pointed out by @Floga Fero though, maybe its the v1 problem. I feel like DA had the same problem too, but got better towards the end.

 

[Jon_Sleeper]

@Jon_Sleeper oh template for sure no way i can do that lol. I just started using AE and AP in the last 2 months.

Oh cool. Its really well done and congrats on your amazing release.

 

[BisonFan02]

Exactly my point. Lots of characters. There's no seduction, there's no context or sexual tension to most of the relationships.

As pointed out by @Floga Fero though, maybe its the v1 problem. I feel like DA had the same problem too, but got better towards the end.

You will never please everyone. I thought it was executed well. If you try to do a "stairway to heaven" and have no H scenes....even in a 0.1....people would lose it.

Philly is top notch and the top of the class right now overall.....and it's almost not close.

 

[macadam]

ok.. well.. damn

how did you manage todo all that in a month ? (i dont want to pay your electric bills XD )

game is great, i m curious to see where it goes. so far its just great, story is nice and chars are good. the renders ? oh well... renders are very ugly...

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if you keep updating like this every month, than you top number one of all for sure.. but , take your time.. no need to rush. better wait long for great game than speed up and do bad stuff.

definitly wait for next

 

[John Nguyen]

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[Akamari]

Exactly my point. Lots of characters. There's no seduction, there's no context or sexual tension to most of the relationships.

As pointed out by @Floga Fero though, maybe its the v1 problem. I feel like DA had the same problem too, but got better towards the end.

Aren't you kind of contradicting yourself with your point though? It's not very reasonable to expect a lot of sexual tension buildup AND a lot of sexual content at one release. Honestly, I found your review very strange.