VN - RPGM - Ren'Py - Chronicles of Hell and Heaven [Ch. 2 Act. 1b] [Kazuki-chan]

To me story was boring, just another fuckfest game like so many others, you just go fuck a girl then move on to the next fuck her and so on....trow in watching others fuck which also dident really do anything for me.
When it comes to the plot its the same shit you have seen a million times over, MC is a deamon and need to earn deamon points and ofc the only way to do that is to fuck everyone, theres no relationship build-up either so it really just is a pure mindless porn game.

MC is the standard idiot with a mindset of a 12 year old, everyone is hot to him and he wants to fuck any and all girls no matter how ugly they are, and being a pure fuckfest game you wont have any options to say no.
What makes it even more annoying is that you cant skip scenes so your forced to sit and watch girls that is only a turn-off to you which also kills the fun.

The only reason it got up to 2 stars is due to the animations being good for this character style and there is about a million of them, but it also makes it boring in the long run, but just to watch some animations you could try it, already on second day MC will fuck a town full of girls and they are all animated, but to me story is more importen since thats really was has to drive the AVN and it just dident for me.

Grils are a bit meh faces are pretty much the same on everyone, but atleast there is a good diversity in builds so thats good.

I tried to play, but after being sent to another place, I was forced to talk to the witch and was not able to save. Honestly I don't want to redo the beginning because it was boring. The art is not my style, but it's not bad. The worst is the very lack of interaction. Do not play.

I am writing with the help of a translator, so I apologize for any mistakes.
In terms of graphics, the game could stand on par with games such as: "Once in a Lifetime" or "Stray Incubus", but given the genre and method of storytelling (without the main character) and the constant insertions of the author, it will never be able to compete with them .
There seems to be a plot, but I couldn’t read it beyond the first chapter. The author clearly overestimates himself in the role of a “writer”.

First post that I will do, please be patient with me.
I fell in love with Imada and Flayre at first sight. And basically all the characters. , I would have liked a little more development in that character, hardly anything is known about her in the entire novel.
which lead, other problem, I cannot understand Bartho.
Unfortunately, the fact that the protagonist is an INCUBUS sometimes makes the situations somewhat ridiculous and the sex happens very quickly.
However, everything is well justified and the game is enjoyed in a very impressive way <3

Pros:
-A fairly ambitious world and a chapter that introduces well concepts and apparently future characters.
-The girls and the characters are very varied, compared to other projects that are just starting.
-It's quite monotonous and honestly, I really enjoyed reading it despite the flaws.
-Lots of sex scenes, I think there are more than 100 xD
-I loved the funny characters introduced at perfect moments. The funny moments are well done.
-So far the villain is better writen that MC.


cons
-Honestly, I don't understand Bartho and I think it's a rather horrible detail.
-I personally hate not being able to understand certain character motivations, and I think the game didn't take the time to fully develop Bartho.
-Bartho has a baby face.
-Why does nobody move their face? They seem to have just gotten out of bed.

Chapter 2 does seem like a full-fledged game with RPGMAKER and I can't wait for its continuation.

I fell in love at first sight with Kaeno (and honestly, what a nice ass)
I feel that if chapter 1 had been like this, I would have understood everything. the storytelling and the characters are better written by far. honestly please keep this level of quality throughout the game.

If there was a negative rating - this game deserves one.

Story starts pretty decent with decent worldbuilding, numerous different characters and promising events to come.
Howevere.
It quickly turns into nothing but following a horny low-IQ teenager with horns fucking anyone he meets, without even a choice to skip the scene(if you don't like how the female character looks).
There's no gameplay as well - just walking from point A to point B.
Dialogues during sex are beyond terrible.
Sex scenes are nothing but the most defaulte poses from early Illusion games.
Had to drop this mess at the prison sex scene, which was THIRD one in a row that I couldn't give a single flying f*** about cause of how out of place it was
Waste of time lads - search for another game

Review Chapter 1: (chapter 2 below)
10-15 hours of good story story with a nice implementation of sex scenes.

Love it, story, passion in the game, the focus in the story, creator really put a lot of effort in this story and universe <3
Excelent world introduction. good develop of characters.
a nice hentai fantasy story with many character for every taste.
A excelent first chapter that introduce what expected in the next years
(I HOPE SO) According the descriptions there is a planning story for 4 years aprox. is amazing all the planification behind. the love in this project is very noticeable regarless the limitations.

Pros:
Nice introduction of world
You can read as a normal novel (off course, under a context of sex novel)
-too many content. and enjoyment.
-LOT OF SEX SCENES, like a sexgame should be.
-Funny moments and characters very enjoyable.
-Barely have bugs, game not creash in basically any moment. (4 times play game)
-regarless been a sex novel you can take serious. also comic scenes have a good implentation. and characters take serious themselves. so its very enjoyable <3
-Take decitions, you can choose which routes take it. if a vanilla one or NTR. probably author plan increase all this. in next chapters.
-All characters designs have an amazing diversity, and character, I think the faces of the characters are not shared with almost any other.
you can found fatty girls, slim, thics, slim, small, freckles, talls. with many variety of hairs and face combinations. None of the characters here I have seen share similar faces or traits in another game.
-The story have many characters, and show you futures protagonist like a marvel movie.
-Enjoyable characters, specially waifus.
-the duration for a first chapter promises too much.
-Many plataforms, play in Browser online, Android, IOS, pc, tablet.
-Basically bugs not exist, i play 3-4 times and not found any.

CONs:-
-Some characters always have a pokerface. probably exist 5 faces, for all character and you gonna see pokerface all the time. however, after consulting and testing the HS2. making all these types of faces is very VERY time consuming and seeing that the focus is on the story, this detail can be forgiven.
Due the most noticeable moments are sex scene, in story characters are more charismatic. instead last part of the game, author make more facial expression.
-The most wasted area is the RPGMAKER engine. for make more chooices.
-Too simple gameplay, and HUD this is a wasted considerating the engine. but due focus is story, i can forgive.
-No backlog.
-Need more savedata for remembering "sexy" or funny moments. 99 savedatas slots. solved after act 2.
-Gallery needs finish game.

I think despite all the failures. the game can be significantly improved, I fully recommend it.

according author next

Review chapter 2:

without a doubt a great improvement compared to chapter 1.
Chapter 2 ACTa1 improves in all aspects, finally the RPG MAKER makes sense of use, and does not feel like a RENPY novel in RPGMAKER, apparently the author wants to make situations similar to ONEONE1 games (with their respective limitations of course)
Characters more charismatic and better written.
Kaeno is very expressive and all his of him appears are full of sprites with many designs and clothes changing according to the current suit.
the renders have more extensive scenarios than chapter 1 and better detailed, (the details are lost somewhat in the 720p version, but they are noticeable in the 1080 version)
pros:
-Everything described in the first chapter
-Kaeno is extremely charismatic compared to Bartho.
-Although the previous chapter, sex was justified by the context, here it is implemented in a "more realistic" way
-So far all the girls presented have their stereotype well defined
-You have more exploration options and dialogues that change depending on your actions (I hope this will be maintained for all subsequent games.
-The sex dialogues are better, I must admit that in chapter 1 they were much more monotonous.
-The maturity of the characters goes according to age, this time it feels more fluid and credible.
-Now the RPG MAKER has scenes that change depending on the decisions, I won't spoil them, but apparently they could become like ONEONE1's.
-The sex scenes are now much much more erotic, LAVIGNIA AND SAORI <3
-Finally NO MORE POKERFACE. <3

Cons:
-The villa feels a little smaller than it apparently should be.
-the hud again is simple

This game is really good. But it needs to improve the interface which is very simple. However, the animations and renderings are sensational. I would give 4 stars, but the game is very good in what I prioritize (Images, animations, story) so it's 5 stars.

Pros

• Good models
• Good animations
• Interesting story
• Great game concept (Multiple characters, different point of view of the world. This game has big potential.)

Cons

• With RPGM comes the cons (No saveing in dialog, unnecessarily walking around)
• Wrong Engine RENPY would be 100% better
  • There is no gameplay, no battles, no puzzles, why then use the RPGM engine?
• H-Scene Gallery (you need to finish the game, and have no option to see the H-Scene you have already seen)
  • I would suggest putting it in the inventory from the start, where you will be teleported to another plane and then you can see all the scenes you have unlocked.
• No backtracking
• No sex sounds
• AAAAAAAAAAAHHH..., OOOOOOOOOOOHH..., AAAAAAHHHH... AAAAAAWWWNNN... MMMMMMMMM... and HHHHHMMMMM... (This are the dialog that pops up during sex. And it is just strange for moaning. Better would be to describe the sex scene or to write inner monologue from the females. )
• And that often when an animation comes up, a pop comes up with "The ses scene is loading, handsome. Dont forget to click right to hide the text box.", is that a limitation of the engine?
  With Ren'Py there would be no problem with this.

This game have potential, but not with the RPGM engine. Thats why I would suggest the author to make this game with Ren'Py.

Its a 2/5 for NOW.

I changed it to a 3/5.

Because of the Ren'Py Engine.

You can now save before a sex scene.

Pros:
Sensational story! A lot of beautiful models and a HUGE amount of content. No grind, no puzzles, and no battles = PERFECT
The renderings and animations are very well done. 10/10
Cons:
The characters become interested in the protagonist very quickly. But it's a small problem for an adventure game.

5 star - Masterpiece.

What a great game. You can deliver the game with its story and simple rpg gameplay with really beautiful rendering. And also the different between characters is absolutely great. I can't wait to see how this game will end with this complex story. Hopefully you will not drop this one, my friends.

Pros - Excellent art. Very beautiful models. Interesting story. Excellent writing. Huge amount of sexual content.
Cons - Simple gameplay. I missed puzzles and battles.
I loved the game, and I recommend it.

Review of Ch. 1 Act. 3a. TDLR, a total crap fest which main selling point is a lot of sex animations. Waffled between one star and two stars, but went with the two stars since this is still an early version and the dev obviously put a lot of effort into their "game". But be aware, we're talking a very weak two stars...

Pros

• Decent models
  
  
• Good animations
  
  
• Much content for early version, much sex
  
  
• Interesting concept of godesses who are one and the same and their relationship to hell and it's denizens.
  
  
• Men taller than the women. A low bar that so many games cannot clear. MC particular tall, which is unusual, but good. MC also muscled.
  
  
• Some of the women are jealous and don't just love the idea of the MC fucking a ton of other women at the same time as he's in a relationship with them. Realistic and gives the story some nerve. Another low bar many games can't handle.
  
  
• Text skipping is possible even without having read it before. In this game, that function is very useful...

Cons

• One choice in the entire game, and that choice is whether or not to have one particular sexual encounter. Everything else is mandatory and railroad:ed.
  
  
• No gameplay, no gaming aspects. At all.
  
  
• As there is no gameplay, RPGM only serves as an impediment to the story and as padding for what is essentially a much shorter story compared to the amount of time the player has to put down walking around and clicking things. In short, a walking simulator.
  
  
• Warns about dark themes, but delivers utter vanilla. Demon MC is cast out of hell and tasked with corrupting a virgin priestess. He immediately declares that he won't rape her! And from there it goes south as it's revealed that the demon MC is actually a good guy who became a demon only to be with his beloved. A wimpy good guy to boot (more on that further down).
  
  
• Anacronism abounds. Language is contemporary. Morals are contemporary. Clothes and objects are contemporary.
  
  
• Dialogue is juvenile, stilted and flat. Also a lot of redundant dialogue explaining obvious things that only the most socially inept people would say in real life and tons of conversation about the most mundane and meaningless shit possible.
  
  
• Laughing at weird and inappropriate times. All the time.
  
  
• Characters are shallow, immature and stupid, especially when taken into consideration that some of them have lived for millennia.
  
  
• Story is at time nonsensical and overdramatic.
  
  
• All men except MC are evil and stupid. And the game litterally tells the player this over and over again.
  
  
• Women fly to the MCs cock. All it takes is him saying a kind word or two and listening for a whole sentence. It's even stated right out that it doesn't take more, as all human men are such assholes and women therefore are turned on by kindness and simple attention. Here you might think that a demon lord would be out to corrupt the women, but nope. It's all about being kind and deferential to the ninth degree and letting the women take the lead, as mr 2000 year old demon lord is an absolute noob when it comes to reading other people. I guess it's lucky for the MC that all men are such evil assholes as had he been sent to the real world with real women with real reactions, he'd never get laid. Ever.
  
  
• MC morals and behaviour inconsistent. For instance, in the beginning the MC is told about a dude being anally raped with a glowing hot iron as punishment for having impure thoughts and the MC think that's appropriate and just. But he himself cannot even penetrate a woman lying nude with her legs spread in front of him after he gave her an orgasm by licking her, without first asking if it is ok, if it really, really, really is ok for him stick his cock in. All the while she's thinking stuff like "get on with it already!". I mean, what the fuck? What kind of ridiculous demon lord is he supposed to be? This doesn't just happen once, it's repeated for almost every sexual encounter he gets himself into. And when he comes across a half nude female inkeeper, he closes his eyes and turns his back on her, so that he won't see anything naughty and when she laughs at him saying it's quite alright he stammers out a response (in fact, he stammers a lot, the poor thing). Then out of the blue he asks the inkeeper if she want to go upstairs to have a lesbian sexual encounter with his fuck buddy he just fucked. As you do. Yeah. Very consistent fellow, this demon lord.
  
  
• Other characters morals inconsistent. For example, one demoness complaints about what she percieves as racism ("despicable"), but is herself talking about torturing people to death over information.
  
  
• MC hips are wider than his shoulders and his face look a bit funny.
  
  
• Engrish. Bad enough to be annoying, but not bad enough that it becomes difficult to understand what is being said or what's happening.
  
  
• Sillyness. For instance demoness gets angry at human woman. How to enact a diabolical revenge? Of course, complain to the manager where the human woman work! Really, Karen? Another example: Chocolate and demon powers cures PMS. In a game that's supposed to be serious and filled with dark themes. At least made me chuckle ("Her PMS is intense").
  
  
• Inattention to detail. For instance, when arriving at earth, Mr demon dude tells one of the LIs that he's cold because he's used to hell which is much hotter. But despite that, he insists on going about shirtless for most parts of the game, untill a waitress forces him to wear a shirt when in her establishment.
  
  
• AAAAAAAAAAAHHH..., OOOOOOOOOOOHH..., AAAAAAHHHH... That's how everyone sound all the time when having sex. Sometime also AAAAAAWWWNNN... MMMMMMMMM... and HHHHHMMMMM...
  
  
• No backtracking should you happen to click past something that actually matters to the story.