Version Reviewed: 0.3
Overall impression: It has potential, but dev has a lot of work to do.
• The models seen so far (mother, 2 daughters and 2 others) are nice.
• What animation there is needs work, but that should come with practice.
• Story is rather thin, even for a 3rd release. There's a short explaination why the MC's situation, but zero beyond that.
• The game could use a native English speaker to polish the text. I'd volunteer, since it seems pretty straightforward.
• I hope the dev has the plot fully fleshed out, at least in their mind. I don't want to get 8-10 updates in and find it Abandoned because it's going nowhere. Like I said above, it's got potential.
Overall impression: It has potential, but dev has a lot of work to do.
• The models seen so far (mother, 2 daughters and 2 others) are nice.
• What animation there is needs work, but that should come with practice.
• Story is rather thin, even for a 3rd release. There's a short explaination why the MC's situation, but zero beyond that.
• The game could use a native English speaker to polish the text. I'd volunteer, since it seems pretty straightforward.
• I hope the dev has the plot fully fleshed out, at least in their mind. I don't want to get 8-10 updates in and find it Abandoned because it's going nowhere. Like I said above, it's got potential.