VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [Dr PinkCake]

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Darkwen

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Maxiom said:
Sage has a pretty decent arc.
Her whole drama with Chad and moving forward.
The trust issues she now has to overcome because of that whole ordeal.

Contrast with Tybalt on how she developed despite her adoption origin and privilege.
How she is trying to pay her good fortune forward.
Overcoming her temper so she doesn't repeat a Stephen/Jade relationship cycle with the MC.

That potential drama bomb if the MC has fooled around with Jade.
The mystery of who her biological parents are if DPC explores that.
There is a potential nature versus nurture exploration there, to see what traits she inherits from her bio parents.

Quinn has her backstory with drug-dealing and using parents.
It's interesting how much she imitates her father and follows in his footsteps.
Will she end up like him or break the cycle?

The whole drug wars drama with Vinny and her father's scheming friend.
She has good character development if the MC is pursuing her, she opens up little by little.
She also has trust issues due to the nature of her upbringing.

Josy is that simple girl next door.
Good nature and base character, but hasn't grown or changed much.
Hopefully the spotlight will shine on her more in future updates.
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We do see Josy get over being worried about cumming to fast, and growth about her body plus with Becky we be not as nice to her. Josy might be the girl next door but doesn't mean she lack growth
 
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Darkwen said:
We do see Josy get over being worried about cumming to fast, and growth about her body plus with Becky we be not as nice to her. Josy might be the girl next door but doesn't mean she lack growth
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Becky is meaner towards Maya.
She is fairly pleasant towards Josy.
I agree, the fast cummer trait is another nice bit that supports her body issues.

It's hard not to make a joke about her "lacking growth.":ROFLMAO:
All in jest, I appreciate people whether they are short or tall.
Character is most important.

I agree that her body insecurities can definitely be explored more.
There is potential for that to become substantial.
Right now, I just don't see much growth or development there, no pun intended.
 
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Becky is meaner to Maya.
She is fairly pleasant towards Josy.
I agree, the fast cummer trait is another nice bit that supports her body issues.

It's hard not to make a joke about her "lacking growth.":ROFLMAO:
All in jest, I appreciate people whether they are short or tall.
Character is most important.

I agree that her body insecurities can definitely be explored more.
There is potential for that to become substantial.
Right now, I just don't see much growth or development there, no pun intended.
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Just don't short change Josy she kicks hard
 
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Maxiom said:
Josy is that simple girl next door.
Good nature and base character, but hasn't grown or changed much.
Hopefully the spotlight will shine on her more in future updates.
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100% agreed.

When that phone call from her dad happened, I was hoping for some drama, for something to throw a wrench in her story, to make it complicated.

Then her dad is like "oh, you're the guy she can't shut up about? Can't wait to meet you". Which is cool, but doesn't serve to spice up her story in any shape or form, especially relative to the other main girls

Then Tommy finds out about it, and I got super excited... but he just pouts and says "Sisterfucker".
Honestly, he took it way better than I expected him to.

It would be a shame if the drama in her story remained tied to Maya's, but I don't think that will be the case.

I think it'll have to be something with her mom, but who knows how long we'll have to wait to get to that...
 
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Elefex said:
Then Tommy finds out about it, and I got super excited... but he just pouts and says "Sisterfucker".
Honestly, he took it way better than I expected him to.
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Not gonna lie even tho it was funny it was a big disappointment for me. I been waiting for that scene when Tommy finds out and was such a anticlimactic scene for me personally. The wait and hype was not worth it haha
 
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Dessolos said:
Not gonna lie even tho it was funny it was a big disappointment for me. I been waiting for that scene when Tommy finds out and was such a anticlimactic scene for me personally. The wait and hype was not worth it haha
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Yeah, that scene was pretty disappointing. I was expecting another fight against Tommy, but I guess DPC wasn't interested in doing it. All I'm looking forward to for Chapter 11 is the rematch against caleb, but something tells me it's not going to happen. Well, at least I still have brawler. :HideThePain:
 
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Ray_D said:
Yeah, that scene was pretty disappointing. I was expecting another fight against Tommy, but I guess DPC wasn't interested in doing it. All I'm looking forward to for Chapter 11 is the rematch against caleb, but something tells me it's not going to happen. Well, at least I still have brawler. :HideThePain:
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For me Zoey and Sage drama / comforting her cause of her parents is what I look forward to the most in Chapter 11. Ironically both of those girls are tied for 1st place for me as my favorite waifu and they both ended with a bit of drama / a cliffhanger to their story that I look forward to seeing what is next
 
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Darkwen

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100% agreed.

When that phone call from her dad happened, I was hoping for some drama, for something to throw a wrench in her story, to make it complicated.

Then her dad is like "oh, you're the guy she can't shut up about? Can't wait to meet you". Which is cool, but doesn't serve to spice up her story in any shape or form, especially relative to the other main girls

Then Tommy finds out about it, and I got super excited... but he just pouts and says "Sisterfucker".
Honestly, he took it way better than I expected him to.

It would be a shame if the drama in her story remained tied to Maya's, but I don't think that will be the case.

I think it'll have to be something with her mom, but who knows how long we'll have to wait to get to that...
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It not like Josy story needs to get spicy that said Josy doesn't like her mom at all so I think there something there and likely can explain part of her insecurities and why she a daddy's girl (the best kind I might add :love: :love:)
 
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Yeah, that scene was pretty disappointing. I was expecting another fight against Tommy, but I guess DPC wasn't interested in doing it. All I'm looking forward to for Chapter 11 is the rematch against caleb, but something tells me it's not going to happen. Well, at least I still have brawler. :HideThePain:
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MC just has to poke Calab with a needle and let out the hot air problem solve :ROFLMAO:
 
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Darkwen said:
It not like Josy story needs to get spicy that said Josy doesn't like her mom at all so I think there something there and likely can explain part of her insecurities and why she a daddy's girl (the best kind I might add :love: :love:)
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Sure, it doesn't "need to get spicy".

But I am saying that one cannot disagree with the fact that Josy's story is (relatively) the least dramatic (so far!), and that essentially all of the drama in her story is tied to Maya.

Ray_D said:
Yeah, that scene was pretty disappointing. I was expecting another fight against Tommy, but I guess DPC wasn't interested in doing it. All I'm looking forward to for Chapter 11 is the rematch against caleb, but something tells me it's not going to happen. Well, at least I still have brawler. :HideThePain:
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Dessolos said:
Not gonna lie even tho it was funny it was a big disappointment for me. I been waiting for that scene when Tommy finds out and was such a anticlimactic scene for me personally. The wait and hype was not worth it haha
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Honestly, my biggest disappointment was that he got angry, but not angry enough.
It's pretty much telling that this will be his biggest outrage about it, and he'll just throw passive aggressive snide comments at the MC from now on.

Imagine if he saw Josy, and didn't have an outburst, and just left the mansion in quiet anger.
That would be interesting setup for future conflict with Tommy, unlike the state it is in now.
Wasted conflict potential, sadly.
 
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Riaman

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Dessolos said:
Might just need to do a replay to see her in a new light but idk it always felt her story / character development was always too focused on helping Maya then actually giving Josy some character development herself at least not that often till Season 3.
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Josy without Maya is the most vanilla and wholesome relationship. With only Tommy problem which might be even less since you are not double timing 2 girls.
 
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I think there should be a scene where the mc cums in Josy Maya then eats her out and gives us a passionate french kiss what a romantic moment that would be.
 
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