VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Become a Rock Star [v1.01] [Mr Jet]

A nice piece of life game

Not a masterpiece, but with enough qualities to make it worth trying

==== Chara Design :
The models are cute, and we have a good variety of looks. Their body shape are well done and sexy. Personality wise, we do see some differences of behaviour and approach, even if sometimes they have sudden sex drive/personality change that is a bit unrealistic and do not always fit.

==== Story/Background :
There is an effort to put a real life background and story. It is not always very interesting, but the context is there and you can get more or less invested into the game. The writing style is OK, but a bit scholar. I think it lacks a little fun and spontaneity to be great. The MC is maybe the character that I think could be improved in many ways, he is not very likeable. Music is quite good.

==== Sex/Animations :
The renders are good and numerous. The animations are quite simple and short but they are believable and they are getting better with the updates.
A lot of possible positions, and also some sex scenes are quite intense, especially the ones that are supposed to be filled with love (with lisa for example) that last part being well expressed during the scene. Great Job on that point.

==== Gameplay/Contents :
The contents are quite large, considering it is a VN. There is very few time wasted on grind or useless stuff, so the 5-6 hours of play that I had until v0.5 are new contents.
There is a hidden system of points, love points for each character, but also good/bad points on MC behaviour. The answers are a bit obvious to select, most of the time. Still it doesn't matter, because the main choices you will have is to select the girls you want to go further with, and the kind of relationship you want to have with them, which will impact the kind of guy you are. For the moment, I do not see the consequences of bad actions so much, but maybe that will happen later. Overall a good VN with choices and routes.
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We can feel this game was made with lot of thoughts and passion but the writing quality/pace, and the lack of fun prevents the game to be a masterpiece. It is not a very original game but it is still a good time to spend

Version: 0.55

PROS:
- Great renders of female character models
- Very good animations
- Very good sex scenes

CONS:
- The sounds of moaning are bad
- It has a silly story

Review:
One of the games that are really worth playing, I was very impressed with the quality of the renders and sexual content that it has.
History:
You are a handsome, rich guy, and instead of leading a playboy life, he prefer to start an (emo) rock band along with your buddy Jacob. At a certain point in history, I stopped following, the choices just change the path of which girl you want to go, so I didn't even waste time reading the dialogues / script. Logic, I followed the plot but I didn't waste any time reading. The history is one of the weaknesses of this game, it's very likely that you won't be interested, especially when it comes to the band and so on. But when it comes to fucking girls, why not.
Gameplay:
It is a simple VN without grinding, a little comfortable because some scenes are very boring, I say this because there are scenes of Lisa that you want to ignore. But maybe you like it, so there is no problem. In general, the choices are not important you will just choose which girl you want to see the content.
Graphics & Sex Content:
The most interesting and strong part of this game, without exaggeration in their bodies, the renderings of the female character models are great. The sexual content of this game is excellent, the animations are also great.

So, why did I give 4 stars?
The quality of this game is incredible, but its weakness remains in the story. But sometimes I end up not caring too much, but some scenes (non sexual), are a little stupid, like for example Lisa giving a cat a sausage ??? why waste time on this? and some others. But that doesn’t take away the shine of the game, due to the quality, the strong point is the renders and animations, for me it is among the best of several games I’ve played. So, anyway, I gave a 4 star rating it's more than fair, the game is also deserved 5 stars, the graphics quality is very good, it is not perfect but it is excellent.
But the story leaves a little to be desired.

This is one the stronger games that has come out lately. The game has plenty of content and plenty of great girls, the renders are beautiful and there are some worthwhile decisions to make.
At the same time it is one of those RenPy games, so if you like the overall style of those games, you will enjoy this one. However if you don't, then you won't like this game either, because it doesn't really stand apart by much.
The game however is still worth 5 stars in my opinion, as it does what it should do - it offers you a great time leading to some very nice sex scenes, plus points for the rather nice animations.

Great game and excellent rendering. It's really worth playing. Each and every character is different and possess unique quality. As per the title, The protagonist tries to become a rock star and story is very well build towards it.
It's worth a shot and Mr Jet should keep doing this impressive work.

Excellent game, full of beautiful women. It's very difficult to choose one. :-D But it's also well written and with a story that is developing each updates. I can't wait to play more episodes!!! Very recommended! In this moment one of the best games

Become A Rock Star ( Overall Score: 10 / 8.8 )
( Best Feature: All female characters beautiful. You can't choose one )

Humor: 10 / 5
Character Development: 10 / 10
Story: 10 / 8.5
Update time: 10 / 9
Content for each update: 10 / 9
Render: 10 /10

This game is 3rd place at my best 5 games list.

excellent story, romance, characters and art top notch quality, love absolutely everything about this game keep up the great work and keep the updates coming thanks very much to the author and the uploader

First of all, Mr Jet is obviously solid guy. We have updates almost every month, very beautiful renders and a lot of content already.
But except all of that, this game is nothing more than average. It's basically 'girlfriend simulator'.
Story is boring - you are rich 'rebellious' boy, who wants to be a band leader. It seems to me like 'American Pie/High School Musical' crossover.
Don't get me wrong. Author's writing skills are good, but this game's plot make me sleepy.

I still recommend you to give 'Become A Rock Star' a chance, but only
if you have nothing better to do at the moment.

One of the best adult VN ever.

Pros:

• Amazing renders, probably the best of any game out there
• Awesome animation, some of the best I’ve seen
• The female characters are absolutely stunning
• Plenty of romantic option to choose from
• Lots of H action
• There is depth to all the character, you can’t help but fall for them all
• Very well written

Cons:

• None whatsoever

Truly an adult VN masterpiece. A must try for everyone. Mr Jet deserves all the support he gets and more. Keep up the great work

Review for 0.50.

The story is very good, mc is striving to achieve his goals, while father blindly tries to stop him is a good base. It has a lot of potential.

The girls are gorgeous, with different forms and personalities.
Music, renders, animation and gallery are very good.

Selina and the combo Lisa + Jade are my personal choice.

Note: Because a girl is on the game that doesn't mean that the mc must have sex with her (Julia, yes she looks fantastic), get over it.
94,1 out of 100
On my profile ->about->on the website there is a link with reviews of other games.

First of all this is very good game. Dev are make very good job. perfect render, easy story, and all of the model are so perfect.
This is my first review and just for this game.
Maybe more audio can make everything are perfect.

(Note: This review contains spoilers.)

This is a well-above average game with some serious flaws. But the flaws can mostly be fixed with some editing, if the game creator wants.

The good:

1) The women in this game are really gorgeous.

2) The renders of the characters are great. I sometimes stopped just to look at how nice the skin textures looked in close-up.

3) The animations are exceptionally well done. The hand-jobs were especially nice - the skin is shown sliding a tiny bit up and down with the woman's hand, something I don't recall ever seeing in any other game's hand job animation, and it makes it look much more real.

4) This is a matter of taste. But if you find ridiculously huge boobs and monstrously huge cocks a turn-off, like I do, then you'll be really happy with the human-proportioned character designs in this game.

5) Two of the characters - Lisa, the lead singer of your band, and Selina, a red-headed neighbor - are especially nicely written, and likable as people. That's particularly surprising with Selina, who at first seems like a typical "I have no character beyond being someone for the MC to fuck" character, but turns out to be more.

I honestly began to feel a little guilty about the way I was guiding the MC to constantly cheat on Lisa. And that I was cheating on Selina with Selina's mother. (But it's a porn game, after all.)

The bad:

1) There's a disturbing scene with Marie, a girl you party with after a concert, in which she clearly doesn't want to have sex with the MC but the MC tries to bully her into it. It's not actually a rape scene - he eventually relents, and Marie offers him a hand job instead - but it's way too close, and it left me feeling shitty.

And the worst thing is, there's no way to avoid it. There's no hint that a near-rape scene is coming until you're actually in the scene. And there's no way to avoid it, once you're in the scene, other than quitting the game. Game developer, if you're reading this: Please add a "It looks like you're not into this, Marie. That's totally fine - we don't have to do anything. Let's just go back downstairs to the party and have a nice time" option to this scene!

(If you want to avoid the scene, then you can skip partying with Marie and Eva by going onto the bus with Lisa instead. Or, if you go to the party, stick to Eva like glue and avoid ever being alone with Marie. The good news is, Eva WANTS to have sex with you.)

2) The MILF looks 25 years old. 30 at the oldest. And she has an adult daughter.

3) There's an ongoing plot about the MC trying to build his career as a rock star despite his evil father's machinations, and it's very boring, and it goes on and on and on and on. It feels like a story a 12 year old makes up - "I'm going to form a rock band, and we're an instant hit, and everyone loves us," etc etc.

Sit down and edit all of these sequences! At least half of the dialog having to do with the evil dad and the rock career could be taken out without losing anything. And the game will be much better for it.

On the whole, a much-better-than-average game.

This was a very entertaining and cool game to play.

I loved the little Rock Star-esque minigames, I truly enjoyed the characters and writing. Sure, some of it was very predictable, but who cares?

It is a cool little game with memorable moments and characters (a tribute to the overall writing) and I look forward to more.

Lots of paths, lots of girls great renders flowing story and character development. You have a lot of freedom to chase girl/girls you want but cheating on Lisa tracked(possibly include other love interests later). Some of animations have to big a range of movement with to few renders and since using very basic loops it looks a bit off though overall the render quality makes up for it.

The real issue I had was with the common writing on every path. Instead of been neutral its decidedly creepy, perverted and predatory. MC also constantly leering and making inane comments about the girls and telling us in internal monologues how sexy they look and how much he wants a piece of them. It not only clashes badly with good paths its a waste of time as we have the pictures in front of us.

If this is an early stage of the game development, I gotta give props to the dev. This is an awesome game and what amuses me is the fact that all relationships have a great pace all along the game. The writing is very good, as well as the characters that are very arousing and sexy. It's been a while I've not seen such a game with this potential to become one of the greatest ones I've played so far. Keep up the awesome job, Mr Jet!

The renders are top quality and the same can also be said about the sex scenes. Couple that with a nice story and you already have a good Ren'py game,

But what really makes BEcome A Rock Star stand apart from other visual novels is how everyone can have their own relationship paths as the game progress.

For exemple in my game after my choices:

John, the protagonist, was with Selina, the shy woman turned wild. Meanwhile her mother Rosa also has her eyes on the protagonist body.
Jade and Lisa looked really nice together, they are a cute couple. ♥
Jacob with the "wonder sisters" Aki and Maki. It is really umcommon to see a game where the friend gets laid too.

And there is also Jane thirsting for John with some help from Julia, their best friend and sister. And i would not be surprise if Nicole also enter the fray in the future.

MrJet has my respect for daring to flesh out everyone's life like that.

Good Points
+ Renders looks really good and have amazing quality. Indoor and Outdoor renders looks detailed and good aswell.
+ Characrer drawings looks good and girls are hot!
+ Animated sex scenes has realy good quality, physics and they are maked very soft (High FPS).
+ Sex scenes has lots of options, angles and animations. Kisses, touching, caress etc... All of them has own animations. And this feels realy good.
+ Story is well written, promising and realy cool!
+ DEV makes realy good updates and give us good amount of content always and I appriacate this.

Bad Points
- DEV's head little bit mixed about content I gues. He gave us sister nude scene but same time he says we dont get incest in game. Not problem not all games need incest or like this fetish's but if you give us nude sister scene well pretty much everyone will be wait scene with her. So DEV need make scenes more logical. And he is making this so I dont cut his star for this but still this is little bit bad point.

For The End
I love this game realy. Story, renders, animations... Almost everything about this game is amazing. And this is why I will give this game 5 star! Keep it good work!

(( As of October 2020.. I have seen a lot of improvement in the story based on my earlier review, and have decided that the game is worthy of a 3.5 stars..so there goes...Keep up the good work))

First of all , credits to the team for the amazing improvement in the renders and animation.. they're amazing
Secondly, The story is absolutely way below average...Its kinda Bland and boring..Most of the characters are not that interesting. There is absolutely no tease and Zero effort from the MC in acquiring the girls..and its just cheap sex . The game just throws girls in your face like " here, have it...on the house".

As of v0.4, I say 8.5/10

I really enjoyed this game, from the engaging story and fluid plot to the interesting and beautiful cast of characters. The game is a delight to play and it's pretty fun to see what happens next.

The only issues I had with the game was hidden stat system and the whole serious relationship option early on with one of the key (if not the key) female leads. I found the serious relationship introduced early on to be a nice change of pace- problem was it is only presented clearly to a character i don't prefer and seems to be a hidden option for others.

The reason this a big deal is because as the player you don't have full information on what choices you are making- merely just reacting to the game. Sure this is solved with a guide, but even still, it's hard to know how many points you have and with whom.

Add on the fact that you have a Jane, Jade, Julia, Jessica, Jacob and I think a mention of an Aunt Jane, and it gets really confusing.

Another thing that bugged me was the abstract way money was treated. The game makes a big deal of what the MC doesn't have access to anymore, but it never seems to drive home what he isn't able to do. He still goes to fancy dinners, never really budgets, and has free time to do whatever. Sure he has to work, but it is sporactic at best.

But my issues are small potatoes to what was a wonderful experience. Hopefully moving forward, the plot divides up so people can get the content they want instead of having to go through it all.

Oh and I'm super excited to see the rest of the cast in the upcoming updates!
(Also more Jane PLEASE)

I love this game! It's one of my fave games and has a permanent spot in my top 5.
Love the art style, character look beautiful- they could be models irl. The story is engaging and it was fun exploring the different choices you could make.

Played at v0.4.

Update: I've just finished 0.45, I like how the story has progressed with Selina. That one conversation was a huge twist.

Umm one thing that I feel is missing out is how we've never returned to the club we work at. It'd be cool to have a few more scenes with Anna. Maybe you could include a sequence where the bouncer dude has figured out that we've slept with Anna he wants beef.

In short, Great progress! Can't wait for 0.5. Good luck!