A Wife And Mother Analyze

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Moricano

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First of all I wanted to leave the following written to the Author of the game in case he sees it one day.
I read in a message from you that you love to create this type of erotic game.
My Friend Author - You are good to play with content directed to the Infant class or the Class to Adult class of Real Life Novels.
Because if you continue to create these types of games by saying that you are Erotic Adult (Ouch) you will not get anywhere
This game takes place around a family of 4 members (Mae, Father, Daughter and Son)
It is not a game that you choose who you are going to be.
The protagonist here in this case will be you "You will only play with The mother who has two names Sophya or Mrs. Parker.
This is a real-life novel style game.
The Mother here in this game is very demure to everything that is disgusting and sinful .... Even if their levels of behavior are at most a little changed, because the Author of the game has created a game system to only simulate a sex, but this one sex never occurred because there are no sex scenes with other people in the world it was just beginning sex simulation .... but it would not have happened.
You only get sex here with your husband who calls Liam.
With other people forget.
What else this Mother loves to do is to bathe, everything for her is sin, if there is such a woman in the world I want to distance her.
This game is not open world where you can click and go back and forth as many times as you want.
It is a game that you click only to change the lines and click to make choices.
You do not need money, and you do not have to find anything ... The game is directed at content very very weak in terms of sex.
If you like gambling you have sex this is not for you.
The game in relation to graphics and effects is quite stimulating.
I've played this game to the end in the last version 2 times the second time I used the cheating mode and I put it in Good wife and Dirty Woman at the most did not change anything, in the matter of sex ..... Did not change because there is not even sex (lol).
The last version of this game was released in this Year of 2019 and tends to spread. Day2-18_14_Sophia_calls_Liam.jpg
 

Avaron1974

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I had to stop playing it, I couldn't take that writing anymore.

Pulls her dress trap down, shows the top of the boob that any other dress would show and she panics.

She is in her bikini and panics when her son sees her.

It's trash writing and it was painful to read. I've seen sheltered Christian girls more clued up than this supposed married mother. It is, hand on heart, one of the worst pieces of writing i've ever had the misfortune to attempt to read.

If the girl had been 11 and lived in a bunker all alone with nothing but a bible to read all her life it would make sense but a mature woman with children living in the suburbs with her husband ... fuck no.
 

Moricano

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I had to stop playing it, I couldn't take that writing anymore.

Pulls her dress trap down, shows the top of the boob that any other dress would show and she panics.

She is in her bikini and panics when her son sees her.

It's trash writing and it was painful to read. I've seen sheltered Christian girls more clued up than this supposed married mother. It is, hand on heart, one of the worst pieces of writing i've ever had the misfortune to attempt to read.

If the girl had been 11 and lived in a bunker all alone with nothing but a bible to read all her life it would make sense but a mature woman with children living in the suburbs with her husband ... fuck no.
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this game does not have anything erotic is a soap opera, text and little erotic fun, but there are people who like this style of play I hate.
 

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I had to stop playing it, I couldn't take that writing anymore.
You know, seeing you write this is kind of a relief. I always found the writing really bad, but I'm a male, so perhaps was I missing something or misunderstanding how far a prudish girl can go up and down. Then you finally come and summarize my thoughts in your comment. Thanks for that.


She is in her bikini and panics when her son sees her.
You forgot the best part. Then, less than one minute later, she think that wearing her bikini can be a good motivation for her son.
Never seen a girl pass from 100% prudish to whore so quickly.

[this you perhaps haven't seen it, it's in the last update ; yes, I still play it, my moment of 2nd degree entertainment]
Then she fall back to 100% prudish. Some days later, she met her son at the pool. He expect to have is reward since he behaved (hey, he goes as far as cleaning his bedroom to see his mother in a bikini), so he ask her to wear her bikini. And what she do ? Well, her usual internal whining...
 

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Mehh, to each their own. Kind of plays at the opposite end of the spectrum to most games of its genre, slowburn where the MC isn't a mentally stunted cum bucket by the second update (Just a mentally stunted prude :p). Though like people have pointed out it has its problems.

Honestly just playing for the lesbian routes, could care less about the other content.
 
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Forums are for sharing opinions. If you don't like them, nobody is forcing you to read them.
Also, every critic is good critic. Who knows, this may help the dev improve this game. I mean, I haven't played the last couple of updates but if it is true there is still no sexual content involving the MC, this can't be right.
This game has been in development for more than a year and a half. How much more do we hate to wait to get to the good parts? Decades?
 
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Forums are for sharing opinions. If you don't like them, nobody is forcing you to read them.
Of course, but if somebody just doesn't like one single aspect of a game, then maybe it's better to let it go...

The OP didn't mention one positive aspect of the game, but did spend a lot of time writing his critique. I wonder why. It doesn't make sense in my opinion. If I like a new game but have a few friendly suggestions for the dev, then sure I'll voice those. Sometimes this is appreciated, other times, not so much, that's life. If a game is not my cup of tea at all, this usually becomes clear in the first update or two, and then it's time to say goodbye.

This game on the other hand is already well underway. The dev seems to know what he's doing and is clearly committed to this style of storytelling. So, this kind of complaining doesn't bring anything in my opinion.
 

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The first release/episode got me a bit excited for the future, but then future came and sadly it didn't meet expectations :/ The last release was imho little more than a trainwreck. I like games with a slow build up, where you not a prime candidate for a plethora of venereal diseases by the 2nd release, but that require a good story as well.

I don't feel players should dictate creators how they make their games, but could be worth while listen to the critic and do better on whatever next game they make. Much better than try salvage something already ran into a ditch.
 

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The future ain't what it used to be. :)

The progression doesn't make sense, she reverts to type without the player's input. Starting her mind out more prudish than a nun didn't really help either.
 
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I saw the warning signs when the original release had let's say 100s(?) of renders in it and a tiny percentage were vaguely to mildly erotic. Having done some renders myself, I'm always questioning how much time to spend on the more mundane side of things. It was an early sign that this was either going to be the slowest build up in the world or the erotic part just wasn't really the focus. From the sound of it, it seems like it was option 2. I had some hope that it might be a slow burn and hit a tipping point, but hearing that it is lukewarm even now is disappointing. I mean make whatever game you want to make, guess this one isn't for me.
 
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I think its a triumph of hope and dreams over progress and delivery. Gave up on the thing ages ago. Noy sure if it in any way qualifies as an erotic game. A Victorian era porn game?
 
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It was an early sign that this was either going to be the slowest build up in the world or the erotic part just wasn't really the focus. From the sound of it, it seems like it was option 2. I had some hope that it might be a slow burn and hit a tipping point, but hearing that it is lukewarm even now is disappointing.
To be fair, the lesbian kissing scene in the pool between daughter and her two friends was quite hot. Even though it still wasn't full-on sex, I found it hotter than many sex scenes in several games. But I do think it will take a long time before anything really happens, especially with the MC.

A Victorian era porn game?
Maybe... But this game at least has nice renders of sportscars. They didn't have those back then. :p
 

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I saw the warning signs when the original release had let's say 100s(?) of renders in it and a tiny percentage were vaguely to mildly erotic. Having done some renders myself, I'm always questioning how much time to spend on the more mundane side of things. It was an early sign that this was either going to be the slowest build up in the world or the erotic part just wasn't really the focus. From the sound of it, it seems like it was option 2. I had some hope that it might be a slow burn and hit a tipping point, but hearing that it is lukewarm even now is disappointing. I mean make whatever game you want to make, guess this one isn't for me.
Slow burn games is nice as long as they got a good story to back it up. But sadly the "school bully" stuff in the last release made day time "soap" television series look like oscar winning material in comparison.
 

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I haven't played the last couple of updates but if it is true there is still no sexual content involving the MC, this can't be right.
Oh, but there is. With her husband. The thing is there hasn't been anything substantial since what? Last April? June? I don't remember. The next sex scene could even happen on the anniversary of the first.:)

There are plenty of VN's that do late sexual content only (Japanese though mostly), but they have the advantage of being released as a whole. I think AWAM is actually impressive that it gets the support it gets for the little it shows over time. Especially, as the plot is pretty much nonexistent. Maybe temptation is enough for some?:)
 
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Oh, but there is. With her husband. The thing is there hasn't been anything substantial since what? Last April? June? I don't remember. The next sex scene could even happen on the anniversary of the first.:)

There are plenty of VN's that do late sexual content only (Japanese though mostly), but they have the advantage of being released as a whole. I think AWAM is actually impressive that it gets the support it gets for the little it shows over time. Especially, as the plot is pretty much nonexistent. Maybe temptation is enough for some?:)
Well, there is those that like suffer from blue balls I guess :p
 
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