Now it ain't bad, but the visuals are gonna have to change. I understand it being unfinished, but the faces are unsettling. At this point just hire an artist for the characters. They are mostly static with a few different faces and outfits. The game has an interesting mechanic where every thing jiggles anything time a character moves, that was interesting. The writing isn't bad at all, so that wasn't too bad. The control mechanic was interesting.
The game has gotta add hints. Finding what days events happen or when you can progress a character was frustrating. Adding more time in a day would be nice. I can't be too critical because it is very unfinished, but there is room for improve on what is there. Regardless, if they change the faces then the game would be pretty nice. If you wanted by advice, creator who is never gonna see this, make an option to have them as your step-children. Also, if time allows, make a male character. That is more a personal thing, but it would be interesting because half the cast is female.
The game has gotta add hints. Finding what days events happen or when you can progress a character was frustrating. Adding more time in a day would be nice. I can't be too critical because it is very unfinished, but there is room for improve on what is there. Regardless, if they change the faces then the game would be pretty nice. If you wanted by advice, creator who is never gonna see this, make an option to have them as your step-children. Also, if time allows, make a male character. That is more a personal thing, but it would be interesting because half the cast is female.