A Plot for animated game!

[Joshua Tree]

why are you so warm?
what have I done to you?
take a chamomile tea haha

Uh, if you can't handle critique. Why pitch something like this to start with?

As I said above, write a proper story and make a manuscript and then you have something more worth the while to pitch.

 

[NotoriousBigCock]

Uh, if you can't handle critique. Why pitch something like this to start with?

As I said above, write a proper story and make a manuscript and then you have something more worth the while to pitch.

Okay, criticism is fine, but I prefer constructive criticism.
Maybe by the developers

 

[おい！]

Uh, if you can't handle critique. Why pitch something like this to start with?

As I said above, write a proper story and make a manuscript and then you have something more worth the while to pitch.

Because one person has told them it is a great plot.

 

[Yayayay999]

I wish there was a game like this...
With this plot also!

 

[Joshua Tree]

Okay, criticism is fine, but I prefer constructive criticism.
Maybe by the developers

Jupp because I didn't give you any "constructive" advice.... right?

 

[Joshua Tree]

Because one person has told them it is a great plot.

Standards... not everyone got them, or maybe there been so many bad games out there as well, so people just don't have that high expectations any longer? idk.

 

[NotoriousBigCock]

Jupp because I didn't give you any "constructive" advice.... right?

So so

 

[pasunna]

well... you want someone to make your plot real?
better start from write one of your owns
every dev already had their plot in their head
and true to be told... a lot of it...

just one random little plot from you never make they interest in

unless you write your plot to finish as a novel
with a real scene and dialogue
and got like some hundred of follower
then they will start talking
less than that
it just another plot that they are day dreaming in like every 5 minute...

 

[おい！]

Okay, criticism is fine, but I prefer constructive criticism.
Maybe by the developers

I gave you constructive criticism

So Johns wife goes out for a walk and dosen't return?
Yet John does not search for her or reports her missing to the police?
Is Johns 18 year old daughter retarded, because you say that he needs to look after her?
Why would it take John 2 months to realize that he needs to feed his daughter, because she obviously does not have the mental ability to look after herself?
If John has witnessed his daughter masturbating and shouting out her dads name, why would there be any need for corruption? Johns daughter is already wanting her dad sexually.
I take it that Johns daughter has never had sex ed, because if she had she would know what a blowjob is. Oh I forgot she is not mentally capable of looking after herself at the age of 18, so she is probably not mentally capable of understanding sex ed at school.

 

[HopesGaming]

I would say it doesn't matter if the script is good or bad.
The problem is that ideas are plentiful and never in demand.
People start working on their games exactly because they got an idea. Some may need writers to finish it or make it more detailed. But usually they want their own stories be told.

Best thing you can do is to make it yourself. Of course that is easiere said than done but it is how it is.

Or you could pay someone to make it. But that is Hella expensive

 

[Joshua Tree]

well... you want someone to make your plot real?
better start from write one of your owns
every dev already had their plot in their head
and true to be told... a lot of it...

just one random little plot from you never make they interest in

unless you write your plot to finish as a novel
with a real scene and dialogue
and got like some hundred of follower
then they will start talking
less than that
it just another plot that they are day dreaming in like every 5 minute...

I have a feeling if you a decent writer and present a good story in manuscript form with dialogues and scene descriptions to some game dev, they would be more inclined to look at what you bring to the table.

Tbh I believe quite a few creators just start out with a general idea in their head, end up with plot holes and paint themselves into corners because of solid groundwork to start with in regard of story.

 

[pasunna]

I have a feeling if you a decent writer and present a good story in manuscript form with dialogues and scene descriptions to some game dev, they would be more inclined to look at what you bring to the table.

Tbh I believe quite a few creators just start out with a general idea in their head, end up with plot holes and paint themselves into corners because of solid groundwork to start with in regard of story.

um... sorry haha...
I'm not sure because I'm not that good on english
you quote me because you agree or disagree?
I feel that it's not even need to quote me something like that -...-

yes dev will be inclined by a good plot
but that only with a dev that want other one to do story

and... to be a dev
mostly they want to be head of the project
hardly they want to be the follower

like this op
every one is a thinker and want their dream to be real
and dev is someone that get up and try to make their idea to be real
so unless they don't have their owns plot or they aren't confident on their writing skill
hardly any dev will want to do other people plot
Even if it is an excellent legendary plot...

but if it is a company game that on the other hand
the one who choose is not one man
it is a business decision

 

[GiusLosch]

FMFM this plot has a few holes. The plot is a bit sparse but the idea is excellent. I also find it exciting!
especially the fact that the daughter increasingly desires the father...very exciting!
I really liked the idea of the trip in the countryside and the photos.
Such a game is missing!


PS:I am not a developer but a mere consumer

 

[NotoriousBigCock]

FMFM this plot has a few holes. The plot is a bit sparse but the idea is excellent. I also find it exciting!
especially the fact that the daughter increasingly desires the father...very exciting!
I really liked the idea of the trip in the countryside and the photos.
Such a game is missing!


PS:I am not a developer but a mere consumer

Thanks very much!

 

[GiusLosch]

+1

 

[Joshua Tree]

FMFM this plot has a few holes. The plot is a bit sparse but the idea is excellent. I also find it exciting!
especially the fact that the daughter increasingly desires the father...very exciting!
I really liked the idea of the trip in the countryside and the photos.
Such a game is missing!


PS:I am not a developer but a mere consumer

Really? Dad, Daughter.. Photos.... https://f95zone.to/threads/dating-my-daughter-ch-1-3-v0-25-mrdots-games.597/

 

[pasunna]

and you know what...
in fact I feel fishy at the start of reading this thread...
something feel so wrong...haha

 

[GiusLosch]

Really? Dad, Daughter.. Photos.... https://f95zone.to/threads/dating-my-daughter-ch-1-3-v0-25-mrdots-games.597/

in my opinion these are two different plots

 

[GiusLosch]

and you know what...
in fact I feel fishy at the start of reading this thread...
something feel so wrong...haha

Why?

 

[Joshua Tree]

in my opinion these are two different plots

The only plot is; wife is gone, dad & daughter hook up. Rest is just sex scenes... So what is the big difference?

Describe a sex scene is not a plot.