Review of version 0.03.01.
This is a pretty good kinetic novel. (There are no player choices here.)
The twist in the presentation here is that the story is told from the perspective of two protagonists in fully separate paths. We see the story first from one character's perspective and then from the other's. This technique is especially effective during the parts of the story when the two characters are away from each other. It's less interesting during the earlier sections when they are essentially together all the time. There are options at the beginning of the story to totally skip this method of story flow and to only see one side or another of the story, although it's unclear to me why anyone would choose to do this.
As with most kinetic novels, any success hangs on the story and writing, and both are good here. The story is more TV movie than great literature, but that's perfectly fine in this context. The various characters have distinct personalities, and, at least to me, act in a fairly plausible manner. As in most TV movies, their actions depend a bit more on misunderstandings and miscommunication than they should.
I should also mention the excellent work done here to place the characters in distinct and accurately-depicted real-life locations such as UMD, the Eastern Shore, and the coast of Catalonia.
Among contemporary games, the renders/graphics are only serviceable here. This is not a huge problem, considering the focus is on the story, but they certainly could be improved and be more of an asset to the game. At the moment they are low-ish res and the colors and lighting are generally muddy.
Overall, though, I am enjoying this story and interested in finding out how things turn out for our star-crossed lovers.
This is a pretty good kinetic novel. (There are no player choices here.)
The twist in the presentation here is that the story is told from the perspective of two protagonists in fully separate paths. We see the story first from one character's perspective and then from the other's. This technique is especially effective during the parts of the story when the two characters are away from each other. It's less interesting during the earlier sections when they are essentially together all the time. There are options at the beginning of the story to totally skip this method of story flow and to only see one side or another of the story, although it's unclear to me why anyone would choose to do this.
As with most kinetic novels, any success hangs on the story and writing, and both are good here. The story is more TV movie than great literature, but that's perfectly fine in this context. The various characters have distinct personalities, and, at least to me, act in a fairly plausible manner. As in most TV movies, their actions depend a bit more on misunderstandings and miscommunication than they should.
I should also mention the excellent work done here to place the characters in distinct and accurately-depicted real-life locations such as UMD, the Eastern Shore, and the coast of Catalonia.
Among contemporary games, the renders/graphics are only serviceable here. This is not a huge problem, considering the focus is on the story, but they certainly could be improved and be more of an asset to the game. At the moment they are low-ish res and the colors and lighting are generally muddy.
Overall, though, I am enjoying this story and interested in finding out how things turn out for our star-crossed lovers.