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I think it too..
Focus back to mother again begin on episode 16 ending after father had affair.
Episode 14-15 focus on 2sisters, 2aunt, also adopted sister.
The relationship between mc and lady is supposed to be mother-son, but in latest update it is best friend's son-aunt. Isn't it??
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Hi there,
Please find attached a patchfile for all typos found for up to chapter 12.
Please find attached a patchfile for all typos found for up to chapter 12.
- Aug 27, 2020
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APR 24, 2022 AT 4:56 AM
Close to completion. Nearing release in just a few days.
Dear Patrons, we're getting close to completion of Episode 14. Will be just a few days till release. We're on track towards the ETA specified in the previous post, plus or minus a couple of days. Please look for the release in the coming days. I do not want to specify an exact date and miss it. But the release will happen within this month. If not, I will suspend billing before the month ends. Thank you all so much
I think next release will be in 2023 or in autumn.
- May 2, 2019
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Because episode 13 is a standalone build (he divide the game because of increasing size)
- Sep 7, 2019
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So, if anyone is like me, they might be sorely disappointed by the grammar, capitalization, spelling, typos, incorrect speakers, missing or superfluous parentheses, and other assorted errors that litter this game making it a chore to read through and often a puzzle to figure out who said what.
Luckily for you other perverted nerds that get bothered by this stuff, I have taken it upon myself to proofread the script and now provide it free of charge to whoever would like to use it (including Temptress Games should they deem to fix their many, many errors. Seriously, hundreds if not thousands of corrections). The first step was just running it through a standard spellcheck (I don't know how this is not SOP for any game designer, as it caught several hundred issues right off the bat). Then the vast majority of the somewhat random capitalization was corrected. Finally a single long read through of all 44000 lines to manually correct issues as they came up, especially including correcting the speaker title being wrong and also incorrect parentheses & italics to indicate thoughts.
While I should have caught the vast majority of straightforward issues, I'm sure there's still some problems that slipped by. Maybe I'll go back once the game is complete and try again. Maybe.
Known things I didn't fix include a lot of punctuation such as double periods and missing commas, also not every line has ending punctuation as it probably should. I did fix a lot, just not all of it. I also didn't alter the CONSTANT YELLING that is throughout. It would have required too much typing (use of two hands not always available, hehe) and a different method of providing emphasis like I believe the author is intending.
I tried not to alter the actual content too much, but a few things I just couldn't stand for. So there's no more "WASSUP!" every morning. It's now "What's up". Also no "lemme" in place of "let me", and other various stupid juvenile phrases replaced. I also split a few lines or added a couple to make things clearer, and added a few completely new lines to jazz up the pregnancy talk (less than ten I swear, it's just my other kink, and was already there but lacking. Sue me.).
Finally, this is only for episodes 1-12 so far, and is based off the incest patch (as in it already includes incest as it should). Installation is the same as the original patch, simply save the new patch as "script.rpy" file, put it into the "game" folder, and replace the one that already exists.
*Edit 2023/03/31 - Link to done the same way.
Luckily for you other perverted nerds that get bothered by this stuff, I have taken it upon myself to proofread the script and now provide it free of charge to whoever would like to use it (including Temptress Games should they deem to fix their many, many errors. Seriously, hundreds if not thousands of corrections). The first step was just running it through a standard spellcheck (I don't know how this is not SOP for any game designer, as it caught several hundred issues right off the bat). Then the vast majority of the somewhat random capitalization was corrected. Finally a single long read through of all 44000 lines to manually correct issues as they came up, especially including correcting the speaker title being wrong and also incorrect parentheses & italics to indicate thoughts.
While I should have caught the vast majority of straightforward issues, I'm sure there's still some problems that slipped by. Maybe I'll go back once the game is complete and try again. Maybe.
Known things I didn't fix include a lot of punctuation such as double periods and missing commas, also not every line has ending punctuation as it probably should. I did fix a lot, just not all of it. I also didn't alter the CONSTANT YELLING that is throughout. It would have required too much typing (use of two hands not always available, hehe) and a different method of providing emphasis like I believe the author is intending.
I tried not to alter the actual content too much, but a few things I just couldn't stand for. So there's no more "WASSUP!" every morning. It's now "What's up". Also no "lemme" in place of "let me", and other various stupid juvenile phrases replaced. I also split a few lines or added a couple to make things clearer, and added a few completely new lines to jazz up the pregnancy talk (less than ten I swear, it's just my other kink, and was already there but lacking. Sue me.).
Finally, this is only for episodes 1-12 so far, and is based off the incest patch (as in it already includes incest as it should). Installation is the same as the original patch, simply save the new patch as "script.rpy" file, put it into the "game" folder, and replace the one that already exists.
*Edit 2023/03/31 - Link to done the same way.
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So basicly we need to start all over thats a pain or should we basicly just wait till he found a better way and thanks alot for awnsering my questions guys I appriciate it
thats a pain or should we basicly just wait till he found a better way and thanks alot for awnsering my questions guys I appriciate it
- Jun 4, 2021
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You don't need to start over.
From ep 13 it's like seasons of a series, so now it's season 2.
The "funny" thing though is that all the choices you made in ep1-12 mean nothing in ep13....and at least ep13 was a kinetic novell, without choices.
From ep 13 it's like seasons of a series, so now it's season 2.
The "funny" thing though is that all the choices you made in ep1-12 mean nothing in ep13....and at least ep13 was a kinetic novell, without choices.
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Some really bad word or spelling mistakes in this. "We sre did Aunt Stacy" or "You seem nigh inseparable these days". Also, the Son should be saying "You're really becoming the deep throat queen", not the Mom.
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I've noticed that too when reading through the script, I merely changed the flags to change their relationships and include incest, but hey...I don't get paid to fix his game, if anyone wants to fix his bad grammar and spelling then I am sure this thread would appreciate it.
I see 13lokiz managed to fix the dialogue from episodes 1-12, perhaps he would be generous enough to do the same for episode 13.
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