Badboyoz

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I decided to make a game of it, really. Do you know if there is a thread on this forum where I can find teammates? Or those who are interested can write to me. I studied scriptwriting at university and I'm sure I can do a much better job than this rubbish.
 

PietruccioTheHilander

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as I had already said. the update is mediocre.
always Sophia's usual internal monologues, but then she does everything the opposite of what she thinks.
But that's okay, it's a game and let's move on.
Sam's little event is enough, I like it when Sophia takes the lead but as always with all L&P events they always leave the spice at home.
For example in this scene here
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Sophia's robe could have been a little more open and showed a little breast to Sam.

In the next scene I don't understand one thing, are the women touching each other outside their underwear?
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why isn't her hand inside her underwear?
I ask GingerSweetGirl

In the sauna scene, the only thing I liked was the reveal that Sophia is Ellie's mom, at least it brings that sense of transgression to the story that it needs.

in this scene here,

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how does the towel stay together? is there a pin? a button? I think it should have fallen to the ground completely.

Something is missing perhaps here

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this moment lasts too short, Sophia's hands are removed immediately, instead a short handjob on Tyler's cock would have been better.

The scene of Ellie and Sophia in the bathroom all good, the only good scene for me.

About the change in Sophia's face. I say nothing; we've already talked about it: it was a mistake.

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Bishop Robert

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So is Ellie forgiving Logan the better choice if you want to be more slutty then?

I thought her breaking things off with him would just leave more room for things to happen for Ellie.
 

PietruccioTheHilander

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So is Ellie forgiving Logan the better choice if you want to be more slutty then?

I thought her breaking things off with him would just leave more room for things to happen for Ellie.


both sentences are true,
if he forgives logan Sophia is more slutty with everyone,
if she doesn't forgive him she's a slut only with her
 

PietruccioTheHilander

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my game ends (shows the to be continued) after ellie and sophia chatting in the bathroom, anybody know why?
you made different choices in the past and therefore you are on a different path. This is a topic already discussed in the past, it is the consequence of having many branches in the other beam and therefore many variables turned on/off
 

JustAUser89

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I read through all the shit with the dudes and then, I was like, time for some Ellie and Sophia action only to be turned off by the bad kissing animation. I said it can't get worse than that.

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How did you manage to screw her face that much man?!!!!!!! He did all the other things right but like who is that supposed to be man?????? We want Sophia licking Ellies pussy not some random ass woman. Hire a dude who can export Daz scenes to Blender and arrange the materials correctly. And stop it with the closed eyes, the characters look like either they are about to fall asleep at every scene or that they are the biggest creeps around.

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merin_aspic

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