Ren'Py My Personal Succubus [v0.1] [NaughtyVerse]

[NaughtyVerse]

Game have huge potencial, really !!! I thinking about definitly put some content like [ measure it cock and compares ] [ more thigh clothes ] too small condoms , compare to husband, cuckolding, if he go to school then can call him first a BUL-shit boy and after a bulge boy, more Milfs, but don't make then naked very fast if so and u want please make this hotter and covered it's more sexy, definitly more situation with his MC penis size, for example MC he is virgin becouse he said in the showe he never saw a naked women so now his penis size grow he get more curoius about it and he found a condom of her husband who's left for that moment, She will catch him how he try tu put this on his penis, After she say she can help him to go an pharmacy to find his proper size, beacouse they don't know they pharmacist said, okay if that way go to small room take that measure and after choose the properly condom pack [ each condom pack have size board etc ] he said there is any of that... I can make u a dialoge of course with better english then now beacouse im rush haha

Yes, i'm thinking about a lot of fun moments involving his size.

You gave me some good ideas, thanks.

 

[goulet1995]

Optional with mc involved only.

when you say optional do you mean the player will have a choice to make it so it dosnt happen at all and that choice will be reflected in the game going foreward?

or is it an option to just skip over it meaning the scene still happened but the player didnt see it happen

 

[Earngame]

I have questions, when we get first release, it's be a novel or sandbox ?
what u think about make a neighbor family and they be a one screw up family haha for example Father it's a rich [ with normal cock size ] but he is a into cuckolding and perverting like spying everyone he can,Wife she is perfect house wife perfect cooking , cleaning etc but insecret she have enorumous colecction of dildos [ but not that big as our MC ] the Daugther [ 18+ of course ]
she have an boyfriend and she walk to same class with our MC. same as her brother they are Twin, so first her brother meet MC and invite him to his home, His sister ale Mistress and love Domination men she think ther is not a men who couldchange her mind, the brother are pervet who like peeping his mom and jerk off to her and main think it's they are Catholic Asians. I don't know if u like it [ NaughyVerse] I'm just boring so wanna help haha

 

[Earngame]

It could be nice it the neighbourhood be like a mixed country and race, something different that could make more strange and funny situations, for example he go to Black family and they love they culture and ancestors so one time in month they change clothes to they ancestors and dance to fire, so MC wearing a Ancestor clothes and boom he is too big for that then Black house wife are schock becouse she think her Husband are the biggest ever see and had, before this situation they can laugh from MC they will think he put socks to pants to make him BIG and wife will make a lot jokes from this, or she will buy him an XXL condoms and say even my husband don't use this

 

[hentai charley]

Maybe an incest patch will make the dead mother to a dead foster or step mother and the incest fans happy. As similiar as they both seem to look, it might work...

It's probably simpler to just change "Mother's friend" to "aunt" or "older sister".

 

[NaughtyVerse]

when you say optional do you mean the player will have a choice to make it so it dosnt happen at all and that choice will be reflected in the game going foreward?

or is it an option to just skip over it meaning the scene still happened but the player didnt see it happen

You will choose if it will happen, but it's nothing that will impact the game in the future, just some extra scenes during a threesome, for example.... But it might take a while before i add those.

 

[NaughtyVerse]

I have questions, when we get first release, it's be a novel or sandbox ?

Sandbox, and will probably be out within a month.

what u think about make a neighbor family and they be a one screw up family haha for example Father it's a rich [ with normal cock size ] but he is a into cuckolding and perverting like spying everyone he can,Wife she is perfect house wife perfect cooking , cleaning etc but insecret she have enorumous colecction of dildos [ but not that big as our MC ] the Daugther [ 18+ of course ]
she have an boyfriend and she walk to same class with our MC. same as her brother they are Twin, so first her brother meet MC and invite him to his home, His sister ale Mistress and love Domination men she think ther is not a men who couldchange her mind, the brother are pervet who like peeping his mom and jerk off to her and main think it's they are Catholic Asians. I don't know if u like it [ NaughyVerse] I'm just boring so wanna help haha

Lot of ideas haha
I'm thinking about a few families to add, and i'll keep in mind your suggestions.

 

[NaughtyVerse]

It could be nice it the neighbourhood be like a mixed country and race, something different that could make more strange and funny situations, for example he go to Black family and they love they culture and ancestors so one time in month they change clothes to they ancestors and dance to fire, so MC wearing a Ancestor clothes and boom he is too big for that then Black house wife are schock becouse she think her Husband are the biggest ever see and had, before this situation they can laugh from MC they will think he put socks to pants to make him BIG and wife will make a lot jokes from this, or she will buy him an XXL condoms and say even my husband don't use this

There are some characters from diferent races planned, i might show some in the next update.

 

[yiyi1111]

THX

 

[Earngame]

Can't wait for update =D

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Reeling from the loss of your mother, you feel adrift until her best friend extends an invitation
for you to come live with her in your hometown, a place you haven't seen in six years.
It is there that your life takes a dramatic turn.​

Reeling from the loss of my sanity, I felt the need to work on the overview.

Haha, I didn't lose my sanity, I just can't find it right now.

The game looks interesting.
Thanks for the share. NaughtyVerse

I don't think you have enough soap for the MCs member.

Feel free to use the overview

 

[mdmnsjs1]

this game is loaded with errors pretty much unplayable

 

[NaughtyVerse]

this game is loaded with errors pretty much unplayable

If you're using a save from the demo, it won't work, you'll have to start a new game.

But it the error is when you start a new game, post the log here please.

 

[Ghostery]

I can't wait to see what happens next !!!

 

[buktccbfc71]

Yes, i'm thinking about a lot of fun moments involving his size.

You gave me some good ideas, thanks.

"more Milfs, but don't make then naked very fast"........... .....I COMPLETELY AGREE. Create a love affair. Your game will become even more interesting.

 

[Buryat Supremacy]

So far so good. I like character design, abnormally large penis in particular. This could be intresting.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

Now about your questions:

* The MC wasn't asleep for too long, i didn't specified but it was for one day or two;
* About the personalities, it is still early to notice, but Henry is an asshole, Kate is a kind and caring mother, Holly is a responsible girl with good grades and all, and the MC is indeed very insecure and kind of dumb, he's very sad about his mother and blames himself for Kate's problems with Henry
* About the female characters, i'm planning to add a lot, classmates, teachers, neighbours...
* About his penis... Yes, it will impact the story, if you noticed on the shower scene, even the MC got surprised it suddenly got bigger, there's a reason for that.

And about the jokes, i loved the beach one and will definitely add it to the game haha.

Now about the problems of this game:

1- You mention how Kate is a friend of the family that lost contact when MC and his mom moved
2- you wrote that Kate cares for MC like a son, and yet they lost contact, and apparently she never bothered to stay in contact
3- but suddenly she is there for MC, at the hospital
4- MC was in a coma for 2 days, i guess MC's mom got an autopsy and got a funeral in that amount of time...how odd, how dismissive, the "recruit"(she is either a trainee or a new officer, but never heard anyone call people like her as "recruits" in formal situations)'s hesitation makes me think there is something that Bradley is trying to hide or make sure that MC accepts the situation fast, so that MC won't make problematic questions...

also please use LanguageTool or Grammarly, or GoogleDocs for some grammar-checking

PS: change font, is painful to read it.

 

[NaughtyVerse]

Now about the problems of this game:

1- You mention how Kate is a friend of the family that lost contact when MC and his mom moved
2- you wrote that Kate cares for MC like a son, and yet they lost contact, and apparently she never bothered to stay in contact
3- but suddenly she is there for MC, at the hospital
4- MC was in a coma for 2 days, i guess MC's mom got an autopsy and got a funeral in that amount of time...how odd, how dismissive, the "recruit"(she is either a trainee or a new officer, but never heard anyone call people like her as "recruits" in formal situations)'s hesitation makes me think there is something that Bradley is trying to hide or make sure that MC accepts the situation fast, so that MC won't make problematic questions...

Those things were not misplaced, i added them for a reason, and they'll be answered in the future.

also please use LanguageTool or Grammarly, or GoogleDocs for some grammar-checking

PS: change font, is painful to read it.

I'll try them, english is not my main language so i'm sure i made some grammar mistakes.

I'll review the fonts for the next version as well.

 

[mdmnsjs1]

If you're using a save from the demo, it won't work, you'll have to start a new game.

But it the error is when you start a new game, post the log here please.

i started from the beginning and its pretty much errors

 

[TurhaanKoitatte]

I hope that future lesbian content will be completely avoidable, i.e. not even happening in the background. Skipping is not enough.