VN Ren'Py My Dorm [v0.17.0 P2 Ch.5.0] [Tropecita Games]

[dabujapanasi]

The same is with the game, inside of the game. About the same characters.
Mise en abyme.
Do the characters in the game, which is in the game, also will find and start to play the game about themselves?

 

[dabujapanasi]

Well, seems that I won the Ginger Lottery then, I had 3 and all were the sweetest and nicest girls I ever had, sure they all had temper but somehow, they were not so violent
exept my acutal better half, (she is blackhaired)

There 4 gingers in the game (maybe will be more).

 

[S1nsational]

The game is brilliant, but now I am confused.
I speak about the Part 2 in the game, the day, when Saira arrived by plane.
The main character met and took home Scarlett at 10. 00 a. m. Then he moved to the airport, at 14. 00 p .m. Took Saira home. Then he visited the house with Samantha, where her daughter saw them together.
After this he went home, found there Norah and Erika in bikini, at the swimming pool, and said them: "Good morning."
How is this possible? This can be evening or very late afternoon. They told him, all others are shopping in the downtown.
In the evening?
And still - is this suddenly the next day? How? Where disappeared the whole day?

And one more question: a little before, when the main character make love with Samantha, he told her, how he loves her green eyes.
I am not sure, that she has green eyes.
She is gorgeous, but I'm sure, she can have only black eyes, or dark brown eyes.
You understand, why.

Good morning is often said to people you know well who wake up late, regardless of the time of day. I imagine it's something like that

As for the eyes, it could easily be explained by there being people with green eyes in their family three. Honestly I really don't think any of us here are experts in genetics enough to say with absolute certainty what eye colour anyone of any skin colour can have especially not know how many or how few mixed race couples populate their family three

 

[dabujapanasi]

I will be little bit rude (without any bad intentions), just I do not understand.
The main character has very beautiful women at home.
Then started to arrive the students. I was waiting them, because I thought, that they will be beauties, too.
Not at all.
So why he need them? He has better at home.
Plus then there arrived 2 old women (granny and nun). Ok, I understand, perhaps they are nice as people.
But they are not beauties again!
Maybe Saira is cute. But others students. Why was necessary to put them into story?
He did not start the romantic relationship with 2 beauties Amanda and Eva yet, but he need fat girl, girl with problems with her skin and arrogant girl.
Why?

 

[MarsUltor]

If you don't like redheads, why did you go out with her? I also had a redhead girlfriend once and she didn't stab me. But sometimes I "stabbed" her.

"Impaled" might be more technically correct, but "point" taken, either way...

 

[FatGiant]

About the eye-colors:

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Peace

 

[dabujapanasi]

Good morning is often said to people you know well who wake up late, regardless of the time of day. I imagine it's something like that

As for the eyes, it could easily be explained by there being people with green eyes in their family three. Honestly I really don't think any of us here are experts in genetics enough to say with absolute certainty what eye colour anyone of any skin colour can have especially not know how many or how few mixed race couples populate their family three

Man, in my country it is not a common thing. If you in evening or very late afternoon will tell somebody: "Good morning!", they will look on you, like you are crazy.
There just in one situation you can say: "Good morning!", when is not a morning at all: when you want to insult another person, because then the meaning of this phrase will be: "Aha, you are stupid, but looks like you wake up. The reality is different, stop dreaming!"

 

[S1nsational]

I will be little bit rude (without any bad intentions), just I do not understand.
The main character has very beautiful women at home.
Then started to arrive the students. I was waiting them, because I thought, that they will be beauties, too.
Not at all.
So why he need them? He has better at home.
Plus then there arrived 2 old women (granny and nun). Ok, I understand, perhaps they are nice as people.
But they are not beauties again!
Maybe Saira is cute. But others students. Why was necessary to put them into story?
He did not start the romantic relationship with 2 beauties Amanda and Eva yet, but he need fat girl, girl with problems with her skin and arrogant girl.
Why?

Your taste in women is as terrible as your English.

 

[johnpouljones]

I will be little bit rude (without any bad intentions), just I do not understand.
The main character has very beautiful women at home.
Then started to arrive the students. I was waiting them, because I thought, that they will be beauties, too.
Not at all.
So why he need them? He has better at home.
Plus then there arrived 2 old women (granny and nun). Ok, I understand, perhaps they are nice as people.
But they are not beauties again!
Maybe Saira is cute. But others students. Why was necessary to put them into story?
He did not start the romantic relationship with 2 beauties Amanda and Eva yet, but he need fat girl, girl with problems with her skin and arrogant girl.
Why?

But whether MC needs a relationship with any of the girls is entirely your decision. In my game I didn't include all the girls in the harem. Only selected ones. You can do the same.

 

[dabujapanasi]

As for the eyes, it could easily be explained by there being people with green eyes in their family three. Honestly I really don't think any of us here are experts in genetics enough to say with absolute certainty what eye colour anyone of any skin colour can have especially not know how many or how few mixed race couples populate their family three

I mean nothing bad, but, man, just learn genetics.

 

[dabujapanasi]

Your taste in women is as terrible as your English.

My English is brilliant. Don't be envious.

 

[S1nsational]

Man, in my country it is not a common thing. If you in evening or very late afternoon will tell somebody: "Good morning!", they will look on you, like you are crazy.
There just in one situation you can say: "Good morning!", when is not a morning at all: when you want to insult another person, because then the meaning of this phrase will be: "Aha, you are stupid, but looks like you wake up. The reality is different, stop dreaming!"

It'd be more teasing here, but that's mostly depending on tone, and on how close the people involved are. Saying it to your aunt and cousin both of whom, even ignoring any incest, you're incredibly close with, wouldn't be said as a insult. It'd be like saying "morning sleepyhead".

 

[ThorinKing]

My English is brilliant. Don't be envious.

Your English sucks. As for the rest of your rambling and poorly written critique, if you'd read the OP, you wouldn't need to ask any of these questions. As for "good morning", that seems to be a cultural difference and you must come from a place that is entirely too uptight. In the end, I think you're just another troll.

My list will grow again.

 

[FatGiant]

I will be little bit rude (without any bad intentions), just I do not understand.
The main character has very beautiful women at home.
Then started to arrive the students. I was waiting them, because I thought, that they will be beauties, too.
Not at all.
So why he need them? He has better at home.
Plus then there arrived 2 old women (granny and nun). Ok, I understand, perhaps they are nice as people.
But they are not beauties again!
Maybe Saira is cute. But others students. Why was necessary to put them into story?
He did not start the romantic relationship with 2 beauties Amanda and Eva yet, but he need fat girl, girl with problems with her skin and arrogant girl.
Why?

Granny is a VERY beautiful woman.
The nun, named Betty, is one heck of a sensual and sexy woman.

The fat girl, let me be clear, Kate has the best personality, not everything is about body shape or face. But, besides her amazing personality, she's quite sexy anyway.

The girl with skin problems, she's the most beautiful of them all (except my beloved Martha) not only she has a body to die for, her skin "problem" make completely UNIQUE.

The arrogant girl is extremely beautiful and her attitude will improve drastically if you treat her right.

On you list, I see only ONE UGLY and despicable person, YOU. Take your prejudices and stupidity and shove it where the sun don't shine. Oh, leave these games for when you are an adult you spoiled child.

Peace

 

[MarsUltor]

The same is with the game, inside of the game. About the same characters.
Mise en abyme.
Do the characters in the game, which is in the game, also will find and start to play the game about themselves?


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You should choose your next words VERY carefully, unless you want to cause the MyDorm-verse to implode...
(technically known as a "zeroverse event"; the polar opposite of a "multiverse event")

 

[dabujapanasi]

It'd be more teasing here, but that's mostly depending on tone, and on how close the people involved are. Saying it to your aunt and cousin both of whom, even ignoring any incest, you're incredibly close with, wouldn't be said as a insult. It'd be like saying "morning sleepyhead".

They did not sleep before this. Remember, he took Scarlett home with all her belongings, they helped to take them to her room (also Daphne's room). Then they were around when he took home Saira.
I do not see here the logic. Maybe the mistake from the creator of the game?

 

[e6mill]

The girl with skin problems, she's the most beautiful of them all (except my beloved Martha) not only she has a body to die for, her skin "problem" make completely UNIQUE.

I find Kim quite hot also.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

So why he need them? He has better at home.
Plus then there arrived 2 old women (granny and nun). Ok, I understand, perhaps they are nice as people.

I don't know man, I don't know. but granny body is quite beautiful

Spoiler: Even very beautiful!

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I didn't even notice a single ugly female character, maybe you got something mixed up...

 

[S1nsational]

They did not sleep before this. Remember, he took Scarlett home with all her belongings, they helped to take them to her room (also Daphne's room). Then they were around when he took home Saira.
I do not see here the logic. Maybe the mistake from the creator of the game?

Could indeed be a mistake then

 

[johnpouljones]

They did not sleep before this. Remember, he took Scarlett home with all her belongings, they helped to take them to her room (also Daphne's room). Then they were around when he took home Saira.
I do not see here the logic. Maybe the mistake from the creator of the game?

I didn't think about it that carefully. Maybe it's even a minor mistake. But does this in any way affect the quality of the story? Such excessive detailing destroys the pleasure of the game.