Ren'Py Destiny's Embrace [v0.4.1] [yqmo]

[yqmo.]

That is a very boring, dry, unreadable prologue! No damn images just text after text that was so damn dry that even I who loves to read novels could read it! You need some damn pictures to go with the text so it's more interesting but at this time the first minute was boring as heck! I had to fast forward it first time I have skipped a prologue as it's absolutely boring.

Now to the ART it's a horrible rip off of One Piece damn ugly skinny no waists, huge breasts, and huge waist. I don't get why ANYONE likes that type of ridiculous crap art.

After these two items I was not able to get any further.

Story: 2/5 (past prologue too boring to even read)
Art: 2/5 (horrible One Piece art style)
Music: 3/5

Can't say anything about game play though as this is as far as I could get myself to go. With dry story writing like the prologue that was of a boring book only and One Piece art style that it for me. Don't play this unless you like One Piece art style. I prefer my girls to look like girls and not warped versions of hour glasses.

Are you seriously 55 years old?

 

[yqmo.]

By the way, I totally understand that the prologue is boring as of right now since it's literally just the second build of the game and I didn't have time making the prologue renders yet.
But there's a certain option that makes you skip it. So if you aren't into reading prologues, which are supposedly in every game ALL texts, why do you complain about it? Just skip it?

 

[Greily]

That is a very boring, dry, unreadable prologue! No damn images just text after text that was so damn dry that even I who loves to read novels could read it! You need some damn pictures to go with the text so it's more interesting but at this time the first minute was boring as heck! I had to fast forward it first time I have skipped a prologue as it's absolutely boring.

Now to the ART it's a horrible rip off of One Piece damn ugly skinny no waists, huge breasts, and huge waist. I don't get why ANYONE likes that type of ridiculous crap art.

After these two items I was not able to get any further.

Story: 2/5 (past prologue too boring to even read)
Art: 2/5 (horrible One Piece art style)
Music: 3/5

Can't say anything about game play though as this is as far as I could get myself to go. With dry story writing like the prologue that was of a boring book only and One Piece art style that it for me. Don't play this unless you like One Piece art style. I prefer my girls to look like girls and not warped versions of hour glasses.

This isn't a rip off of One Piece. It's a rip off of Jujutsu Kaisen. lol

 

[|XenoN|]

Oh,wow...This one is amazing. The characters are very much likeable and MC is not bad...yet.This world needs more Non-bitch MC's.And the humour...oh god that was hilarious, i loved every second of it. And renders quality is top notch.Talk about the sandbox,It's quite easy not very complicated and i hope it stays that way.
This could be one of the best if done right imo...and please a request don't turn this into a lesbian fuckfest, i'm tired of that shit.You can't find any Harem games without any lesbian shit nowadays.
I don't watch anime so i wouldn’t know what they're talking above and as for the prologue being boring, for me i would say yes,it would have been good to have some images but not boring as i can imagine what the narrator saying.
So,overall a great game.

 

[yqmo.]

Oh,wow...This one is amazing. The characters are very much likeable and MC is not bad...yet.This world needs more Non-bitch MC's.And the humour...oh god that was hilarious, i loved every second of it. And renders quality is top notch.Talk about the sandbox,It's quite easy not very complicated and i hope it stays that way.
This could be one of the best if done right imo...and please a request don't turn this into a lesbian fuckfest, i'm tired of that shit.You can't find any Harem games without any lesbian shit nowadays.
I don't watch anime so i wouldn’t know what they're talking above and as for the prologue being boring, for me i would say yes,it would have been good to have some images but not boring as i can imagine what the narrator saying.
So,overall a great game.

Thanks for the nice feedback, glad that you liked it overall!

About the lesbian content, I'm afraid that there will be plenty, but the plenty will be all involving the MC with it, so lesbian content is predominantly going to be MFF scenes with the girls focusing MAINLY on the man rather than themselves.
So for example if that wasn't clear, 'lesbian' scenes are mostly going to include double blowjobs, double handjobs, blowjob + kissing, and things like these ones.
But yeah, there's also going to be MAINLY focused lesbian scenes in the future, but they're skippable with an in-game choice, so no worries if that bothers you.

Last thing for the prologue, it's going to be changed in either the next update, which is very soon, or within the one after. I'll have to check if I can slide it in within the end of this month. Anyway, have a good day man.

 

[ChaosJokerX]

Dev, hi I read no ntr but we can steal girl from another man?

 

[S1nsational]

Dev, hi I read no ntr but we can steal girl from another man?

That wouldn't work or make any sense in the story. There's next to no men let in the world in general

 

[yqmo.]

Dev, hi I read no ntr but we can steal girl from another man?

Yeah definitely, but not yet. The world map hasn't developed that far yet. But expect something to happen similar to that once there'll be Guild Quests and the Main Story will have more chapters.

 

[yqmo.]

That wouldn't work or make any sense in the story. There's next to no men let in the world in general

Hmm, well I mean, MC included there were 5 male characters so far + a lot of Male NPCs in the city and goblins, but you're kinda right about missing male characters. But that's really just because the game is still on its very early stage and I haven't developed the game world.
But there will be important male characters in the story too eventually, but obviously I will never sexualize them. They'll only serve for plot purposes, exactly like Murainpu.

 

[S1nsational]

Hmm, well I mean, MC included there were 5 male characters so far + a lot of Male NPCs in the city and goblins, but you're kinda right about missing male characters. But that's really just because the game is still on its very early stage and I haven't developed the game world.
But there will be important male characters in the story too eventually, but obviously I will never sexualize them. They'll only serve for plot purposes, exactly like Murainpu.

Sorry, was thinking of the wrong game.

 

[yqmo.]

Sorry, was thinking of the wrong game.

Oh actually, I've just mentioned some characters that aren't known here on F95Zone yet because they haven't updated the game page to v0.3.1, which I've released its public release yesterday night.
(But you can check it on Itch.io or my Patreon page to understand about what I'm talking about for the time being)

 

[kwazi]

Are you seriously 55 years old?

same people have no taste

 

[S1nsational]

Oh actually, I've just mentioned some characters that aren't known here on F95Zone yet because they haven't updated the game page to v0.3.1, which I've released its public release yesterday night.
(But you can check it on Itch.io or my Patreon page to understand about what I'm talking about for the time being)

Just played the update from Itch, and I do see what you were saying about male NPCs. Though again, when i commented about the lack of guys, I'd been thinking about a different game where men were constantly being hunted and so were pretty rare.

As for the content of the update itself, pretty good, but with some kinda story problems i would say. Some spelling and grammar mistakes, but they're comparatively unimportant.

The problem with the story, or maybe the writing might be more accurate, is everything to do with Angela.

Even ignoring how quickly MC accepts that he's an heir to a dead kingdom, which was still too fast, it's completely ignored that Angela is related to him. In her thoughts, Angela refers to our mom as her aunt, making Angela our cousin. But MC doesn't question what she is to him at all. Doesn't seem to care he just found out he has a blood family member right in front of him he never knew about. MC does get a little annoyed with his adoptive mom for not telling him everything sooner, but that seemed more about him being a royal from a different kingdom. The stuff with Angela being a long lost cousin is completely ignored. Also, Angela seems to be around the same age as MC, and fine, the modeling program doesn't allow for a great varierty of ages for characters, but appearance aside, just from what Angela has said and thought we're getting lots of conflicting information. It's all just very messy.

Oh, and I don't know what plans you have for the game in terms of incest, obviously the family MC was raised with, his mom and sisters, are future Love Interests, and I'm not sure how Patreon regards adoption in terms of incest, but if Angela our blood cousin is a future Love Interest and she probably is, that would be 100% incest. I don't know how many supporters you have on Patreon, but while you're still so early in the games development, I'd recommend closing that account and making a SubscribeStar account for your support instead as they currently have no problems with incest in games. As it stands, I can't see how you'd have an incest patch for this game fixing Angela when (I assume) her story needs her to be a cousin.

 

[yqmo.]

Just played the update from Itch, and I do see what you were saying about male NPCs. Though again, when i commented about the lack of guys, I'd been thinking about a different game where men were constantly being hunted and so were pretty rare.

As for the content of the update itself, pretty good, but with some kinda story problems i would say. Some spelling and grammar mistakes, but they're comparatively unimportant.

The problem with the story, or maybe the writing might be more accurate, is everything to do with Angela.

Even ignoring how quickly MC accepts that he's an heir to a dead kingdom, which was still too fast, it's completely ignored that Angela is related to him. In her thoughts, Angela refers to our mom as her aunt, making Angela our cousin. But MC doesn't question what she is to him at all. Doesn't seem to care he just found out he has a blood family member right in front of him he never knew about. MC does get a little annoyed with his adoptive mom for not telling him everything sooner, but that seemed more about him being a royal from a different kingdom. The stuff with Angela being a long lost cousin is completely ignored. Also, Angela seems to be around the same age as MC, and fine, the modeling program doesn't allow for a great varierty of ages for characters, but appearance aside, just from what Angela has said and thought we're getting lots of conflicting information. It's all just very messy.

Oh, and I don't know what plans you have for the game in terms of incest, obviously the family MC was raised with, his mom and sisters, are future Love Interests, and I'm not sure how Patreon regards adoption in terms of incest, but if Angela our blood cousin is a future Love Interest and she probably is, that would be 100% incest. I don't know how many supporters you have on Patreon, but while you're still so early in the games development, I'd recommend closing that account and making a SubscribeStar account for your support instead as they currently have no problems with incest in games. As it stands, I can't see how you'd have an incest patch for this game fixing Angela when (I assume) her story needs her to be a cousin.

Uh... actually, Angela wasn't referring to Libera as her auntie. I won't spoil yet but that's not the case. Angela and Yamo are not cousins, they're both part of the same family branch, the Caelum family, but they're very distantly related. They share a great-great-grandfather ONLY, but still thanks for the heads-up, didn't know about that.
About Yamo accepting his role, it's not actually like that. He's confused about it and Dalmata interrupted the conversation before it went any further, so they didn't even finish talking about it. The only thing that Yamo has accepted was being part of the royal family of the Tramonto Empire, which he accepted because he knew that he was an orphan, so he was ready to eventually find out about his parents, and because Lussukuria already told him about one of his parents being a divinity. So if anything, it'd be less shocking to know that you're part of a deceased royal family rather than being son of a divinity in my opinion.
Anyway, I totally understand what you're talking about and thanks for the feedback. (Yamo + Angela isn't incest by every country's laws if they're very distantly related)

 

[yqmo.]

Uh... actually, Angela wasn't referring to Libera as her auntie. I won't spoil yet but that's not the case. Angela and Yamo are not cousins, they're both part of the same family branch, the Caelum family, but they're very distantly related. They share a great-great-grandfather ONLY, but still thanks for the heads-up, didn't know about that.
About Yamo accepting his role, it's not actually like that. He's confused about it and Dalmata interrupted the conversation before it went any further, so they didn't even finish talking about it. The only thing that Yamo has accepted was being part of the royal family of the Tramonto Empire, which he accepted because he knew that he was an orphan, so he was ready to eventually find out about his parents, and because Lussukuria already told him about one of his parents being a divinity. So if anything, it'd be less shocking to know that you're part of a deceased royal family rather than being son of a divinity in my opinion.
Anyway, I totally understand what you're talking about and thanks for the feedback. (Yamo + Angela isn't incest by every country's laws if they're very distantly related)

Also no worries about the adoption thing. I remind you that huge games like Summertime Saga exist, and their patreon page are actually officially sponsored by Patreon itself, so I know what is allowed and what not in terms of sexualization of family-related stuff.

 

[fajiker145]

But yeah, there's also going to be MAINLY focused lesbian scenes in the future, but they're skippable with an in-game choice, so no worries if that bothers you.

You mean avoidable or skippable? Because if the still happens... I really dont care to hear the characters talking about how they were scissoring and shit or them falling in love with each other, while just skipping the scenes because it will still be thrown in my face by dialog and the story.

 

[DickBobyson]

A sandbox game with an actual simple, straightforward guide with no grinding. respect.

 

[snake_27]

I don't get the hate for the prologue. It's what? 15 minutes of world building? I think it's pretty good.

My problem is after the prologue... I didn't check if it was sandbox and I closed the game when I saw the room hahaha I'll take another look tonight but I don't really like sandbox games, it feels like a waste of time just clicking around.

 

[yqmo.]

I don't get the hate for the prologue. It's what? 15 minutes of world building? I think it's pretty good.

My problem is after the prologue... I didn't check if it was sandbox and I closed the game when I saw the room hahaha I'll take another look tonight but I don't really like sandbox games, it feels like a waste of time just clicking around.

It was before the update, when it was just one single image. All fixed now. And I made the sandbox in this game very easy, so no worries.

 

[stewscotia]

My quest list says find the guild and I am at the capital, found the guild and gone in, looked around but nothing triggers. Any ideas?