VN Ren'Py How to Lose One's Virginity [v0.75FE] [GPoint]

[BlasKyau]

I’ll probably delete this tag anyway because the audience understands it all differently than what I thought when I added it These are very soft betrayals inside. And it’s unlikely that anyone will be upset by how it all ends) But here everyone understands it as “He’ll be dumped and he’ll be a loser with a broken heart” No, that won’t happen.

Are guys other than the MC going to have sex with any of the LIs?

 

[GPoint]

Are guys other than the MC going to have sex with any of the LIs?

As we know from the plot, Bella has a boyfriend, so we don’t know what’s going on behind the scenes in their relationship. Maybe they had sex during the period described. But this does not concern the main character in any way and is not present in the story in any way. When I added the tag, I rather meant that the main character would cheat on someone.

 

[BlasKyau]

As we know from the plot, Bella has a boyfriend, so we don’t know what’s going on behind the scenes in their relationship. Maybe they had sex during the period described. But this does not concern the main character in any way and is not present in the story in any way. When I added the tag, I rather meant that the main character would cheat on someone.

I'm not particularly excited about having to cheat the LIs in a harem game. In any case that isn't Netorare, at least from the MC's perspective.

 

[PlayerUnknown47]

I don't see an issue here. Play your cards right and MC will get the girls. Fuck up and someone else will. But I guess i'm not an insecure, immature manchild so I'm not jealous of CGI characters having sex with other CGI characters.

I don't see a problem here. Next time just say it.

 

[lipe2410]

As we know from the plot, Bella has a boyfriend, so we don’t know what’s going on behind the scenes in their relationship. Maybe they had sex during the period described. But this does not concern the main character in any way and is not present in the story in any way. When I added the tag, I rather meant that the main character would cheat on someone.

Than it’s not netorare as I suspected you may be confusing the tags by your answers. Yeah it’s better remove it this way.

 

[Rock Licker]

Thanks GPoint for the demo. I can appreciate the option that we can have Bella and Chloe as our roommate. I kinda wished to see more Chloe, though. Not really sure if I truly like Bella personally though, but that's probably just preferences. Good luck further!

 

[Sarkasmus]

I'm gonna be honest here... I feel like the Dev needs to work on his communication.

I played the demo, not knowing that it was a demo because it wasn't marked as such, and then immediately deleted it, not expecting much more to come out of it. The entire segment at the end sounded like this was just an advertisement for the STEAM version (that I can't even buy because I currently live in one of the EU countries that STEAM doesn't sell 18+ games in).

Then came the part about the demo containing roughly 30% of what will be in the full version. So... MC is living with three women, working with at least one more, has that hot gym trainer, and has that hot female teacher. That makes six LIs, but, so far, MC had sex with only one of them. Now, the sex with the redhead was hot as hell, no question about that, but 1/6 is a lot less than 30%... which made it feel like the claim that MC would get with EVERY female character we've seen in the demo wasn't true.

And that, in turn, got reinforced by the announcement of Dev's NEXT project he, apparently, has already completely worked out and even created some renders for. Now, out of personal experience, I know that it can help to work on more than one project at a time. But, out of experience from F95, a Dev announcing a new project is basically the same as a Dev announcing that what I've been playing so far is going to be abandoned. That's just how things went on here so far. I mean, I played through the demo in, like, fifteen minutes. And that's A THIRD of what was planned!? And he's already working on a different game!? Better not hope for much more in this one, then.

So, maybe I'm completely wrong about all of this. I actually HOPE to be completely wrong about it as the animations I've seen in the Demo were hands down top of the line, but that's how it all felt for me.

 

[GPoint]

I'm gonna be honest here... I feel like the Dev needs to work on his communication.

I played the demo, not knowing that it was a demo because it wasn't marked as such, and then immediately deleted it, not expecting much more to come out of it. The entire segment at the end sounded like this was just an advertisement for the STEAM version (that I can't even buy because I currently live in one of the EU countries that STEAM doesn't sell 18+ games in).

Then came the part about the demo containing roughly 30% of what will be in the full version. So... MC is living with three women, working with at least one more, has that hot gym trainer, and has that hot female teacher. That makes six LIs, but, so far, MC had sex with only one of them. Now, the sex with the redhead was hot as hell, no question about that, but 1/6 is a lot less than 30%... which made it feel like the claim that MC would get with EVERY female character we've seen in the demo wasn't true.

And that, in turn, got reinforced by the announcement of Dev's NEXT project he, apparently, has already completely worked out and even created some renders for. Now, out of personal experience, I know that it can help to work on more than one project at a time. But, out of experience from F95, a Dev announcing a new project is basically the same as a Dev announcing that what I've been playing so far is going to be abandoned. That's just how things went on here so far. I mean, I played through the demo in, like, fifteen minutes. And that's A THIRD of what was planned!? And he's already working on a different game!? Better not hope for much more in this one, then.

So, maybe I'm completely wrong about all of this. I actually HOPE to be completely wrong about it as the animations I've seen in the Demo were hands down top of the line, but that's how it all felt for me.

Hello. Thank you for writing a review and rating the quality of what's already done highly!

I don’t know how you managed to go through this in 15 minutes... I asked players on Reddit + my friends played it before I published it, they took about 1 hour 30 minutes or 1 hour 45 minutes considering that they replayed some of the sexual scenes.
So, it seems like you played somewhat differently than most players, not paying much attention to the dialogue or the picture.

About the girls you will or won't see. I think I said "almost all" because the college girls except for Chloe and teacher won't be available. But there will be someone else you haven't seen yet. By the way, at the end, I mentioned that in the DEMO version, the plot is only developing, further in the script there will be many more sexual scenes.

About the next project - if you visit my Patreon, there I wrote that the next project is just 30 renders that I made half a year ago, while "resting" from this project and wanting something new. Since then there have remained 30 renders + the idea of the storyline. So, it's not worth jumping to conclusions + it would be quite strange to release an abandoned project, wouldn't it?

 

[Kitchentable]

A burning short drink drunk with a straw? Gotta be B52s.
Gottaa check this one out then.

 

[GPoint]

A burning short drink drunk with a straw? Gotta be B52s.
Gottaa check this one out then.

Well why? Maybe "Hiroshima" for example?

 

[JiggyliFAP]

As we know from the plot, Bella has a boyfriend, so we don’t know what’s going on behind the scenes in their relationship. Maybe they had sex during the period described. But this does not concern the main character in any way and is not present in the story in any way. When I added the tag, I rather meant that the main character would cheat on someone.

That's Netori, while it sometimes is also grouped together with Netorare in the abbreviation 'NTR'. However, in here, it's encompassed in the cheating tag.

 

[V&M]

I really didn’t understand Netorare the way they understand it here on F95. Therefore, we can end this discussion. In this game, there is not and is not planned “that” Netorare that causes such discourse. I will delete the tag as soon as I understand that I can do this outside of the “two-week” update window.
And no, this is not a concession to other players. As I said, the game is 70% ready graphically (only 30% has been assembled into the game) and the scenario is 100% written, so it’s too late to change anything.

A shame, I thought we would see some action between the girls and other guys. But like I said in another comment, it's your game, do what you think is best for it. And yes, regardless of whether or not have NTR, I'll keep checking it out.
And to those who will think my comment is bad, "I don't give a shit about you".

 

[troll822]

Harem + Netorare(planned)
They never learn...

The way the game is presented so far, it is the MC stealing from others. I am pretty early on the 1st version (I downloaded so I can give a review when it counts, not when there are 100 reviews already) and one of the love interests, one of your "Put relationship here!" - clearly sisters, has a boyfriend.

And in the typical VN approach, that boyfriend is mentioned once when she accidentally feels the MC's (obviously huge) dick.

 

[troll822]

As I said, the game is 70% ready graphically (only 30% has been assembled into the game) and the scenario is 100% written, so it’s too late to change anything.

Really? So are you planning... how many more updates?
When do you see this game ending, ballpark? 6 months?

 

[GPoint]

Really? So are you planning... how many more updates?
When do you see this game ending, ballpark? 6 months?

1 update 1 demo (will add other languages)

Next update - will be release on steam in the end of April

 

[troll822]

1 update 1 demo (will add other languages)

Next update - will be release on steam in the end of April

Figuring out when everything will come out is not that easy. I was mostly asking how many updates you have planned, since you have mapped the entire game out from the start.
Considering this is, according to your post, 30% or so of the game, would it be reasonable to expect 3 - 4 more updates?

Also, big ++ for mapping out the entire game from the start and sticking to the plan. Too many developers go this way and then that way, swayed from comments and patreons, causing inconsistent stories.

 

[AkaQ]

I get that the dude can read minds, but where is the mind control?

 

[GPoint]

Figuring out when everything will come out is not that easy. I was mostly asking how many updates you have planned, since you have mapped the entire game out from the start.
Considering this is, according to your post, 30% or so of the game, would it be reasonable to expect 3 - 4 more updates?

Also, big ++ for mapping out the entire game from the start and sticking to the plan. Too many developers go this way and then that way, swayed from comments and patreons, causing inconsistent stories.

As I wrote, the game is 70% ready, I simply did not include everything already ready in the demo version, there will be no more updates until the release in April (only other languages will be added to the demo). And so in terms of the volume of the game, the total volume will be 3 times larger than what it is.

 

[varkatzas666]

Great renders, and I loooove the girls,definitely waiting for more updates soon,keep it up dev

 

[RoninKai]

The idea is ok 'loser guy learns to be better' the only problem is that this guy is an unrealistic loser. Like it's just not believable for someone to be that bad thus making it less relatable which is the whole point of this kind of story. Maybe I'm just jaded because every other game on this site seems to have the same overly pathetic loser that's just impossible to root for and I'm unwilling to sit through hours of their nonsense before they start showing even a tiny glimmer of respectability.

I wish you the best of luck on your game and hope it goes well for you but I wont be along for the ride.