kiteares

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Nov 15, 2017
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Alright, since all of you enjoyed it, let me put a different 2 cents. This is not a personal attack or trolling of the developer so all of y'all special snowflakes who want to hear only positive things and need their safe space - please shut up, thank you in advance. This is just my opinion.

So, did you really like it? For realz? Man, maybe I'm just getting too old for this but I have found this update boring and uninspired. And... it just feels small.

- same 2-3 locations;
- same people (I do understand that this is a party episode) - probably the reason it feels small;
- [personally] I'm not that into these particular characters;
- you'd think having 2 additional team members would increase not only quality but quantity as well. Come on guys. Please?;
- Some of the angles are completely f'd up;
- The writing is sometimes silly but it's fine - can't be too negative about that.

So all in all, for something that was in the works for 5 weeks - it just feels small.
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Now you can call me entitled or whatever.
I will agree to disagree, but more importantly, do not play The Babysitter until they are off the boat. that really would disappoint you :kisskiss: < I always think this looks like whistling.

I am repeating myself and it is kinda annoying. Sorry for that but it is not a progress for me. It is just a sexy scene to enjoy. I was expecting so much more after party but as a result what did we get? SPOILER. I am disappointed with this update but it is just me. I am glad you enjoy it. Hopefully, i will enjoy it as well with the upcoming next release.
No, I fully get you, so no need to get annoyed. We just see it from different perspectives - Kiss>HJ>BJ>Anal>Virginal aka the stairway to heaven, that's progress. More sexy time with a character, especially when the relationship is not yet solidified (I know it, you know it, it's just them that don't) means stronger ties, which for me is progress toward the end goal - a strong relationship which in these games can mean tolerance or even joining in with dabbling, add to that the liberal use of the L word and we're heading south for the winter. :)
The great thing though, the much hyped party was dealt with in a single update, so therein is progress of a completely different kind.
Then there was Natasha 0-3 holes filled in a single scene, that's progress off a cliff edge and getting some tongue time with Lily too.
Fingers crossed that the next update ticks more boxes for those disappointed with this one.
 

Ennoch

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Oct 10, 2017
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oh..he's here all right..watching us..in his dark corner..steepling his fingers cackling as we are sucked hopelessly into the world he has created :D
Why do you have to be so honest! Throw in some white lie sometime, sheesh!
 

botc76

The Crawling Chaos, Bringer of Strange Joy
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Oct 23, 2016
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So time for my personal point...i see here lot ppl says the story is funny and good...i dont think is "SO" good...maybe for some poor fantasy ppl...i dont know why a neighbor ask a young man to be behalf with 3 femals who arent related first, second, the story dont move on if MC dont fuck that cock hungry neighbor slut, no choise here...so said, good story for poor fantasied ppl...and iam only at beginning...maybe stop right now and delete...just to say, reading posts in here arent so trustfull and most like time wast...there are much much much better writing stories so dont fool around...ty

Lol. Honestly, considering your English I doubt you can even recognize what constitutes good writing in that language.
I mean, I'm sure you understand better than you write, but you write damn bad.

So how would you recognize the humour, the wit, the different characters, how erotic the sexy times are written?


I'm not trying to attack or belittle you, but to see if a game has good writing, your language-skills need to be up to a level that you can recognize good from bad.
I see it on fanfic.net all the time, when totally inane stuff gets good reviews and ratings from a bunch of people who can hardly write one sentence in understandable English.
 

zecon

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Jun 2, 2017
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I see it on fanfic.net all the time, when totally inane stuff gets good reviews and ratings from a bunch of people who can hardly write one sentence in understandable English.
inane? you mean "insane" , right? insane stuff ... (english is not my native language)

Well done CheekyGimp , an amazing update as usual !! , i enjoyed this update so much , you deserve the best !
 

FaiRTaiL

Active Member
Nov 8, 2017
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really good update, thanks to the dev.. but this night would be the end with Katie.. just saying..
 

ultorem13

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Sep 10, 2018
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Lol. Honestly, considering your English I doubt you can even recognize what constitutes good writing in that language.
I mean, I'm sure you understand better than you write, but you write damn bad.

So how would you recognize the humour, the wit, the different characters, how erotic the sexy times are written?


I'm not trying to attack or belittle you, but to see if a game has good writing, your language-skills need to be up to a level that you can recognize good from bad.
I see it on fanfic.net all the time, when totally inane stuff gets good reviews and ratings from a bunch of people who can hardly write one sentence in understandable English.
so if you answered me, my english isn't so bad at the end...go on
 
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