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Just don't bother with it then :-D it's totally fine. This is my first release so I can't really tell how much work the second chapter will cost. I have the framework for it and all the characters are already designed so I guess not 7 month like it took to get everything setup ;). I will provide sneak peeks and development information over the time through discord / patreon / subscribestar / itch.io.
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I was reverting the obfuscation at this moment actually before I realized that every safe game would be borked afterwards because the default variables are already called like that (IlIIIlIIi...)... I could include the real files though for curious developers.

I'm not that blind mate, I do see your "not yet", you up to something? ;)

Thanks, have fun playing it! Plug out the internet beforehand to prevent the doxx! :ROFLMAO: (jk)
So, just finished the 0.1...
It's incredibly impressive how well it is crafted on a technical level. The plot also didn't reveal too much whilst having a good amount of content for a "pilot episode". I would dare to use the forbidden p-word and say it has potential...

... if you fix the writing. It's currently a mess of non-organic dialogue (teenagers sounding like what an algorithm thinks a nineteen-year-old sounds like), mixed-up tenses and persons (the "narrative" text cannot decide whether it's a third or first person perspective), lack of proper punctuation, and all that neatly wrapped up in an overwhelming amount of "overdescription" where a character just doesn't shut up.

I'd be willing to help you out (if you want). Let me know, and I'll contact you on Discord, Mr. Hacker ^^
 
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careful now. i might just chain you down and feed you nothing but caffein pills at this rate. View attachment 2996291
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So, just finished the 0.1...
It's incredibly impressive how well it is crafted on a technical level. The plot also didn't reveal too much whilst having a good amount of content for a "pilot episode". I would dare to use the forbidden p-word and say it has potential...

... if you fix the writing. It's currently a mess of non-organic dialogue (teenagers sounding like what an algorithm thinks a nineteen-year-old sounds like), mixed-up tenses and persons (the "narrative" text cannot decide whether it's a third or first person perspective), lack of proper punctuation, and all that neatly wrapped up in an overwhelming amount of "overdescription" where a character just doesn't shut up.

I'd be willing to help you out (if you want). Let me know, and I'll contact you on Discord, Mr. Hacker ^^
Thank you! Of course my writing is far from perfect, as I am no native speaker but I will gladly accept your help to fix the writing. :D You can join the discord through the link in the first post or pm me directly (debatingpanda).
 
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BTungsteno

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Promising 0.1V: girls are nicely done, a nice amount of renders for a first version, the plot has potential, i like how some details/scenes can be missed if you doesn't explore/get curious (spoiler: like certain chat conversation in the mobile between the girls mother and Her ex husband) , worth bookmarking to watch what the future has in store for this game.

I wish you good luck Dev. debatingpanda!!
 

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You're right and obviously more experienced in this topic than I am. I build it in a way that two girls have a friends with benefits thing and the MC can have both of them so I automatically thought it would be harem-ish? I could remove the harem tag but in the end the main characters still will be able to have every women which would mean that it is a harem? o_O

I could potentially say that the girls with benefits break up and at the end are still both inside mc's harem?

The LIs won't have deeper relationships with others though, that's not planned.

Need to think this through!
As someone who has heard these complaints before about my own project, I encourage you to ignore them and make the game you want to make and tell the story you want to tell. If that means the love interests fool around with each other, fantastic. You'll have plenty of people who will enjoy it, and the insecure whiners will find something else to play.
 

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anyone else having issues getting unren to work with this game? i keep running into errors.
 

bobdillan

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You're right and obviously more experienced in this topic than I am. I build it in a way that two girls have a friends with benefits thing and the MC can have both of them so I automatically thought it would be harem-ish? I could remove the harem tag but in the end the main characters still will be able to have every women which would mean that it is a harem? o_O

I could potentially say that the girls with benefits break up and at the end are still both inside mc's harem?

The LIs won't have deeper relationships with others though, that's not planned.

Need to think this through!
That would more be those two girls specifically aren't harem.

Like if MC were to have 8 girls exclusive to him, and 2 that aren't, those 8 are still a harem. And he still has a harem. Just that those 2 wouldn't be technically in the harem.

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I got another daily quote of reactions, finally!


anyone else having issues getting unren to work with this game? i keep running into errors.
I already uploaded a version that can be decompiled, try unren with the PC / Linux version from the first mega link. ( still working on the mirrors )


As someone who has heard these complaints before about my own project, I encourage you to ignore them and make the game you want to make and tell the story you want to tell. If that means the love interests fool around with each other, fantastic. You'll have plenty of people who will enjoy it, and the insecure whiners will find something else to play.
Thanks for the heads up mate, appreciate it! That's what I'm planning to do! Can't please anyone unfortunately but I will make everything avoidable at least.


That would more be those two girls specifically aren't harem.

Like if MC were to have 8 girls exclusive to him, and 2 that aren't, those 8 are still a harem. And he still has a harem. Just that those 2 wouldn't be technically in the harem.

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I get your point, I just don't know how I could justify getting a handjob in the toilet without bringing these two girls into the game. I will make sure to make further interactions with them surely avoidable though!
Edit: All avoidable since 0.1.1, added extra renders and animations for that :)
 
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bobdillan

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I got another daily quote of reactions, finally!




I already uploaded a version that can be decompiled, try unren with the PC / Linux version from the first mega link. ( still working on the mirrors )




Thanks for the heads up mate, appreciate it! That's what I'm planning to do! Can't please anyone unfortunately but I will make everything avoidable at least.




I get your point, I just don't know how I could justify getting a handjob in the toilet without bringing these two girls into the game. I will make sure to make further interactions with them surely avoidable though!
I don't mean make the girls avoidable, just the lesbian content. i.e. make it they like sharing a guy, but not doing stuff with eachother, only doing stuff together to a dude. (which sounds like what you're going for here).
 

DebatingPanda

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I don't mean make the girls avoidable, just the lesbian content. i.e. make it they like sharing a guy, but not doing stuff with eachother, only doing stuff together to a dude. (which sounds like what you're going for here).
I will see what's possible!
 

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I don't mean make the girls avoidable, just the lesbian content. i.e. make it they like sharing a guy, but not doing stuff with eachother, only doing stuff together to a dude. (which sounds like what you're going for here).
If you don't like it, if just the idea they could do something together even though it's avoidable, then just find another game.
 

bobdillan

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If you don't like it, if just the idea they could do something together even though it's avoidable, then just find another game.
If you're going to ignore the point of the comments, why respond?

If you had read them, it would be self-evident, it isn't about what I personally like, but what the target demographic the dev is going for does.
 

shiqz

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It's exactly what i wrote Yesterday, someone will always show up and try to Influence Projects the way they like it. It has nothing to do with Demographic but clearly what you personally would like to have or see in the Game. Just leave the Dev to his/her own Project and let him/her Develop the Game the way he/she planned.
 

Randeza

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I gotta say this as someone who dosen't like ntr at all, by that i mean Ntr that includes any other dick besides the mc, however i don't include toys in that or other women. That is my personal view on NTR and others will have their own view when it comes to ntr aswell. What the Harem crowd usually agree on is if there is another male present being sexual towards the women that the mc goes after then they regard that as ntr.

Regardless of that i gotta say tho just make the game how you yourself want it and if there is a problematic genre in the game just put it as optional or give a warning to people and make it so people can avoid it and not see it. Like for example if you want to have LIs(two girls being sexual without the mc) content in the game just put it as optional and there done and the same goes with lesbian MFF content. So far i see no issues with the content you have.

You have to understand that even the harem crowd is very divived about Lesbian content(that is two girls without the mc present), since some like it and other's don't.


Trying to please everyone will never work, so its better to focus on the game you want to make. Keep up the great work and i look forward to more updates
 
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