cedr777

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Bug, if you enter the staff office in the school, you can't get back out.
I am unable to replicate this bug, could you post before and after screenshots, or even better, a video. That would help me a lot in resolving it.
 

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I am unable to replicate this bug, could you post before and after screenshots, or even better, a video. That would help me a lot in resolving it.
I've seen it too, the thing is that you can go further then the exit point onto the door itself, so you can have some problems locating the proper exit point to press the action button
 

cedr777

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I've seen it too, the thing is that you can go further then the exit point onto the door itself, so you can have some problems locating the proper exit point to press the action button
You're talking about this right? cuz it's working fine for me...
 

cedr777

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you can walk beyond the circle on the door
Ah, now I get it, you guys weren't pressing Z while standing on the circle and facing the door, that circle works only when you press Z while standing directly on top of it, while facing the door.

I'll fix the collision for that door tile next update.
 

tsunku

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Ah, now I get it, you guys weren't pressing Z while standing on the circle and facing the door, that circle works only when you press Z while standing directly on top of it, while facing the door.

I'll fix the collision for that door tile next update.
it also works with the mouse and left click.
 

tsunku

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ok i have the kerosene and the lighter but where the hell is the lantern?!?

edit: damn i'm good, i ask a question and then immediately find what i couldn't haha
 

Shinneru

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Lord, where do I begin... Let's start with good points of the game, so far. It's more like I see potential in this game, rather than tons of good sides right now.

+ Map design is pretty neat for most part (I didn't like the city and school part, althou it is really good designed. I've seen those designs in way too many japanese RPG H-games, so yeah)
+ I see a lot of potential in side content (as in side-quests, activities other than main story, etc.)
+ Used tilesets and characters are really nice, so they go along well with map designs.

So you see, that's about it for me now. And it's mostly potential if developed right. So map designs, message boxes, stuff like option choice windows are the strongest part of this game right now.

I am sick of another game with lazy story and MC setting. What I mean is making story and main character in a way, that makes it really easy to develop H-scenes. In this game it's "the story of a playboy". Our first interaction with one of the girls is (Oh, I'd fuck him if he wanted to take me cos he's so hot). Pretty cheap for me and it actually happens later in the game.
But it may be okay for someone else, so keep going!

- Oh dear lord, every single map is broken in more than 5 ways possible. I've counter 10 maps errors in the very first room. Fixing stuff like that is a matter of 15 min work and relasing fix. Dunno why is it like that...
- I think sex scene needs more life? I understand it's the first one so gonna see what happens in the future.
- Well, first versions, I get it.. but there's not a lot to do? World isn't as interactive as I thought it would be.
- As I mentioned earlier - pretty cheap story setting so far and sometimes pretty sad dialouges...

So overall it's a decent production with broken maps (which drives me mad) and some potential. It may become really good game or it may become the worst possible one. Do not get discouraged, pay attention to your maps more and keep going! Gonna check for future versions to see improvment.

I'll add 3 examples of broken maps out of like 30-40+ I've encountered.
 
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Issues
  • Text Delays; remove the delays for the '...' it's annoying. Also get rid of the long scrolling "day" message
  • Japanese; Not sure if you're trolling, but it adds nothing. We know what the words mean, but its jarring to see them mixed into English and the pointless TL notes slow down the dialogue. Either remove it entirely or use it properly (Only for honorifics and cultural references). This includes fixing the games title.
  • Item Combination; Having to use the items in inventory didn't really make sense. Either make it an actual puzzle (You have to actually select which item to use on which and in correct order) or just do it automatically.
  • Combat; Remove it or just use the shitty default RPG Maker combat if you really want it (Like most people here, I'm not a Patreon, thus can not vote on your poll there). If you're just desperate to have any actual gameplay, I'd suggest puzzles instead.
  • Teleport Triggers; Many triggers don't span the full pathway was is annoying (EG school main exit and downtown exit to map). Also while game is WIP all inaccessible routes should be visually obvious (barriers, locked/barred doors etc)
  • Level Design; Apartment floors need to look different, at least have floor number on wall. Also please don't use other peoples maps (even if they're free), design your own (I recognise Downtown & the school from My New Life). Additionally there's countless non-solid objects/walls in world.
  • Typo's; there's lots of them, even in the opening lines of dialogue
  • Goals & Hints: A pause menu with current "quests" and goals would be handy. Also concider having NPC's give hints on what to do if a player gets stuck
  • Sex Scene; Needs more images, way too static at the moment
  • Need an chance to save at end of version, so if someone chooses to play every update they don't have to go through a section again.
Trivial Remarks
A campfire, in a tent? Really?
Why a kerosene lantern? So weirdly out of place in modern setting. If you insist on the item combination thing, then just have player find batteries for a normal electric lantern or torch/flashlight.
 
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cedr777

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...will one be able to access one kind and not the other? not a deal-breaker or anything, just curious
Yes, i'm planning 3 scenarios, an NTR scenrio, netori scenario, and a corruption story with another protagonist.
In which there will be other perspectives, But i won't spoil you too much though.

sorry for my bad englisht btw. not my first language.
 
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It's a public poll though, Plus I agree with you on some of the Issues but some of them are just nitpicking or just based on your own preference =/

Edit: plus you forgot to mention "lack of content" lolz
When I said "not a Patreon", I didn't just mean not a supporter, I don't have a Patreon account at all. If the dev wants the opinion of all players, the poll should be public to all (Google Forms, Straw Poll or whatever).
The lack of content is what prevents me from providing more meaningful feedback (Like the fact the current version is entirely linear).
 

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Yes, i'm planning 3 scenarios, an NTR scenrio, netori scenario, and a corruption story with another protagonist.
In which there will be other perspectives, But i won't spoil you too much though.

sorry for my bad englisht btw. not my first language.
excellent....wait, "corruption story with another protagonist"? what exactly does that mean?
 
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