My Demonic Romance is a VN featuring a succubus and a build your own dom/sub.
I really liked the premise, but the execution leaves a lot to be desired. My Demonic Romance starts out as a slice-of-life style game, with Lily the succubus following the MC to school or work. The whole point of a slice-of-life style story is to develop the characters against a relatively static background. My Demonic Romance misses the mark entirely here. There's a whole lot of time skipping and a focus on mid jokes rather than a focus on personality or the main characters' relationship.
It's pretty frustrating to have the two characters act like they're so close to each other when most of that closeness is the result of off-screen relationship building that doesn't exist from our point of view. I mean, the most heinous example of this is the fact that the MCs apparently lost their virginities together pre-story and we never saw it. Shouldn't that be the hook that brings us into the story? Absolutely wasted potential.
The MC, Adam, leaves a lot to be desired as well. It's difficult for me to imagine a more lackluster response to being introduced to a succubus... or a more asexual one. Not only is Adam's response to her to literally slam the door in her face, but he's also criminally incurious as to the existence of demons, heaven and hell. Worse yet, the succubus bombshell comes onto him with all the subtlety of a freight train and the boy basically ignores her. Truly the clueless male is the worst of all anime archetypes.
The choice tree is basically divided between a dom and sub path. Either the MC lets Lily walk all over him or has a spine and is suddenly her dom. I wasn't a fan of either path really as the MC is bland as beige. Lily makes a decent enough dom since she has some personality, but a poor sub considering the blob that's hypothetically her dom. Regardless, it isn't immediately intuitive as to which choices contribute to dom/sub score as a lot of the dom choices could be easily confused for dick moves and sub choices are... not dick moves.
Overall, it's pretty disappointing as I feel like the game could have had a lot of potential with better writing. The art is great, Lily's voice actress is pretty good (though there's audio static on some lines), and the story setting could have been really interesting with a little more focus. I don't have particularly high hopes for this one.