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Let me start off by saying this game is pretty much all kinetic, you can pick all the "worng" choices with both daughters but they are both forced on you no matter what you do and i havent seen anything that changes main story either, dev should learn to tag the game right so people that hate kinetic stuff wont waste their time and its kinetic both in novel and sandbox mode.

It also feels absolutly idiotic that MC goes after Luna as a LI after seeing just how crazy she is, MC is supposed to be a normal dude and trust me any normal dude would run away from her as fast as fucking possible, dont stick your dick in crazy and shes waaaay past crazy so it really dosent even fit in the story, instend MC wants to help? against people he can do nothing
about, people who even the top boss couldent do anything about, its just a shitty story really.

So with story being kinetic it also means you have no freedom in relationships most are just forced on you, one you have a choice in but thats about it, forced LIs is just never a good thing.

What really make no sense is that the game has a weird relationship system where you get + or - hearth points, but they do nothing and i do mean nothing, i tried getting minus point with Luna and it never changed a thing.

And game is also a slowburn and has more focus on story then lewd stuff its just to bad story lacks in details and so many things which i will get into now.

Story 2/5
Starts very weird MC whos a normal dude it pretty much kidnapped by the mafia and forced to work for them, they say its due to a contract which seems idiotc on its own, MC knows nothing about any contract and it sure as hell isent something MC signed, why MC even belive there is a contract to start with i have no clue since he has never seen it, so he starts off like a brainless idiot that apprently belive whatever hes told?

To make matters even more stupid MC dosent even ask about anything when he meets with the boss and the right hand, he dosent ask about the contract, hell he dosent even ask to see it? i mean wtf? he dosent even ask why hes there or whats hes supposed to be doing or anything and dont tell me its dueto MC being scared there would be absolutly nothing worng with asking why the fuck hes there and to see this so called contract him self, but no our MC dosent have the brainpower to ask anyting he just accepts everything blindly....

What MC does think is that hes drawn to the female mafia boss? i mean wtf really drawn to hes kidnapper? lol then he thinks about how he should hate her? it just feels to stupid, also hes not scared of pissing off the soldieres of the mafia? how does that make any sense.....

On a side note MC never sees hes contract not once doing this hole first season? but game just make MC into a criminal that even kills people with 0 choices along the way for the player......

Then he gets a room and first thing he thinks about is to read up on how to break a mafic contract? he still dosent know if there even is one its idiotic.....next he thinks that he better get on the good side of the family which is the only sane thing hes thought so far, but then he goes brainless again and think its better to win over the two daughters of the don? i mean what the fuck that would be a sure way of getting him self killed...nothing makes sense.

Story only gets more wierd, no one ever told MC what hes supposed to be doing there but a small talk about contracts like helping the town which he never does and your then told you can do it whenever you wish which should be never since MC is a normal dude trying to get away and sure as hell not try to work for them and become a criminal? none of it makes sense considering MC knows nothing and only wants to get out of there and he still hasent asked fuck all about what hes doing there in the first place.....

But MC went from normal dude trying to get out to doing crime for the family? what? then he gets promoted to be a real member of the family? why? he still has 0 clue why hes there....story makes to little sense all the time, no one told him to do crimes or do anything what so ever....so theres no logic in him starting doing that shit on hes own when hes just a normal dude...it kinda fucks up the hole story.

And i just love how the hole thing goes down where some idiot say MC has now been with them so long that he understands what it means to become a member of the family, MC knows fuck all about anything what so ever its absolutly idiotc sorry but it really is.
And all the boss tell MC is that he will get used to all the killing and shit and MC dosent give it a single thought....he just seems to accept anything constantly without any questions.

Also in the start MC is promissed never to be forced to do anything or kill anyone, yet hes forced on a kill mission with a group? and ends out killing someone on top of that and ofc its not up to the player if he shoots or not...
and to make it really idiotic you get an achivement for first blood even though you as the player had fuck all to do with it since it wasent a choice?

As for the "full" experince like the mini game where you can level up doing missions, theres barely any content and you reach max level very fast, you also visit diffrent places at the start like tavern, brothel, soldiere quaters and such but it has no content with any of those places either....considering its a 6 year old game content is extremly low and you can do those mission from day 1 and finish em all fast which makes all XP gain for the hole game after that pointless, its not well thought out in any way.

Girls 4/5
I liked the girls and even with so few LIs theres a bit of diversity in builds as well, only issue which is a huge one is that most are forced.

Animations 3/5
Pretty average nothing special

Music 3/5
Average background stuff nothing special none with lyrics.

Choices 1/5
You dont have any choices that changes the main story making it a kinetic novel, also LIs are forced on you so hate em or not you have 0 choice in it, really supprises me how high this game is rated with forced LIs
and being kinetic without a tag, it also gives you those weird idiotic choices where you can say "no i dont want you to do that" then 2 seconds later MC changes to sure lets do it....? why put in the choice of saying no when
every outcome is a yes?

Sandbox 3/5
Its easy a little grind but not much since theres really not much content with missions.

Content 1/5
Well 6 years old game and only a single season is just awfull, i would say its pointless to even play this one since the odd of this ever getting finished is very very low since alot of things can happen for the dev IRL
so he might stop it for whatever reason or just lose interrest in it and the fact that it will take another 6-12 years or more to finish at this rate.
As for lewd stuff there is 2 maybe 3 optional sex scene with girls you know nothing about other then one of them tried to kill ya, other then that nothing other then small stuff like HJ/BJ/grind, nothing with any main girls at all,
considering its supposed to be an adult game its seriously lacking in the lewd area for being 6 years in development, not that i mind a slow build up but still.

Not an actual game - just walk around the town and progress the story to see scenes. Could have been a visual novel. The hypnosis has a little nuance but it still feels bottom of the barrel because the story beats are so predictable.

Even the cg room isn't constructed smoothly - you still have to manually play the scenario rather then the scene immediately playing and to my knowledge, there is no way to back out of a scene and have to hard reset. Can't believe a game can suck even at the cg room where everything that could be annoying is removed.

Downloading the game and a full save to fap to the cg room for the art is all up to you.

Absolutely DELICIOUS!
A little gem.
Great story, great female characters, great graphic rendition, sex scenes are both exciting that varied and not usual/boring.
And is bot fun than scary!
I've only played Night One, so more to come.

Writing: 7/10
Imagery: 6/10
Gameplay: 6/10
Kinks: 6/10
Overall: 6/10

The space suits, they do nothing!

Ya know, this story kind of reminds me of a few movies I have seen about coming across derelict ships in space. Especially big ones, like a spaceship that was a version of a carnival cruise and another about a seed ship sent out from Earth to populate another planet. So in that sense the setting here, is very cool, but not quite horrific enough. I was expecting to see more monsters, but instead all I saw was a lot of latex suit sex.

Yeah, I wasn't a fan of the see-through space suit. It ruined all the build up to the corruption, unlike in other games made by the same dev, where you started off fully clothed, this starts off with the chick wearing a latex space suit that reveals everything. If she is already willing to wear such an obscene outfit, then she is already slutty enough. Seriously.

All the sex scenes were kind of bland, just rehashes of the previous entries by the Dev, with a couple new ones mixed in. They are a bit less interesting in that sense, though it was nice that you can get a couple endings that result in the main guy earning himself either a breeding sow or into a cock hungry wife; good for him. There's also the bad end, but I actually failed to unlock it, must be something I missed? Pretty sure I had bubble tits at her max lewd level, and pumped with enough crazed spaceman cum she could repopulate the moon. Oh well.

Also, the breasts, a bit to much. The last couple entires seemed to have some signs that this is to the Devs tastes, but here, it's like someone stuck a bicycle pump on those puppies and overinflated them and then stretched out the nipples for good measure. They just looked saggy, and, just too much. Take it down a notch Dev, yeah?

Overall, the least interactive of the line up, with Scattered Shards being the most, but at least I wasn't needing to bother with batting my way through annoying enemies to traverse areas. Would have liked to have seen more spooky horror, al la Event Horizon, and more kinky sex situations instead of the far more simple "she's more corrupted this time" ones.

It left me feeling meh because the MC is not the protagonist of the story. Instead the harem members are the true protagonists. Aside from that we have a completely passive MC who goes with the flow because you don't actually make any decisions making this more of a kinetic novel than a visual novel. Then there's the grind at this point I feel spending more time grinding than doing anything even with cheats. Aside from that there's elves supposed slavery but with rights. I'm sure this is done mostly because of another site, but this kind of makes the story feel a little awkward at certain points. This is because at times consent for the elves is dubious at best, and yet it keeps emphasizing that all elves should consent first. Overall the story feels like it's missing something to make it good.

A lot of promise with this one, but unfortunately it doesn't deliver, The models are nice if too similar to each other. However, that's where the positives end. The free roam is a little too un-intuitive especially when many times it devolves into finding items. The story has a villain, which is just there to cause outrage with no chance of retaliating against him. There are too many bugs at this stage to even bother reporting them all. Finally, the biggest sin of this game is that it's too easy to miss sex scenes because of this or that condition even with the walkthrough.

ch 1-15

very good premise. absolutely garbage execution. extremely few art on this. ofc i knew it's "text based" but the art only serves as clickbait. nearly nonexistent. might as well use AI for art if writing already has AI.

writing: long and boring. it's too much. not as excessive as some other games but still very annoyingly long just for the sake of being long, without serving any purpose like to establish characters or circumstances for the porn part.

lore/story: well it has a lot of writing and description... for no reason whatsoever. why would anyone care about all the details. first you need to show something to care and read all the random things and history of all these completely made up things. it's like a child talking about their dream for hours and hours.

porn/eroticism: very bad. extremely slow "corruption", very non-erotic scenes, and very boring and completely anti-porn logic. there are some games where "porn-logic" leads to quick sex scenes and you kinda forgive it because you are here for the porn... here it's nearly the opposite. it tries so hard to not be porn logic that it's the other end of the spectrum. complete garbage. how could he/she fk up that great premise i have no idea. you turn into a sex-slave yet the only thing the goblin does for pages and pages is CUM ON YOUR SWORD after masturbating... then pissing on you. then doing nothing LOL. how are you a sex slave. complete anti-porn logic. the author tried way too hard to be unique, but might as well make the whole game without porn, that would be unique too... uniquely shit at a porn forum.

so it's gigabad. absolutely great premise, complete failure of an execution. the 13reviews are probably ALL THE PEOPLE in the whole server who liked it. (or bots). i got to chapter 6-7 i think but it's a complete dumpster. goblin even hinted to get MC's girlfriend too as a slave but maybe it happens at chapter 15 but i doubt. knowing this author it will probably be hinted at chapter 15 and in chapter 239 we will get some action. absolutely terrible. author has no sense of any eroticism whatsoever.

A great start for a project! The art is pixel 3D, which is unique and fun. The gameplay is still pretty basic, fight some slimes, do some parkour and listen to npcs talk, But it's a good foundation. The hscenes are good and the themes are unique aswell.

Great game with a consistent developer !!
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For starters, I have to say a game about the Percy Jackson series is something I have wanted for years. I also found the selection of characters to be interesting especially given that you play as an original character instead of Percy as many might assume.

I wish i had read the reviews before trying this.

It gets boring really quick.

You choose a girl, and you do... things I guess. I couldn't do much and got bored after 5minutes.

There is close to 0 reaction from the girl, (there are some, of course, but if there weren't, I wouldn't notice the difference), and the controls are horrendous.

You have to interact with tons of computers and workshops (which for most didn't seem to work, and the lack of instruction on how to use them isn't helping either.

The only redeeming quality, and this is why I put a two stars instead of a single one, are the graphics and voice acting.

Oh, also, the mandatory, game has been in development for 6 years and has almost no content.

I enjoyed every minute of the game. The characters are hot, and the main story doesn't bore you. Watching the sex from multiple angles made it an even better experience. 10/10 game. Would definitely recommend this game.

0.4

Not a bad game. The graphics are a 4. The plot as a whole is a 5-, and it has good potential for further development. The dialogues are decent, there are very hot ntr moments. However, there can be a lot of unnecessary words. At the moment, the vn is rather short, about 20-30 minutes of reading.

Oh my!! Another instant favorite, absolutely love this game! Very good art, very hot scenes and corruption, temptation, blackmail, fast-paced to get to the action.. The choices are predictable (obviously, given what we're playing, we're gonna pick the options where she is bad every single time) but there's an extra level of spice with that relationship counter. Seeing it getting closer and closer to 0 gets scary as you wonder if you're about to hit a game over.. making it thrilling and nerve-racking to pick the 'bad' choice for her. Delicious. (Just please never let it actually end the game, all the bad choices are so tempting... ) Love it and will be watching it closely

Of all the games in this genre (ryona/battefucking), this is the best I've played. The game is slightly challenging, but not so hard that it is not fun. The variety of animations are excellent. Hope there will be much more content added.

Super short but I'm a sucker for good pixel art and voiced. It plays almost like a sandbox with you roaming every day but there's only set events and sex scenes. Also why is armpit sex the first scene lol

Game is in not a functional state. I can't even follow the tutorial or get pass day 1. It takes me out. By the time the game has enough momentum it will be taken down. And by then? Redoing all renders?

Makes no sense.

A really good if not the BEST AVN I've ever played in my life period
PROS
1. good animation, fluid and truly enjoyable
2. Story goes very well for you who like the best outcome for an ending, a good pace for 1-2 hours playtime a day, or in one sitting
3. The humor, the reference by good it's feels likes I'm being stabbed multiple times by it *iykyk
4. The characters, even if not voiced feels alive with their own quirkiness not just there to be blankly stared at you
5. The writing is easy to understand even for non first English

CONS:
1. You'll feels weird the first time you play if you used to play AVN with Blender 3D renders, it feels like playing a Japanese game but its not
2. A quite noticable awkward movement in animation especially in early storyline, but it just happened 1 or 2 times

Last but not least,
You whoever read this review must play it least once in a lifetime

I love daddy/daughter incest, so i want so much to like this game... but it's SO boring!
Too much (and cringe) text and a plot that pretends to be slow burn, but it's only excuse to nothing happens for a long time.
I'm not masoquist enought to finish this game, but i'm pretty sure the sex is would be endgame.
I don't know why a lot o devs do this. If you don't actually have a story to tell, don't pretend, you aren't fooling anyone.

That said: the daughter model is perfect. She is beautiful. But that's all lol

Shame, I wanted to really like this game, but boy, does it ever make it difficult to do so.
As others have pointed out, the renders of the characters are fine, but the backgrounds wanna make you gouge your eyes out. Definitely falling into the placeholders category and I wouldn't be surprised, if some of those images were taken directly from the store page where these scenes are being sold. However that wouldn't so bad if there was something else to distract me. Which brings me to another painful subject, the story.
At the time of writing v0.5, the story is straight forward and is more to the boring side, where you are once again, just an average boring Joe with an attraction to being yelled on by their boss. And while I do appreciate the variety of talking approaches, it quickly dies when the game starts telling you what to do and basically punishes you for what you came here for. You know, the A part in AVN... Wanna seduce them all? Tough luck, you'll either end up fired or dead. Either way game over.
Overall I'm very disappointed, but I do hope the story and game overall will improve with time, but I won't hold my breath. Anyway, good luck dev.