VN Ren'Py Abandoned Wife's Day [v0.2 Pre-Alpha] [Purple Game]

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the66

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here is my unofficial android port of Wife's Day v0.1
have fun and please report problems (you can reach me )
 

iainmore

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I will track this for now since it is just a first release. The artwork look familiar!
 

Linger_Dinger

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This game has a potential lot if the developer is willing to put some hard work in it. First, need to get a proper backstory and story for the game. Always personally I think that devs should come up with a full story and start making a game from it instead of try making up with each update. Like some dev is good with story and make a pretty good story with each update but knowing the full story before development helps a lot of plotting branches in multiple ending games.

Art. For me, I could never the same art style as you not even close as I don't have very good art skills. It's pretty impressive not going to lie but I would recommend that work on its lot as you gotta convince people why should they play your game and pledge to you instead of some other dev.

Naming. Damn what's with these name "V0.1 Final" XD should keep 3 versions. "0.1 Beta" "0.1 Alpha" "0.1" naming is one of the key things to get attract consumers.

Look I see a lot of potential in ya and want good for this game to go. At the start, it always will be hard but if you take it slow and step by step you have a lot of room to grow. No need to rush development as not always looks great. Look I am not ranting for complaining about the game or dev just saving a few things that could help you a lot to grow from my experience.
 

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Just at first glimpse there are some bugs. Its starts with russian text (after I loaded my 0.1 save at the end) and when you decide not to take Phillip with you to the concert, he is still there in the image and Leo says that his wife has made new friends.

And that's it. There is maybe 2-8 min (based on choices) new content from base version .... and quite buggy and the text looks cheep. A lot of problems with with upper and lower case. In example, Philip is sometimes called fillip and the guy you meet when you dont take the bus or taxi - is named Jake in the textbox at first but calls himself Jeremy, then the textbox name changes to Jeremy. The writing itself is really basic and sounds more like something a child would write. Maybe thats a problem with the translation, I have no idea what problems there might be from Russian to English. The art is ok - sometimes it looks quite good, but some pictures are not good.

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This look quite good compared to the rest.

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This one of the weakest imho

There is a lot of work needed, especially the quality control has be better for a "final" update. This looks more like a bughunt or alpha version. The text need proofreading and better translation and most of the art could be better with more polish, because I think the artist is capable of more and can do better. :)
 

Amahl Farouk

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I have to say I think this game is giving up far too much far too soon. The art is nice, it is in serious need of a bit of a re-write, English is a bit off, but my main grumble is within about two minutes she's jumped off the deep end and is banging her son, what's the update plan for episode 2, banging a herd of horses?

Small sips Mr Developer, small sips. Most extreme example of this is DmD by god the sense of satisfaction you got after finally getting a decent kiss was awesome, here it's a case of blink and she's got her boobs out 2 seconds after meeting someone
 

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what's the update plan for episode 2, banging a herd of horses?
Honestly would love to see that :FeelsGoodMan:

Well this and DMD are 2 completely different genres. Cheating/corruption games specialy female protagonist ones usually go in a faster pace. Because its easier to let yourself go (and not give a fuck who you fuck) than trying to bring someone else to fuck you who doesn't want to (yet).

And while i love to win the hearts of Elly in Parental Love and Sara in Milf City i also love to whore out girls like they breathe cum instead of air in these kind of games:biggrin:
 

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Honestly would love to see that :FeelsGoodMan:

Well this and DMD are 2 completely different genres. Cheating/corruption games specialy female protagonist ones usually go in a faster pace. Because its easier to let yourself go (and not give a fuck who you fuck) than trying to bring someone else to fuck you who doesn't want to (yet).

And while i love to win the hearts of Elly in Parental Love and Sara in Milf City i also love to whore out girls like they breathe cum instead of air in these kind of games:biggrin:
The "problem" is, this game has to compete with GGGB and thats hard. In that game the progressions seems more believable - mainly because it is in your hands how fast and how far you go (to some extent).

Its ok to let the MC struggle early but that shouldn't be something like incest or other more hardcore stuff. A drunk handjob in a club? That's something that can happen ...
 
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Amahl Farouk

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I agree, the problem is if you get railroaded too fast and get too much too quickly, there really isn't anywhere else to go other than repetition, which would be a pity as the art in this game is pretty good, and once they get a decent English translator and work up a more paced story, they really could have a good game on their hands.

But it is easy to criticise, at least he is trying
 
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I don't agree. The pace is just fine for me and there is a slow build up of people introductions, story lines, places and increasing intensity of events types… Do porn movies follow the slow 'maybe a brushing touch or a kiss today' route, - no of course they don't - so why should games adhere to that format. Anyway I am happy with the dev's decisions. In comparison, imo A Wife and a Mother is great and I thoroughly enjoy it; however the majority of that game so far is introduction with absolutely minimal tension, so waiting for the tension to rise and finally tying things of is like waiting for Godot - which sucks a bit... At the other end of the scale during the first 20 minutes of gameplay in Indecent Desires the MC has the pain threshold of his member tested and his aunt sexually and racially abuses the Asian maid... a bit quick perhaps but hey both devs have managed to keep their audiences hungry for more. Wife's Day is a game that complements GGGB and The Life of Kiki and does not compete with them … there is no such thing as 'too much of a good thing', bring it on.
 
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I do not know why compare this fashionable and criticize too .. Let's give one or two updates and let's see what happens, personally I like it.
 
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Wife's Day v0.2, date of release, information...
Hi everyone,
It's been a long time, and I finally could find the time to write. 7 new people added this month. Welcome and I am grateful for your support!!

I had a lot of work to do, but I'm resting for a week from tomorrow. So I'll be working on the game from morning till night. But, these 2 weeks I also worked on the game. And until the end of month I'll post game.

And starting next month, the game will be released every 1.5 or 2 weeks.



Thank you all for your support, i will be back soon with more information
 

the66

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here is my unofficial android port of Wife's Day v0.2Pre-Alpha
have fun and please report problems (you can reach me )
 
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