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Alternation62

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Yeah sorry I kinda made the whole d&d thing and then went oh yeah this is supposed to be a porn game
Well, you're new so there's bound to be issues finding balance.
I just want to say that from a writing standpoint, this game is phenomenal. Between Roxie and Shauntal, they were three-dimensional characters that you got to know. Especially in the case of Roxie where, as you continue to do more activities and get to know each other, the player (at least in my case) forms a bond with her which makes the sex scene and what happens after all the more satisfying.
The DnD session was also quite creative, if a bit much and Shauntal's stories was a delight to listen to. Just remember that we're also here for erotic content. Maybe make a sequel story where she returns and we have that date. I wish you the best of luck and I can't wait to see the next story!
 
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johndoe314

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I like the buildup to the sexytimes. That was one of the things that made me really like the first chapter, and I'm enjoying the D&D part as well (but I'm a huge D&D nerd anyways, lol).

I did find one error though...if you use strategic maneuvering in the fight with the bandits, it says that while two of them are squabbling, you slash the third...even if you already intimidated one into running. Might need some kind of flag to adjust the dialogue accordingly?

I do admit I never played the gen in Unova...but gotta say, Shauntal is adorable. The art and writing are fantastic.
 
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I like the buildup to the sexytimes. That was one of the things that made me really like the first chapter, and I'm enjoying the D&D part as well (but I'm a huge D&D nerd anyways, lol).

I did find one error though...if you use strategic maneuvering in the fight with the bandits, it says that while two of them are squabbling, you slash the third...even if you already intimidated one into running. Might need some kind of flag to adjust the dialogue accordingly?

I do admit I never played the gen in Unova...but gotta say, Shauntal is adorable. The art and writing are fantastic.
Fuck, thought I had all those flags covered.
 

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So I don't know the etiquette around here for asking for reviews or anything, but if anyone wanted to tell me how they approached the d&d session, I'd love to hear it, like what class did you pick, what did you expect from it, did anything surprise you, did you want to do anything that the game didn't allow, blah blah?
 
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So I don't know the etiquette around here for asking for reviews or anything, but if anyone wanted to tell me how they approached the d&d session, I'd love to hear it, like what class did you pick, what did you expect from it, did anything surprise you, did you want to do anything that the game didn't allow, blah blah?
I'll be honest, I only played the first story (which I enjoyed) but when I heard that the second one wasn't really 'a porn game' I never bothered to start it. D&D isn't my thing and if there isn't a payout of boobs and fanny and the end, I'm out. lol
 

johndoe314

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I'll be honest, I only played the first story (which I enjoyed) but when I heard that the second one wasn't really 'a porn game' I never bothered to start it. D&D isn't my thing and if there isn't a payout of boobs and fanny and the end, I'm out. lol
There's some of the latter at the end, if you read her diary. Though none "in real life", as it were. But I get the feeling that the story isn't quite done yet.
 

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I'll be honest, I only played the first story (which I enjoyed) but when I heard that the second one wasn't really 'a porn game' I never bothered to start it. D&D isn't my thing and if there isn't a payout of boobs and fanny and the end, I'm out. lol
Aw :c

But Shauntal is a cutie pie, I promise
 

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So I don't know the etiquette around here for asking for reviews or anything, but if anyone wanted to tell me how they approached the d&d session, I'd love to hear it, like what class did you pick, what did you expect from it, did anything surprise you, did you want to do anything that the game didn't allow, blah blah?
It's very long and kinda takes you out of the whole dating aspect when you start playing dnd with her. It was a good dnd experience but it made me kinda forget that I was flirting with a girl.
TLDR: Add a win button next time.
 

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It's very long and kinda takes you out of the whole dating aspect when you start playing dnd with her. It was a good dnd experience but it made me kinda forget that I was flirting with a girl.
TLDR: Add a win button next time.
I was considering adding a skip option at the start but I was really happy with how it turned out at the end so I thought people would like it

Fortunately, anthologies mean that if one sucks you can just play a different one.
 
5.00 star(s) 12 Votes