A game about the glory of bimbo perfection? Now that is what I am looking for.
HTML Transformica [v0.03] [LaughingFoxGames]
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So. Some thoughts.
There is far too much clicking. The UI is a mess. There is no guide to where things are and you have to figure it out as you go. General rule of thumb, less clicks in between travel to key locations is better. Prose for descriptive writing is not detailed and doesn't build up erotic images or thoughts. The mental side of Bimbo is just as important as the physical, showing how the girls feel about their bodies, their emotions as they are trained and changed. Sex is in feelings, that is where the good smut comes from.
The premise of the aunt character is interesting as a start. Right now she doesn't have a lot of personality, compare the mother character or ex bimbo girlfriend of Bimbo Life Coach. Personality, back and forth discussions between bimbos and MC, a deeper reasoning for the need or want of bimbofication, these all add to the experience.
There's a part I think can be expanded on. The main character loves Bimbos, "the female form" as he puts it. Why. I want to understand why he adores Bimbos, why he wants to make Bimbos, why it would be a great idea to turn his mother and sister into Bimbos. This is another area where Bimbo Life Coach shines. Showing Bimbo as a way of being.
UI is basic blue text right now which is fine. This is a starter game. Over time, I encourage a unique art style reflecting the Bimbo theme to make the game pop. Focus on developing the aunt character as interesting with personality to bounce off the MC, go deeper into why the MC likes Bimbos, the greater qualities of self improvement or female perfection, and up that erotic writing for the smut scenes.
I love Inner Bimbo and Bimbo Life Coach, I really like this kind of game and I want to give honest engaged feedback for your effort.
There is far too much clicking. The UI is a mess. There is no guide to where things are and you have to figure it out as you go. General rule of thumb, less clicks in between travel to key locations is better. Prose for descriptive writing is not detailed and doesn't build up erotic images or thoughts. The mental side of Bimbo is just as important as the physical, showing how the girls feel about their bodies, their emotions as they are trained and changed. Sex is in feelings, that is where the good smut comes from.
The premise of the aunt character is interesting as a start. Right now she doesn't have a lot of personality, compare the mother character or ex bimbo girlfriend of Bimbo Life Coach. Personality, back and forth discussions between bimbos and MC, a deeper reasoning for the need or want of bimbofication, these all add to the experience.
There's a part I think can be expanded on. The main character loves Bimbos, "the female form" as he puts it. Why. I want to understand why he adores Bimbos, why he wants to make Bimbos, why it would be a great idea to turn his mother and sister into Bimbos. This is another area where Bimbo Life Coach shines. Showing Bimbo as a way of being.
UI is basic blue text right now which is fine. This is a starter game. Over time, I encourage a unique art style reflecting the Bimbo theme to make the game pop. Focus on developing the aunt character as interesting with personality to bounce off the MC, go deeper into why the MC likes Bimbos, the greater qualities of self improvement or female perfection, and up that erotic writing for the smut scenes.
I love Inner Bimbo and Bimbo Life Coach, I really like this kind of game and I want to give honest engaged feedback for your effort.
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Thank you so much for the feedback!
First of all, I'm well aware of the clicky nature of the game. That's something I'm looking to remedy with more updates. A fast travel system is already a top priority. As well as lowering some of the requirements that make the game a bit too grindy.
I'm not a great writer, but nonetheless thank you for the feedback on the writing and characterization. I might go back and re-write a lot of the mental aspect of the transformations of some characters. So thank you for that. Regarding Natalie, I'm planning on a LARGE story section for her at a later date. For now she will be a bit more of a mystery.
On the UI front, minimal changes for a while. There will be some work done on it, but priority will be on content up until I start CH2. Regarding the philosophy of bimbofication, my interpretation might be vastly different from BLC. But I'll try to make it as interesting and cohesive as possible.
Once again many thanks for the feedback. This gave me a lot more to think about.
I hope you comeback for Update - 0.02 as it will be arriving in a week or two.
I like creativity and respect those who try for more complex kinks than liking big tits or milfs. For writing, I suggest reading. Find a genre you like be it porn or non porn and look for good authors with strong writing style. Enjoy and study from great writers to find inspiration. On concrete tips, think of what makes the emotions and mentality of bimbos in their variations fun. What is entertaining about how Bimbos act and feel, how does this increase desire in the MC for bimbos over other woman?
For dialogue, find a topic between the characters and have them go back and forth on it, share thoughts on what they feel about it. Do they agree? Do they argue? Do they use humor? Your plot isn't as important as the relationships between characters, the Bimbos are the heart and soul of what will drive deeper interest. Hopes and dreams, fears and anxities all to be answered by the sweet siren call of bimbofication.
Pick a reason the MC loves bimbos. In Bimbo Life Coach, it was the MC's mom and a lifelong obsession with creating women like her that spurred his story. Generic MC's are a waste of text space. Choose a central idea behind the MC's antics and explore it. He loves the female form, how could that have caused trouble with other woman making the bimbo supporting women like his friend so much more important to him for that support? How does he think Bimbo woman should be treated? Domination and submission are good kinks to include with Bimbo.
What do you want to do with this game? What is powering your choices for what is put in? What is creative, not tired and redone a thousand times, what can you uniquely give to this experience? Doing a few things with greatness is better than attempting to do many things with medium results.
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Wow, this is really useful advice, thank you! I might go back and replay BLC. I'll do as much as I can on the characterization part, it might not be perfect so all I ask is a bit of patience. The points you made will definitely help me improve with the coming updates, not maybe not 0.02, that's near completion but definitely later updates. Again, thank you very much for the feedback.
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I know how hard it is to get engaged feedback. What I find people do is quick describe sex scenes. You don't need a mountain of words but focus on sensations, where the hands and bodies touch. Show how the MC trains his Bimbos with acts that enforces his dominance and engrain their submission. Posting lewd selfies, dildo and anal plug practice, training them to accept groping, teaching them to pose. The mental stuff of how they act is where you can draw out the spice of the bimbo process. Maybe the machine can only physically change them and they still need psychological conditioning and submission.
The question to ask is what do you like about bimbos as that will be how I tailor any feedback. What do you want in a bimbo game no one else has quite done?
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A bit of mid production update-
Stuff Completed:
1. Main Story has been progressed, with one new character, transformation and sex scene
2. An Ally/Enemy system framework has been established and will be fleshed out into a full faction system
3. The much requested Fast-travel system has been completed to major areas.
4. The girlfriend of the MC - Kasumi has been given a full side story along with transformation with corresponding scenes
5. MC mother- Susan's side story has also been expanded with corresponding scenes
Stuff in the Works:
1. Expansion on the sister - Dylan side story along with transformation with corresponding scenes
2. Full day and night interaction system
3. One bonus scene for players to find.
Stuff that I wanted to add but might not be done for this update:
1. Sound Adjustment
2. UI improvements on image size and backgrounds
3. UI improvements on links and images
4. Another character side story - Mikaela - Kasumi's friend and MC's lab partner at Uni
I initially planned for today (03/06) to be the release of the new 0.02 update. Unfortunately family issues and my own complacency got in the way. Regardless, I'll try a bit harder to make the upcoming updates as substantial as possible.
Expect an update in the coming weeks.
Stuff Completed:
1. Main Story has been progressed, with one new character, transformation and sex scene
2. An Ally/Enemy system framework has been established and will be fleshed out into a full faction system
3. The much requested Fast-travel system has been completed to major areas.
4. The girlfriend of the MC - Kasumi has been given a full side story along with transformation with corresponding scenes
5. MC mother- Susan's side story has also been expanded with corresponding scenes
Stuff in the Works:
1. Expansion on the sister - Dylan side story along with transformation with corresponding scenes
2. Full day and night interaction system
3. One bonus scene for players to find.
Stuff that I wanted to add but might not be done for this update:
1. Sound Adjustment
2. UI improvements on image size and backgrounds
3. UI improvements on links and images
4. Another character side story - Mikaela - Kasumi's friend and MC's lab partner at Uni
I initially planned for today (03/06) to be the release of the new 0.02 update. Unfortunately family issues and my own complacency got in the way. Regardless, I'll try a bit harder to make the upcoming updates as substantial as possible.
Expect an update in the coming weeks.
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Just finished the current content and am really enjoying it. Pleased to see from your update that we're getting fast travel and a sister transformation, my two biggest wants. Also good to see the GF is getting her own content, she's just been in other characters' quests so far.
Keep it up!
Keep it up!
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Pretty simple html game, very nice start! Is the title of the game refers to trans content? Anyway, keep it up!
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Nope, just bimbofication. I just thought the title sounded cool.
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any possibility pregnancy could be added later? If he's going to make a harem, impregnating his harem members would be a nice option I would appreciate.
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I just now saw this. So... without reading the overview I'm guessing a marble counter top now identifies as formica?
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Absolutely, but that's the endgame.
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No worries, mate. Have you heard of a transwoman? Well, it's a transformica counter-top. You're better off not getting it; it's a bloody horrid joke. Cheers.
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Lol, I know what a transwoman is lol. The joke just went over my head.