[VN] [Ren'Py] The Spellbook [Ep. 1fixed] [NaughtyGames]

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I playd it and honestly....sorry man but this game is shit... Nancy looks like a cross between gollum and the blair witch . I'm no expert at making renders and I probably would do facial animations the way you do em (or even worse) but seriously. her face is horrendous and you are even using the best character assets available in porn games.
her hair when it's undone looks like it's been parted in the middle by a ruler. If it's a tribute or adaptaion to NURD couldn't you make something similar to the original milf?
I don't know you dude, so I may be assuming things but have you ever been in a body of water with a woman that's not tryglypuff? Long hair tends to get messy when there's water and for sure it doesn't stay shiny.
But back to the game,,, seriously? what's the point of giving choices when the source material has a mandatory gangban? you've been working for "tell tale" ?
oh and Nancy runs when she sees MC masturbate, but the very next day she flashes her nipples and rubs him with his feet? where's the build-up in that?

Edited due to conscience: I';m sorryif I was harsh, you seem like a decent person, biy with a mediocre game, you'll be just another adult game dev, people forget as soon as they finish the game
 

King Monkey Mon

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Hmmmm I see your point! I might correct that in the next episode!
so was the babysitter thing a way to avoid "incest" on pateron like is she really your mom?
I playd it and honestly....sorry man but this game is shit... Nancy looks like a cross between gollum and the blair witch . I'm no expert at making renders and I probably would do facial animations the way you do em (or even worse) but seriously. her face is horrendous and you are even using the best character assets available in porn games.
her hair when it's undone looks like it's been parted in the middle by a ruler. If it's a tribute or adaptaion to NURD couldn't you make something similar to the original milf?
I don't know you dude, so I may be assuming things but have you ever been in a body of water with a woman that's not tryglypuff? Long hair tends to get messy when there's water and for sure it doesn't stay shiny.
But back to the game,,, seriously? what's the point of giving choices when the source material has a mandatory gangban? you've been working for "tell tale" ?
oh and Nancy runs when she sees MC masturbate, but the very next day she flashes her nipples and rubs him with his feet? where's the build-up in that?
one of the reasons why im not giving a review is due to the only nice thing i would say is how accurate the story is to the comic as far as the dialog and built up i think thats similar to the comic but yeah im not fan of the friends groping the mom but hey its the book that made her corrupted but yeah since the developer is nice i dont want to give a review due to how i would probably give a 3 star
 

NaughtyGames

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so was the babysitter thing a way to avoid "incest" on pateron like is she really your mom?

one of the reasons why im not giving a review is due to the only nice thing i would say is how accurate the story is to the comic as far as the dialog and built up i think thats similar to the comic but yeah im not fan of the friends groping the mom but hey its the book that made her corrupted but yeah since the developer is nice i dont want to give a review due to how i would probably give a 3 star
Fair enough thanks for your honesty man!!! See you around!! :)
 

NaughtyGames

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I playd it and honestly....sorry man but this game is shit... Nancy looks like a cross between gollum and the blair witch . I'm no expert at making renders and I probably would do facial animations the way you do em (or even worse) but seriously. her face is horrendous and you are even using the best character assets available in porn games.
her hair when it's undone looks like it's been parted in the middle by a ruler. If it's a tribute or adaptaion to NURD couldn't you make something similar to the original milf?
I don't know you dude, so I may be assuming things but have you ever been in a body of water with a woman that's not tryglypuff? Long hair tends to get messy when there's water and for sure it doesn't stay shiny.
But back to the game,,, seriously? what's the point of giving choices when the source material has a mandatory gangban? you've been working for "tell tale" ?
oh and Nancy runs when she sees MC masturbate, but the very next day she flashes her nipples and rubs him with his feet? where's the build-up in that?

Edited due to conscience: I';m sorryif I was harsh, you seem like a decent person, biy with a mediocre game, you'll be just another adult game dev, people forget as soon as they finish the game
Hey hahahaha first of all holy shit!!!
Anyway, to get to the point :p I unfortunately didn't have the money to buy all the assets i need... that is why she is not wet and there are some other details missing :) Mandatory gangbang? there is no mandatory gangbang :p About how quickly the story unfolds i thought a minigame would be nice for a change, something for fapping... Instead of big endless game!!!
BTW your conscience works in a funny way as the worst thing you said was "you'll be just another adult game dev, people forget as soon as they finish the game" :p
What can i say :p I hope this thing works pal :p
Farewell
 
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King Monkey Mon

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I playd it and honestly....sorry man but this game is shit... Nancy looks like a cross between gollum and the blair witch . I'm no expert at making renders and I probably would do facial animations the way you do em (or even worse) but seriously. her face is horrendous and you are even using the best character assets available in porn games.
her hair when it's undone looks like it's been parted in the middle by a ruler. If it's a tribute or adaptaion to NURD couldn't you make something similar to the original milf?
I don't know you dude, so I may be assuming things but have you ever been in a body of water with a woman that's not tryglypuff? Long hair tends to get messy when there's water and for sure it doesn't stay shiny.
But back to the game,,, seriously? what's the point of giving choices when the source material has a mandatory gangban? you've been working for "tell tale" ?
oh and Nancy runs when she sees MC masturbate, but the very next day she flashes her nipples and rubs him with his feet? where's the build-up in that?

Edited due to conscience: I';m sorryif I was harsh, you seem like a decent person, biy with a mediocre game, you'll be just another adult game dev, people forget as soon as they finish the game
im guessing im your conscience :p
 
Oct 4, 2018
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I loved that it gets some NTR actions , allways nice to take a shower while 2 other cum on your girls :D , keep them up man , i like this style.

As for the story , meh as in we need to take it sloww... i mean come on , take out the dicks and ntr that hot girl as soon as possible while mc is doing other random tasks , no need to drag it out for 4-5 updates untill something happens.

This game is promising , keep up the work .

And remember , there should be allways 2 story lines , one where you kick ass and fuck girls , and other where you watch in the bushes while your girls get rampaged by other men.

LONG LIVE NTR!
 

Sweet Home Alabama

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It's pretty good, I gotta say. For a first version, content is decent. Story is almost the same as the comics, and the renders are quite good looking, with the exception of some faces (for example, the first masturbation scene is weird). Lightning is quite good too. I'm quite the NTR fan, so I'll be keeping up with this.
 
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wurg

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@NaughtyGames I went through and did a quick spellcheck/grammar check for you and fixed the issue with the MC name going back to default if you used a different name, I didn't address the issue with the "babysitter" being called Nancy, I didn't notice it.
If you want to use this as a hot fix or whatever go ahead, it's not perfect but fixes the naming issue.

If someone wants to use it drop in game folder and overwrite file.
 

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YaYa_UnTIN2

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to ppl who were undecided to try this game cause of the NTR tag. it is avoidable but she still comes off a slutty because of the plot but based on the developers patreon page. Love route is possible. so if thats your reason for not trying this game go ahead and give it a shot. aside from that looks like this game will move at a pretty quick pace. cant really judge it just yet. at least in my opinion
MC cuck avoidable - Thanks to Dev! - options.
 

NaughtyGames

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I loved that it gets some NTR actions , allways nice to take a shower while 2 other cum on your girls :D , keep them up man , i like this style.

As for the story , meh as in we need to take it sloww... i mean come on , take out the dicks and ntr that hot girl as soon as possible while mc is doing other random tasks , no need to drag it out for 4-5 updates untill something happens.

This game is promising , keep up the work .

And remember , there should be allways 2 story lines , one where you kick ass and fuck girls , and other where you watch in the bushes while your girls get rampaged by other men.

LONG LIVE NTR!
LONG LIVE @DaddyGrond !!!
Edit: I misread, I am glad you like the pace of the game .
 

NaughtyGames

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It's pretty good, I gotta say. For a first version, content is decent. Story is almost the same as the comics, and the renders are quite good looking, with the exception of some faces (for example, the first masturbation scene is weird). Lightning is quite good too. I'm quite the NTR fan, so I'll be keeping up with this.
Thank you!!! I am glad you liked it!! Renders in ep 2 shall be crystal clear!!! You got my word for that!
 

Cirelc

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The truth is I didn't know how to do it haha... But i didn't want to annoy any of you :p Thank you for putting me out of this awkward position Cirelc !!!
You can never annoy me with questions to your Thread. If you need help pm me or write @Cirelc in the thread and dont hestitate to ask, you are welcome.

Uploading Mirrors for the Mac Version, ll be added asap.
 
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