VN Ren'Py The Singer [v0.70] [IntensiveCareGames]

[yakargi]

please get a proofreader to fix grammar

Soon I'm going to fix this problem once and for all.
A friend of mine who lived in America for six years has started working.
Starting from the beginning, gradually the grammar will change completely.

 

[yakargi]

How to get these scenes?because no matter what i do,i can't get these scenes,the update always finished after the concert bj'ing thomas the old fart.are these scenes not in the game yet?

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These scenes are before the concert. In order for you to see them;


On this screen select "something else".

Then you will see these choices...



Of course, in order to see these names, Ria has to be in a relationship with these men. Otherwise their names won't appear.

 

[alyssssssssss]

Game simply poor from a graphic point of view, audio and dialogues, facial expressions of the characters are more suitable for a comic game than for a porn one, we have a measurement of cocks outside of any norm, if we make a comparison with the bodies of the girls, when they do sex and they enter with all their penises, considering the proportion, the girls would find themselves with their hearts screwed, hahahah, simply ridiculous, naturally the least endowed one is Mc, even if many times in the plot it is not clear who the real Mc is, many times I ask myself, what's the point of having a boyfriend if Ria fucks for her pleasures, she has fun, she's famous for her skills as a porn star, then she tells each of her lovers that she loves them, all very comical, why then put the boyfriend, that he too has his beautiful girls to fuck, he doesn't need Ria, on the contrary the barrista and her shoe owner are much more beautiful and sexy than Ria, many times I come into conflict because I feel like I'm playing two games separated with two characters, too much chaos, too much point and fuck version, but we are in a porn game, so it will have its good players, for me, it's a slop put in a pot just to create something.

 

[yakargi]

Game simply poor from a graphic point of view, audio and dialogues, facial expressions of the characters are more suitable for a comic game than for a porn one, we have a measurement of cocks outside of any norm, if we make a comparison with the bodies of the girls, when they do sex and they enter with all their penises, considering the proportion, the girls would find themselves with their hearts screwed, hahahah, simply ridiculous, naturally the least endowed one is Mc, even if many times in the plot it is not clear who the real Mc is, many times I ask myself, what's the point of having a boyfriend if Ria fucks for her pleasures, she has fun, she's famous for her skills as a porn star, then she tells each of her lovers that she loves them, all very comical, why then put the boyfriend, that he too has his beautiful girls to fuck, he doesn't need Ria, on the contrary the barrista and her shoe owner are much more beautiful and sexy than Ria, many times I come into conflict because I feel like I'm playing two games separated with two characters, too much chaos, too much point and fuck version, but we are in a porn game, so it will have its good players, for me, it's a slop put in a pot just to create something.

Thank you for your comment. I'm open to any comment, good or bad.
As long as it is objective...

 

[Darth Sidious]

Soon I'm going to fix this problem once and for all.
A friend of mine who lived in America for six years has started working.
Starting from the beginning, gradually the grammar will change completely.

Would be most useful at the true v1.0 release so it's just one big job instead of 5 smaller ones. Can't wait to see what you're cookin' up for the next release!

 

[yakargi]

An animation from next update...

 

[MikeOG]

Great game
but Needs more femdom imo and more sub scenes for the male mc

 

[yakargi]

Did you see the last episode of Halo?
For sci-fi fans 2K wallpaper
Note: It's not about the game.

 

[Randonormie]

It is NOT about "age". A loli can be 82 years old.





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Right, yet ppl still dont use it
Also, definitely the wrong game to call this out on, mybad
Only saw the previews, but after playing. I should of called out the last one lol

 

[single_guy_from_au]

An animation from next update...

I can watch it forever (already got it from Instagram)!

 

[single_guy_from_au]

Did you see the last episode of Halo?
For sci-fi fans 2K wallpaper
Note: It's not about the game.

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Sorry - I have to say it (and again it is my personal opinion).

I think, MC as a cold blooded killer would be a great idea, but in 1990s (when the movies like Commando, which I have on DVD , were made), but today a lot of people would not like the 'piles of dead bodies'. Which is funny for me to see when some people say things like "Why some European comics (for example, Zora, The Vampire - italian fumetti from 70s) have so much blood and cruelty?!" - coming from countries like USA, etc.

So, why not to change the focus slightly for your new game: instead of a ruthless killer - a 'cold blooded' spy, who can get all secrets from the 'bad guys'. (if you know what I mean).

And guess, who would be perfect for this new role? I am thinking somebody who is very famous and really( and I mean REALLY) hot ... (wait for it ....) - Ria (code name Karma).

yakargi - think about this:

• Season 2: Ria is a spy (plenty adventures for Ria and her friends)
• Season 3: Ria is joining a Space ship misson ('helping' crew members with 'hard and big health' issues, space pirates, scary aliens, etc)
• Season 4: ...

In a few years your awesome game would have more supporters than 'Anna Exciting Affection', etc (especially now when there are so many hot sceans with Ria).

I really believe that your game needs to be NUMBER 1 here (this is about of you - I don't make any money here)!

You don't have to reply to me right away (I know that you are very busy) - just think about it for a few days/weeks (the possibilities are really endless here). And the best part - there is no long setup time (where the new MC is 'not sure about it', 'it feels wrong', etc).

Meanwhile, I will probably get this tattoo "Ria Forever"! (or will change my signature - to show that I am serious about all of this)

 

[single_guy_from_au]

I did it! (I appologize, if I cannot type well now - I already had few beers - for people who did not remember: I had - The Cure for Madness signature)

Please check my new signature on the left !!! (and don't forget to click on it - to go back to this amazing game)

If anybody want I attached two yakargi's original signatures at the folllowing location - https://f95zone.to/threads/post-your-signatures-here.17387/page-127 (somewhere in the middle of the page) - please, do anybody who loves this amazing game!!!

yakargi - if you can add "The Singer - the FAN" to this image - my favorite game from now on!!! (well, together with Royal Switch).

BTW: this is the image that I can look forever too (Ria is just too beatiful - I wish I would be 25 years old again - please, GOD do it for me) as well as jumping to the pool (from the prevous post) !

If I die tomorow (God forbid) - I would say at least I played this the most amazing game!!!

 

[yakargi]

I did it! (I appologize, if I cannot type well now - I already had few beers - for people who did not remember: I had - The Cure for Madness signature)

Please check my new signature on the left !!! (and don't forget to click on it - to go back to this amazing game)

If anybody want I attached two yakargi's original signatures at the folllowing location - https://f95zone.to/threads/post-your-signatures-here.17387/page-127 (somewhere in the middle of the page) - please, do anybody who loves this amazing game!!!

yakargi - if you can add "The Singer - the FAN" to this image - my favorite game from now on!!! (well, together with Royal Switch).

BTW: this is the image that I can look forever too (Ria is just too beatiful - I wish I would be 25 years old again - please, GOD do it for me) as well as jumping to the pool (from the prevous post) !

If I die tomorow (God forbid) - I would say at least I played this the most amazing game!!!

Dude! You're awesome!
I'm working on the new version now. If all goes according to plan, I'll release it in mid-April. I've sped things up a bit.
And... I've registered on Steam. I'm waiting for approval.
I'll do a few Fansigs as soon as I get this workload off my chest. I promise.

 

[riddikk91]

Game simply poor from a graphic point of view, audio and dialogues, facial expressions of the characters are more suitable for a comic game than for a porn one, we have a measurement of cocks outside of any norm, if we make a comparison with the bodies of the girls, when they do sex and they enter with all their penises, considering the proportion, the girls would find themselves with their hearts screwed, hahahah, simply ridiculous, naturally the least endowed one is Mc, even if many times in the plot it is not clear who the real Mc is, many times I ask myself, what's the point of having a boyfriend if Ria fucks for her pleasures, she has fun, she's famous for her skills as a porn star, then she tells each of her lovers that she loves them, all very comical, why then put the boyfriend, that he too has his beautiful girls to fuck, he doesn't need Ria, on the contrary the barrista and her shoe owner are much more beautiful and sexy than Ria, many times I come into conflict because I feel like I'm playing two games separated with two characters, too much chaos, too much point and fuck version, but we are in a porn game, so it will have its good players, for me, it's a slop put in a pot just to create something.

Wow... err... OK... I'm gonna take a wild stab in the dark & say that maybe you don't like this game???

On one hand, my respect to you for making a rambling 9 line sentence with the only punctuation being comma's... on the other, I'm simply amazed that anyone would post a comment in a game thread that they hated playing. There have been hundreds of games here that I played that were terrible in my opinion - but I simply deleted the game & went & tried another one. If I didnt like a game, it's highly unlikely that my feedback would be constructive or worth sharing with the developer.

All the best to you though - I hope you find another game that you enjoy playing...

 

[exazubi]

Game simply poor from a graphic point of view, audio and dialogues, facial expressions of the characters are more suitable for a comic game than for a porn one, we have a measurement of cocks outside of any norm, if we make a comparison with the bodies of the girls, when they do sex and they enter with all their penises, considering the proportion, the girls would find themselves with their hearts screwed, hahahah, simply ridiculous, naturally the least endowed one is Mc, even if many times in the plot it is not clear who the real Mc is, many times I ask myself, what's the point of having a boyfriend if Ria fucks for her pleasures, she has fun, she's famous for her skills as a porn star, then she tells each of her lovers that she loves them, all very comical, why then put the boyfriend, that he too has his beautiful girls to fuck, he doesn't need Ria, on the contrary the barrista and her shoe owner are much more beautiful and sexy than Ria, many times I come into conflict because I feel like I'm playing two games separated with two characters, too much chaos, too much point and fuck version, but we are in a porn game, so it will have its good players, for me, it's a slop put in a pot just to create something.

I really made the effort to read your text. And I couldn't find a single sentence that really objectively and factually deals with even a single scene in the game. That's a lot of text with very little meaning, which actually just says that you don't like the game just because it's not your taste.

In fact, the game doesn't have the greatest graphics. But she's not bad either. Characters, dialogues and story are well written. Of course it could be even better. But I know a lot of games with significantly worse stortelling. It`s significantly better than the most games I've ever played. And I have played many. And there are only a few scenes that are really forced because of the story canon. Most are optional.

Next your comment about penis proportions, seriously? I know games, once queer across all genres, where the men all have penises like horses. Here, in this game, the developer actually held back and used penis sizes that actually exist in reality.

Last the fact that you are overwhelmed by the fact that there are 2 MCs who allow different perfectives for the same story, also meet their own LIs, is not a defect in the game, but in your personal horizon. The game is simply too high for you.

You're just not a fan of NTR/cheating. That`s absolutely fine, no one has anything against your taste. But then just don't play something like that. It´s not your cup of tea. That's why you can't understand the fascination for these fetishes.

Please leave the judgment about the quality of such a game to those who have a weakness for these fetishes. You can't have a say here at all. You can't explain to a blind person what the color red looks like.

Farewell

 

[Big Rooster]

Thank you for your comment. I'm open to any comment, good or bad.
As long as it is objective...

TYVM for the great game... worts and all!

Soon I'm going to fix this problem once and for all.
A friend of mine who lived in America for six years has started working.
Starting from the beginning, gradually the grammar will change completely.

Don't fix it completely, I enjoy the grammatical differences

 

[Canto Forte]

We already have some lack of choices: This game contains NTR that is unavoidable.
for bizarre plot reasons, why do you need Ria be verbally challenged?
Her struggles should be enough to push the game forward.

Don't fix it completely, I enjoy the grammatical differences

Soon I'm going to fix this problem once and for all.
A friend of mine who lived in America for six years has started working.
Starting from the beginning, gradually the grammar will change completely.

That is great .. getting the message across and making sure
this is not backwards is commendable.

 

[Deleted member 5423299]

Hello guys, Anyone know how the MC fuck this black guy from nightclub?

 

[yakargi]

Hello guys, Anyone know how the MC fuck this black guy from nightclub?
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Ria's corruption points should be at least 39.

 

[Deleted member 5423299]

Ria's corruption points should be at least 39.

okay thank u, By the way nice game I love it