VN Others Completed The separate ways [v1.0] [KAMMUK]

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AlisaB

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Jun 19, 2018
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This goes to my personal top 5 most ridiculous projects I have ever seen on this site :ROFLMAO:
I'm not even gonna play it, screenshots alone provide sufficient entertainment.
1. Ellie looks like a buff dude with tits.
2. Little alien guy - just wtf?!
3. Engrish is top tier.
4. Overview gets straight to the point, I like that - no bullshit excuse for a story about dead fathers or isekai service trucks.
"Denga Bangs Ellie" - clear, minimalistic approach works wonders sometimes!
 

quiboune

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Sep 2, 2018
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4. Overview gets straight to the point, I like that - no bullshit excuse for a story about dead fathers or isekai service trucks.
"Denga Bangs Ellie" - clear, minimalistic approach works wonders sometimes!
If they kept it that way the game would be less ridiculous but they added a weird intro about how the group is lost in the forest, Denga is great at navigation and a half alien born after his father came to earth and fucked a human, for some reason there's a hotel and Joel is very stubborn?
 

4access

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Dec 20, 2019
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Sorry to be negative, but model posing is very bad. Clipping of extremities and body? Is the author blind or what? I use Daz Studio as a hobby and I can pose better than that. Also writing is banal -- I'd expect that from a pre-rendered "comic" in a PDF sold on Renderotica, but a game with promo screenshots that are this bad isn't even worth downloading.
 

Ifartedtoolong

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Feb 27, 2022
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I found this to be more hilarious then anything. Elli looks like they hit her with a growth ray as she looks huge. It does need a lot of proof reading as the Engrish is pretty strong.
 
Jul 26, 2019
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it's like that sy-fi movie with the guy from shaun of the dead and Seth Rogan, what was it called, Paul? It's like that but harder to watch.
 

ramborock

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Oct 19, 2020
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Like it.
Keep up the work you will only get better.
If buff/Fit women is your art style then make sure that you dont crossover in the trans or men looking women.
If cheating/ntr or monsters is where u are going then refine that.
Story matters a lot even if the VN is pretty short.You can always ask other creators for permission to remake their stry in yourart style.
 

ReiCaixa

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Apr 28, 2020
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The game, plus the description, plus the dialogue, this is awfully great, and greatly awful, I love it.
 
2.00 star(s) 3 Votes