HTML Abandoned The Mansion [v1.01] [Sinichi Kudo]

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MrXV

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Black background would be great. Just find the whitebackground and small text rather annoying and hard to focus on.
 

Froilan

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Very good start, waiting for the next update. I always thought what a game based on Haunting of Palmer Mansion and other tales of RawlyRawls
 

Stareagle lord

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Okay, I have a few suggestions for the next update/updates, 1 if you plan on using image-adult stuff and not just pure text then, please add more non-sexual content like pictures to make people get more in tune with the feeling of playing in this game/world. 2 Add more colors around the game like black/blue, etc and if possible make an early start a choice of buttons or something next to save area to let the player choose the colors of things he/she wants. Don't just have lots of white plain looks with black text it will be boring in the long run. 3 Make a quest/Walk/ log so people can easier keep track of what to do or so. It's not that easy to figure out what's next if it's going to be a story rather than an open world with content but even then it's good to have a quest log or the like. :) 4 if it's going to be open world don't let people miss any content unless they choose to avoid certain stuff like NTR, cuckold, MMF, gay, lesbian, and such things. :) I could surely bring out more but I think that's enough for now. :)
 

Space_Cow99

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Waiting, until there more content, if game where your essentially playing a zork game I'm waiting. :cautious:
 

throwa

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11 days from release to abandoned? That has to be a record.

Ahh nuts. I only wanted to poke fun at the oddities of porn game development on F95. Thought I would just get a couple of lols, a "yeah relatable" and a handful of forum points. Didnt even stop to consider the actual guy willing to take a risk and try to make something cool.
Sorry. Dont give up on your ambitions merely because the comment section wanted a cheap laugh.
 
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Spyderwraith

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11 days from release to abandoned? That has to be a record.

Ahh nuts. I only wanted to poke fun at the oddities of porn game development on F95. Thought I would just get a couple of lols, a "yeah relatable" and a handful of forum points. Didnt even stop to consider the actual guy willing to take a risk and try to make something cool.
Sorry. Dont give up on your ambitions merely because the comment section wanted a cheap laugh.

Pretty sure the main reason the game got abandoned so quick is that the original writer of the story said he did not get permission from him
 

Oliz82

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Hello.

Tha samples made me come but the result is really raw.

The worldbuilding is very limited.
The characters are few and different.
The plot, though not original, could have become good.
The photos and gifs are well chosen.

As I was saying, the game is really difficult. You created many rooms for a certain level of freeroam/sanbox but, to progress in the game, we have to find the right location to see what is supposed to happen there, like in a VN. So visiting all the rooms in hope to see anything can become boring with time.

Outside the polemic, I really wanted to like what you did but it's too all over the place.

On a more general note, though the original autor asked you to stop using his story, you could definitely create your own world. Being inspired by a story/film/game/anime is a thing but you shouldn't copy it (even as a parody, you have to bring your own ideas). It could be a shame if you let all your work go to waste because of it.
So, create your own characters and your own story, I know you're capable of it. Just chose between sanbox and VN or at least make a system where we can see what we have to do and have activities to do in between/outside those programmed events. Not knowing what to do is definitely a bad idea.
As for the name of the game, either keep "The Mansion" in it or not but not alone to differentiate with similar games' names.

Good continuation.
 
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