Like a few of you, I appreciate what this game is trying to do even if it doesn't quite get there. The models are damn hot and the setting is much more interesting than the standard "guy wanders around house looking for things to put his dick in" that a lot of VNs have. But the dialogue and storytelling leave a lot to be desired.
I wanted to see if I could improve the experience. So I've started rewriting the game. Over the last couple days I rewrote the intro from where you start a new game up to the Primal Vision tutorial. My goal is to give the characters a bit more depth than they currently have, as well as improving the plot. I haven't changed any image orders, just the text.
If anyone is interested I've attached the
story.rpy file. This is for the 4K version so I don't know if it'll work with the regular one, I haven't tested it. Just copy this file into your \game directory and overwrite when asked.
The 4K version seems to be missing some audio files, I noticed. If you have both versions you can copy the files from the game\audio folder of the regular version over to the same folder in 4K. I changed the music that plays during the intro from file "1.mp3" to "4.mp3" because I think it suits the tone better.
I'm going to keep going until I've completely rewritten the entire story.rpy (which I think goes up to the end of chapter 4); or until I get bored and stop, whichever comes first.
Oh and for anyone getting that bug where you're playing with music turned on and you enter/exit a menu, and the menu music is still playing over the top of the game music, I have a fix for that too.
Open the gui.rpy file in a text editor and look for this line:
define gui.game_menu_background = Movie(play ="gui/game_menu.webm")
Change it to:
define gui.game_menu_background = "images/ending_img.png"
This replaces the menu animation with a static image. The menu animation audio is what was overlapping with the game music. I'm sure someone more familiar with Renpy could find a better fix, but this works.