VN - Ren'Py - The Five Star Stories [v0.5] [The Narrator]

Really nice game.

The engagement speed of the love interests is very fast, so it is not for people who love very slow burn deep romantic developing stories, but for those who are here for the action, this game gives it plenty and with beautiful LI's and not bad animations.

Strong points: Nice LI's, nice renders, little waiting time to get to the action, obvious incest-heavy content (not the most marketable these days with all restrictions, so actually nice to see this here and here's hoping he doesn't get kicked out of his support/subscription pages soon)

Weak points: totally no challenge on the MC's part to win over the love interests. They literally beg him to have sex with him almost from the start, so the "conquest reward" feeling really isn't there.

came here for an incest game but well....

The renders are OK, and the LIs look good, Animations are so and so, and by no means special. MC is a Blond Goblin but MCs are most of the time merely an afterthought so whatever.

The story is arguably the most important part it's an AVN after all and a Kinetic one at that. The story is a straight forward simple affair, some people would say it is too simple.

The LIs so far are Sis, Mom, and Aunt. The models are nice, that's it.
their characters need a bit of work (please read that as a rewrite)
Sis uses the first chance she gets after getting together with MC to hook up with Mom (basically behind his back cheating on him).

Does that sound bad? LoL it gets worse. Both Mom and Aunt are whores with an OF account and Mom has a history as a porn actress.

Not bad enough? I gotcha covered fam. Aunt is actively whoring herself out to her OF followers, which is shown as a call MC overhears she has with one of them.

The only thing I'm interested in right now is to see what happens when Dad comes back in update 0.5 and how that gets handled. Because the LIs are handled so bad I don't want anything to do with any of them and like I said it is kinetic, so

TLDR:
my personal recommendation for people who want to play an Incest game is don't bother.

Playing 0.4
Overall a good game, with a decent story and decent graphics.

Small suggestion for improvement would be to make the text box opacity controllable. As it stands, the text box gets in the way with some of the scenes.

FYI, I quit this game after finishing the third part.
I don't enjoy giving bad reviews especially for the smaller, relatively new project, but there're a few annoying aspects in this game just irk me a bit too much, so take it with a grain of salt:
1. MC. The single most annoying aspect of this game: the ugly face and short height combined with too much of the dev's self-insertion (I'll talk about it in the second part) just make me really hard to enjoy especially when this game is basically a kinetic novel with no substantial relationship choice to pick. Honestly, seeing him and his TALLER not-sister walking side by side is just not a good selling point.
2. Self-insertion. The first two parts of the story are OK, but starting from Part 3 the MC suddenly rants about how hard it is to be a porn game dev and how envious he is towards the big shots of this industry. I mean, I really get it. Developing a game from scratch especially when the initial financial incentive is almost minimal is quite challenging and frustrating and I do hope the dev can fulfill his wish one day. But we as players just want to chill and fap when playing these games, not having to add some unnecessary psychological burdens that aren't us to take. In addition, there're also too many words spent on MC's inner thoughts and it's tiring to read. As one reviewer said, You really need to emphasize the "visual" part of the Visual Novel: show, don't tell.
3. Lack of agency. MC and his not-sister clearly are still at school and even though we can adjust the age of each character, your not-mother's complaint about MC not having a job will not change, which is even more jarring because MC's more childish face and short height. It's at this point I realize we have no agency in this game (shocking I know, considering this is essentially a KN), and the fact that both the two adult LIs have done porn before doesn't help either. You're bound to bang them one way or the other, yet such lack of freedom is just not my cup of tea.
Overall, I can't really recommend playing this, which is really sad considering Incest, Harem, and Pregnancy are my TOP 3 tags, but the horrendous MC render, the dev's self-insertion, and lack of agency really don't make the game an interesting piece to taste.

The story starts off with introducing the MC and main LI's, allowing you to customize the names, ages and relationships. I did this.

The game offered a bio page (upper right) where you can view the characters and change the names, and I found the relationships did not remain the same. I entered one of the name fields and the last 4 displayed the relationships correctly, but not the Step-Sister. The dev should fix this.

I have also noticed some strange action in the text field, like the game was doing something. The dev should just allow the player to type anything in the text field, make changes, etc.

As an application developer, I consider bugs to be an unforgivable sin. I usually don't leave a review, but I think the game does have potential.

Also, the renders were quite nice which earned 2 stars.

Fix those bugs and good luck with the game.

Reviewing up until chapter 3 end.

Giving it 2 stars as the milfs backstory came out of nowhere and I wanted to quit right there.
If it wasn't for that particular story element I would give 4/4,5 stars since it looks promising.

So yeaaah.. Should've read the thread before playing. Everything was fine until the milfs background came to light, I've played through it, but not going to continue playing.

Just a heads up for future players (spoiler):
Both milfs are essentially whores, even if one of them only been one in the past. They are/were sex workers(shooting porn and so on), both of them have an OnlyFans at the present and both are active on it. Yeah MC will probably join them, but that doesn't make it more appealing.
I've lost all interest in the Aunt as soon she started talking about fucking dudes left and right and especially the way she ended that phone call waiting to be with another dude in the evening. Sure it might not happen in chapter 4, but still it's a huge turn off from her.
The whole OnlyFans thing could've been introduced like that they had the idea to sign up for a few months now and Mom could've met MC's father in the grocery store or something... Their backstory is unappealing, and if it only comes to light after 2 whole chapters I'm afraid to find out what will happen later with other LIs or with these two.
Also the dev haven't really been responding regarding future tags so who knows if it will have swinging/sharing/cuckolding later on just out of nowhere.

Another warning about lesbian content (spoiler):
The game has unavoidable lesbian FF scene(even in VN mode), now it's not a problem for me but some people don't like it so I just wanted to mention it as a heads up. It looks like it won't be the only one, as this is heading towards a poly relationship and the FF scene happens through the Sister's POV, so later on it can happen with anyone. But I don't know what will happen and I might just be talking out of my ass, so take that with a grain of salt.

This looks like a harem game but it ain't one. I don't want sex workers in a harem and since they are unavoidable I'll skip the whole game.
I advise the dev to mention this on the home page in dev notes, it will spare the people of being disappointed and spamming the thread about it since players will only find it out in chapter 3.
Also prostitution tag is probably missing, sharing/swinging tag might be missing from the tags too. (but I'm not sure where the story goes from here so that's probably fine for now)

The renders are OK, animations are kinda mixed since a few looks decent but a few looks mediocre.
The story itself escalates quite quickly, no buildup whatsoever on the incest front. Sure I don't like blueballing games but it's progressing rather quickly and kills the fun of seducing/corruptuing Mom/Sis/Aunt/Cousins since that's not really happening.

LIs (spoiler):
Sis: MC helps her with her sexual inexperience after her bf breaks up with her. They start fucking after 2 days, then she seduces the Mom (this happens after a 1 month time skip) and has sex with her without the MC in an attempt to get her joining in on the fun MC and Sis is having.
Mom: MC finds out about the Aunt doing OnlyFans and while looking her up later he also finds Mom's OnlyFans. MC starts jerking off to Mom's OF and she cathes him. Later on she comes to MC that she did porn back in the day and would like MC to participate on her OF.
Aunt: Aunt have the hots for MC from the beginning, not much happend with her so far. She is hooking up with guys, at the end of chapter 3 she is having a phone call with another dude she is going to meet that night.
Cousins: MC catches one masturbating and the other one kisses him on the mouth as they greet each other. Nothing else so far.

Even if I haven't really enjoyed chapter 3 and not going to come back I'll wish the dev good luck!

If you love incest and is interested in a straight to the point story when you need that sweet release, this game is amazing at that.
The renders are great!
If you like characters with very relaxed and casual attitude with no shame in regards to sexual stuff, then you're in for a treat! If you like that, then you know that it's not easy to find.
It's still new but you can see that the dev is being very consistent with updates and communications.
I hope he can keep up in the long run because if this is the case, this is setting up to be an amazing game, which is raunchy exactly the way we love it!

The story is too simple to immerse myself into.

The constant thought narration is poorly written and with the "**" and lack of control over the text-box opacity - it intrudes into the visuals. Let your visuals do their job, Developer. It's called a visual novel, there's no need to narrate what we can already see.

Basic quality of life functions are missing. Text box opacity control is always required. Naming save files is basic and also missing.

Animations are lackluster at best, there's other games doing it a lot better.

The women are pretty and have attractive, realistic bodies. Well, the women I've seen are, the mom and sister. This is a plus. The MC's face isn't very attractive.

You have a start, developer, but it doesn't seem like you've played many VN's and learned from them what makes them easy to play and fun and immersive to read and "get into."

Some design pluses, I see there's interest in choices effecting the story. This is good. More choice, the better. A person who's diving into a story and getting into a role, like an actor, will feel more like the fictional person the more they can control them, according to their tastes. Help immersion into the fantasy.

Sexy little story.

Lisa is hot AF with realistic proportions and a cute face. The MC's face looks a bit off compared to hers but at least he doesn't have a comically oversized penis that you see far too often.

The writing is good and the Dev does a good job using words to set a scene. A couple times I saw dialog from Lisa attributed to the MC. I wouldn't have minded if things had progressed just a little slower.

The only things holding me back from rating 5 stars is no replay gallery and though it has audio files I couldn't get sound.

I look forward to more and I hope we see Lisa and MC continue down their romantic path. A V/N pretty well done.

Focused on romance and erotism. This visual novel have been a really good surprise.

This is not perfect but for a first atemps . Is great.

We can talk about render or leng. But the story is good. This is wath is matter

That was very well done! the sister is outstanding. The pace might have been accelerated but as i'm not a twin, no idea if the connection between them would expedite the process! not sure what part 2 will be like ( mom maybe!) but look forward to it. great job Dev!!!
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Diego

A very enjoyable creation - well done! Nothing to critique in terms of problems. As a feature suggestion I'd love to be able to change the name of the MC at least although I realise this is more of a VN than an immersive game.

Obviously you aren't going to monetise on a major platform due to the hard incest coding so from a personal kink perspective being able to twaek the ages would be lovely, but it is your project and if you don't agree with that sort of thing I certainly wouldn't want to be the one pushing you. Overall enjoyable as I said.