Ren'Py Please help me out!.

[EvilEyeGames]

Does anyone think this is way to basic for beginner start? if anyone want to give out more idea's you can join the discord link here

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needs more ideas from community creators game developers.

 

[whizwart]

I've seen much, much worse. You've got a good basic idea. Two things:

One, I really think you need either a different camera angle or place the models so they are looking at the player. Creates more connection and makes you pay more attention IMHO.

Two, I see what you're doing with the wings, and its not a bad idea, but I think you need to retool it a little. The black box of the logo makes it so you don't notice the black wing right away unless you pay close attention.

Good start, just polish a bit.

 

[EvilEyeGames]

I've seen much, much worse. You've got a good basic idea. Two things:

One, I really think you need either a different camera angle or place the models so they are looking at the player. Creates more connection and makes you pay more attention IMHO.

Two, I see what you're doing with the wings, and its not a bad idea, but I think you need to retool it a little. The black box of the logo makes it so you don't notice the black wing right away unless you pay close attention.

Good start, just polish a bit.

problem iilusion discord doesn't give me help much. I don't have a good power cpu at all. So going to make best of it.
Also don't have photoshop, using gimp worse alt of a photoshop.