VN Ren'Py Ecstasy's Eclipse v.0.0.1 Public Demo by Yazen (Android & PC)

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Ecstasy's Eclipse Banner 1.png

OVERVIEW:
Some day, at some time, in some place, you start to feel the wind shift its course. Maybe something big will change your life's direction for better or for worse.

You'll meet Sabrina, an eccentric girl that will drag you along with her crazy antics. Not really understanding how and why you let yourself be caught into her mess, the both of you will start to uncover something that will change and shape your perception of the truth.

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Developer: Yazen_ -
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Censored: No
Version: 0.0.1 Demo
OS: Windows & Android
Language: English

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DEV NOTE BEFORE DOWNLOADING :
This thread is being continuously updated. Changes and revision happen all the time
If you wanna keep up to date with my progress then bookmark this thread and drop a follow so I can tag you when the game is up! :coffee:

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THUMBNAILS:
Oyakodon 1.png Rue Smoke Pinup.png Lights Camera Action!.png Rebirth Pinup.png The Elites Pinup.png Aella's Return Pinup.png Begging To Fuck.png

HELPFUL LINKS:
Ecstasy's Eclipse Character Designs
Main Character's Personality & Development​
 
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Jaike said:
Tagging in xmilteach? I hope you're ready for some hard truthtelling...

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Good luck with your game btw.
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I mean at this point I've seen a lot of people shitting on what I'm trying to do

It's fine, if it's constructive, I can take it. I'm aware of the pros and cons of sharing something here in the internet.

I'm just trying to look for opinions, tips, and advice (esp in my writing) that I can use in my developing journey.

But of course I'm not gonna release a game that I know I'd abandon.

I'm probably not even gonna release the first official version until I'm 3 updates ahead from it.

Anyways, thanks! Lmk what you think :)
 
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The tags of this are all over the place...
What is your goal?
Which tags are forced which are not.

So far this seems like a clusterfuck of tags.... most of them don't play nice with each other.
 
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Uthuriel said:
The tags of this are all over the place...
What is your goal?
Which tags are forced which are not.

So far this seems like a clusterfuck of tags.... most of them don't play nice with each other.
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Well yeah you're not wrong. Basically it plays out like this.

The more darker tags will show because it's part of the story (e.g. getting roped into a voyeur situation, being forced to force yourself on someone. Being taken advantaged of when you're sleeping.)

Of course I won't outright start the game with it. I'll be a story where the main character is essentially corrupted but still retains his sanity and some morality.

It seems overloaded at first but the hard tags are used sparingly.

The first few chapters will be light hearted with some focus on him getting involved into crazy situations and influencing his moral compass. The rape aspect though, it's probably not even supposed to be rape if the participant is willing. I guess I could change it to consensual non-consent though.

Overall, the story wouldn't be that dark if that's what you mean. I'm taking inspiration from games like Eternum and Ripples but adding my own twist and my own style to the story.

Though I should probably shave some of those tags off and not put them until they're in the game. Since most people would find it pretty much a turn off if they don't understand it at first glance.

Anyway to answer your question here are the forced tags:
Incest, Corruption, Male dom, voyeurism, and drugs (only because the watersource of their place has been polluted with a drug that makes people be in heat.)
 
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Yazen_ said:
Well yeah you're not wrong. Basically it plays out like this.

The more darker tags will show because it's part of the story (e.g. getting roped into a voyeur situation, being forced to force yourself on someone. Being taken advantaged of when you're sleeping.)

Of course I won't outright start the game with it. I'll be a story where the main character is essentially corrupted but still retains his sanity and some morality.

It seems overloaded at first but the hard tags are used sparingly.

The first few chapters will be light hearted with some focus on him getting involved into crazy situations and influencing his moral compass. The rape aspect though, it's probably not even supposed to be rape if the participant is willing. I guess I could change it to consensual non-consent though.

Overall, the story wouldn't be that dark if that's what you mean. I'm taking inspiration from games like Eternum and Ripples but adding my own twist and my own style to the story.

Though I should probably shave some of those tags off and not put them until they're in the game. Since most people would find it pretty much a turn off if they don't understand it at first glance.

Anyway to answer your question here are the forced tags:
Incest, Corruption, Male dom, voyeurism, and drugs (only because the watersource of their place has been polluted with a drug that makes people be in heat.)
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I don't think your game is for me... incest is what I'd be interested in but the rest seems rather meh to me.

Maledom like femdom is cringe to me.
Voyeurism is NTR adjacent and unnecessary.. why watch if I can fuck...
Rape a huge no-no.
Drugs... :shrug: seems more like a story thing... mostly not necessary...

I guess good luck with your game.
 
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Uthuriel said:
I don't think your game is for me... incest is what I'd be interested in but the rest seems rather meh to me.

Maledom like femdom is cringe to me.
Voyeurism is NTR adjacent and unnecessary.. why watch if I can fuck...
Rape a huge no-no.
Drugs... :shrug: seems more like a story thing... mostly not necessary...

I guess good luck with your game.
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Understandable. Thanks for checking in anyway.

The voyeur stuff is not just you watching two people fuck though, you're watching it while getting some action yourself. Just wanna clear that up because you're set up to "find about clues" and stuff. But yeah right now, everything is still pre-mature. I'll take the time to calibrate stuff before an official release.
 
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Yazen_ said:
Understandable. Thanks for checking in anyway.

The voyeur stuff is not just you watching two people fuck though, you're watching it while getting some action yourself. Just wanna clear that up because you're set up to "find about clues" and stuff. But yeah right now, everything is still pre-mature. I'll take the time to calibrate stuff before an official release.
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Are the "people" fucking just some random NPCs or is the girl a possible LI, because thats what would be the difference into just being voyeur and being voyeur/cuck.
Everything else sounds and looks great, I love big butts:love:
 
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holaje12 said:
Are the "people" fucking just some random NPCs or is the girl a possible LI, because thats what would be the difference into just being voyeur and being voyeur/cuck.
Everything else sounds and looks great, I love big butts
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Oh hell nah, none of the love interest will be getting involved with anyone besides the MC and their interactions with fellow love interests.

The characters fucking in the voyeurism is not gonna be given emphasis. Probably just a few frames then the scene will focus on the MC getting, for example, a head from Sabrina all the while it's happening to add some layer of "spice" into it.

One NPC (not love interest) is implied (Not directly shown) to have been raped by an antagonist for a set number of years through the use of drug and the MC will come across that character in the story and he will be her ticket out of that hellhole but of course it wouldn't be easy because she will have extreme "life-threatening" withdrawals that would have the protagonist be the one to mediate and ease it.

I wouldn't call that NPC a love interest because she's not a part of the main cast but the player has an option to interact and have some fun with them once the story gets a bit more clearer.

All of this are still subject to change. I might remove that idea if it turns bad for the game itself.
 
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I didn't expect to get at least 34 downloads for the demo release. Still wondering if people liked it.

Bros just played and dipped :ROFLMAO: But anyway, I'll keep working on the game :)
 
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Found your game through your signature on a random other game. I'll write up some feedback as I go through.

First thing, I don't understand why such a heavy blur on the title screen. One of the reasons I even decided to download it (normally I wait until at least a .04 release cause I want a decent amount of content) was because the image on the top of the thread had some neat girl designs and your hiding that behind this blur. I imagine its the help the title splash stand out but there are better ways to do that in my opinion.

Undecided on if this is a good or bad thing but the girl in the tutorial, Yazzy, reminds me of Micheal Jackson...

I've noticed this in a few other games, but the way the guy looks when hes slightly hunched over looks like hes trying to suck his gut in all the way. Just looks odd. Not sure how easy this would be to fix but probably worth looking into.

Obviously, needs a bit of editing. The wording can be quite strange. I'm a pretty big fan of corruption games so hopefully this one turns out. You didn't give us much to judge on, so for now I'll be cautiously optimistic.
 
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