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kawaii narwhal

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Really great game so far. The changing of focus on the characters is nice to be able to see who is talking but it does take quite a bit of time when characters are talking back and forth.
 

Yoshiiki

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Yo! I see you finally decided to post your game here. Nice!
Hope the gang treats you well and gives you some decent criticism.
I'm looking forward to playing more of it myself. :)
More like, finally found extra time to do req and then Gab decided to make a thread :p


Really great game so far. The changing of focus on the characters is nice to be able to see who is talking but it does take quite a bit of time when characters are talking back and forth.
Well, it's something I can completely adjust, since it's not something requiring a lot of time, I will fiddle with it this week, maybe even today. And to be honest, I actually forget how slow it is because earlier it was slowed due to caching issues, after playing whole game way too many times I simply got used to that xD
Anyway, noted down as high priority task.
 
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JJATH

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I really liked the game. I didn't mind that it was slow-paced as the story wouldn't have made sense if it was fast paced, after all, it is a prologue. After the gangbang event in the basement is done is the recurring event supposed to work? Because the barman won't trigger the event(So either it isn't finished or it's bugged. Probably the first one).

I would suggest you make some more events in the town to make some money, maybe whoring the character out at night in the barracks, so making a barracks map would be good.

I would like to suggest something for summoning, could you make some Necromancer type summons? I just like Necromancy in games and I'm sure there are some portraits of some skellies in the kit. A life drain spell would fit the bill for any other type of Necromancy spells, Plague, Transfer of life (Transfer life from yourself to your minions so they wouldn't be able to be healed from anything other than the Mistress; I'm just thinking of balancing), A bolt that does Darkness damage if you are including Holy and Darkness into your element tree. I can think of more but I'll leave Necromancy there unless I go into another paragraph.

I would recommend changing it from 1.0.1 to 0.1.0.1 :D

Edit: Before I forget you could add a Necromancy book into the game that you can buy which will teach you a spell, maybe Life Drain. So Forbidden Magics: Necromancy Book 1

I will say that it might require coding to add but I think it's just something under effects in the maker.
 
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Yoshiiki

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I really liked the game. I didn't mind that it was slow-paced as the story wouldn't have made sense if it was fast paced, after all, it is a prologue. After the gangbang event in the basement is done is the recurring event supposed to work? Because the barman won't trigger the event(So either it isn't finished or it's bugged. Probably the first one).
All events in the demo are finished, I hate teasing with unfinished stuff, so it's rather bugged if anything.
Now, I guess by gangbang you mean last scene
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If that's the one and barman changed, then there is nothing more after that.
Now I am seriously questioning if adding whole side event was a good idea, because it kind of breaks the flow of the game XD And by that I mean, looking from story and design perspective, she is getting known in places as a slut (or exhibitionist or both xP). Reason why I don't do scene that can be repeated over and over is because I am too autistic and would need to make more than few different dialogues that would be randomly chosen to give some variety. So it's either that or recollection room. And since events where it is technically possible for Rose to have certain level of shame/exhibitionism must include different dialogues and/or scenes variations, so corruption seems more in place. That's because I hate when I have, let's say 60% slut MC that acts like a pure virgin just because it's the first scene, makes no damn sense. And event in the bar reflects that as there is debug tree (info in readme) that allows to modyfiy ero stats so even if you start that one event as a slut, she will act like a slut and scenes may be different. So not only I have to keep in mind 4-5 levels of corruption, I also need to keep in mind what player choose when she got molested.
Removing full slut, since there is no option to refuse a little butt massage, it still leaves 3 levels of corruption with 2 choices for each, making it 6 entry ways to deal with on the next "day" XD
I would suggest you make some more events in the town to make some money, maybe whoring the character out at night in the barracks, so making a barracks map would be good.
Actually, there is a barracks map, just like tent-inside map is finished, it's just not used in any way, someone scrapped some ideas XD
Anyway, prostitution will be there, I am just trying to make some sense out of things. There will be at least 2 red light districts in major cities, because just some random peasant/serf couldn't afford a prostitute (Sedara is quite special, due to it's Chief not sharing same views as many nobles do, for him peasants aren't just slaves). I am still thinking about having more red light districts in anything that is a city, but as I said, my autistic brain will force me to try making all scenes different for each client and in case of repetitive stuff, creating bunch of dialogues to randomly mix so it's not the same shit over and over XD

I would like to suggest something for summoning, could you make some Necromancer type summons? I just like Necromancy in games and I'm sure there are some portraits of some skellies in the kit. A life drain spell would fit the bill for any other type of Necromancy spells, Plague, Transfer of life (Transfer life from yourself to your minions so they wouldn't be able to be healed from anything other than the Mistress; I'm just thinking of balancing), A bolt that does Darkness damage if you are including Holy and Darkness into your element tree. I can think of more but I'll leave Necromancy there unless I go into another paragraph.
I don't care what is in the kit in case of images XD. Battles won't have portraits. What they will have is short bursts of poses, for both mobs and Rose. Same goes for summoned monsters. Also, every mob in game will be drawn, so not using stock images. I will leave all battle poses in spoiler at the end of this post. Those are on my blog, hidden on patreon so they don't bother me about nudity.

I have nothing against necromancy, but it's not exactly how summoning will work. All monsters that Rose will be able to summon, will require making a contract with them and while first one was kind of forced (and not achieved in genuine way :p), those aren't just minions, those are fully fledged characters with their own personality. If you went with a bad route, you can actually see more dark form of relationship that happens between Rose and Ro'Medantis. Doesn't mean those monsters are actually bad, it's a matter of perspective. World itself and it's lore is more than dozen pages long atm and it's just a list and explanation of things.

I would recommend changing it from 1.0.1 to 0.1.0.1 :D
Naah XD

Edit: Before I forget you could add a Necromancy book into the game that you can buy which will teach you a spell, maybe Life Drain. So Forbidden Magics: Necromancy Book 1
Well, you won't find magic books in the shops :p
If there is a risk that some peasant that can read, would buy it, learn magic and was quite good at it, it's better to not take chances, right? While reasoning changes, in both cases of Rose learning those spells there was something behind it, so end effect may be the same, the way it was achieved - wasn't, which will have a future impact on the matter. Don't want to spoil it so keeping it vague xP
I will say that it might require coding to add but I think it's just something under effects in the maker.
I don't mind ideas, some may be better than what I have, but in terms of lore, game mechanics, story and general plan for the whole game, I already have it all. So it's more of tweaking some parts if something is better.
Also, the reason why I doubt you will see any polls like: "what do you want to see next?" or "what kink you want next?". Only thing would be clothes as I have few events and things that don't have any reward right now. Yes, clothes and good weapons won't be in shops, with few exceptions, as just like with both "quests" now, those are rewards from doing events.
Only reason some clothes are in shop now, is because I had them drawn, why not show them off? XD

I wrote too much XD
Anyway, promised images:
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Also, as with the rest of game, weapon, clothes, underwear, headwear - all of those on battle images will depend on what player made Rose wear. Now, since plain underwear and blue bikini do have 3 stages of damage (full, half, torn), microbikini has two (full and torn) just like stickers, but stickers unlike microbikini simply disappears. Clothes however are different, depending on type, it can have a lot of damage tiers (with adventurer having most, due to being more of a leather armor than any of those actually in the game). So yeah, not only I have 5 dialogue sprites, I have 5 battle poses and for every single one I need to edit clothes to make those ripped versions XD
Reason why battle system didn't make it to the demo, shitload of drawing :p
 
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Yoshiiki

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I love Rose personality
Will you include femdom scenes?
They work very well with her personality especially with the "bad" karma XD
Haha, I already heard "Rose is best girl" and I really want to make her likable as much as I can. If the player likes character he/she plays with, some scenes or choices will be harder and will have more impact.
I do have few things in that femdom-like kink in mind exactly for that part of her personality. BUT I am not going to promise it's going to be in. Writing character that is evil/bad is one thing, writing a female dom is different. There is a huge chance she will end up more like a sadists than a dom. I will try it, if it will seem odd I will either change whole scene or scrap it all, that's why I can't promise doing things I am uncertain I can make properly.
 

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I'm guessing the current version ends with the chief getting hauled away. I can't seem to leave the town. Is there any other way to get the pick locks skill without getting mind controlled/gang-banged? Or will there be another way offered later, in later versions, to get that skill?

while I certainly would like to see more options for prostituting oneself out, I've never been, and probably never will be a full corruption type person. I'd love to see some options for lesser sins, like oral sex, handjobs, titjobs, glory holes... stuff like that. All too often these games just zoom right past those options, and then everything from then on out is in the ass or in the vag. I would assume I'm not the only poster who enjoys some of the more subtle ways of corruption. So many many games have public bathrooms, male/female, side by side... and nothing is ever done with them. It seems like such an easy way to add in ways to increase corruption over time slowly, for those slow burn players.

I guess if nothing else, it would be nice to always have those options available, so those people who prefer the handy/hummer slow route, but are much more prudish with vaginal/anal sex, can enjoy those avenues.

Also, I'd love to see more female content, not really femdom, but just f/f content in general... and perhaps even a futa or two encounter/repeatable encounter. Perhaps one of the glory hole dicks that appears for a handy or hummer is attached to a beautiful buxom young noblewoman, who is ashamed/mistreated because of her condition...and has to resort to hookers or slaves, everyone needs relief.

anyhow, i love the work, love the artwork, looking forward to future updates.
 

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I'm guessing the current version ends with the chief getting hauled away. I can't seem to leave the town. Is there any other way to get the pick locks skill without getting mind controlled/gang-banged? Or will there be another way offered later, in later versions, to get that skill?
Hard to say, there are still two small things that can be done after he is taken away (not to mention, bar event), but I should have made it clear that you can't get out of Sedara during demo. Because, right after you get out there is a battle that doesn't go well and it also introduces another character, so I can't do anything until I have battles ready.
On the pick locks skill, I already moved whole side quest for that to be right after getting out of village. Reason? NPC in demo giving that skill doesn't do that in full version, he gives different skill, also, he doesn't fuck Rose if she already had vaginal sex. So in next release that whole part will be changed back to how it is in main project.
while I certainly would like to see more options for prostituting oneself out, I've never been, and probably never will be a full corruption type person. I'd love to see some options for lesser sins, like oral sex, handjobs, titjobs, glory holes... stuff like that. All too often these games just zoom right past those options, and then everything from then on out is in the ass or in the vag. I would assume I'm not the only poster who enjoys some of the more subtle ways of corruption. So many many games have public bathrooms, male/female, side by side... and nothing is ever done with them. It seems like such an easy way to add in ways to increase corruption over time slowly, for those slow burn players.
I agree, but I had to mix few extra things into events to give some variety just for the demo, especially Maid part should be quite obvious in the topic of parts I forced in to get more. I am rather going to go for very slow corruption starting with small things to go for bigger ones next. There is a very huge possibility I will be re-balancing shame/exhibitionism stats and what is needed for what tier to make corruption slower.
One thing though: No porn grind. Fucking hate it and won't do it. There won't be: "do this event 100 times and get 100 corruption points", fuck that. I would rather have 100 different events to get 100 corruption points. I already explained how do I expect repetitive events to look like, doesn't mean each time doing it you get another corruption point.
I guess if nothing else, it would be nice to always have those options available, so those people who prefer the handy/hummer slow route, but are much more prudish with vaginal/anal sex, can enjoy those avenues.
Biggest divider will still be exhibitionism/shame. There will be option to get through the game without Rose taking a single dick into her, while being quite an exhibitionism pervert and vice versa (or both stats). Events like striptease and such are purely just for exhibitionism and no one should expect there will be sex in those events. Later, as an effect of that event - yes, but that's going to be another event and all events with visual content need to be triggered by player in one way or another.
Also, I'd love to see more female content, not really femdom, but just f/f content in general... and perhaps even a futa or two encounter/repeatable encounter. Perhaps one of the glory hole dicks that appears for a handy or hummer is attached to a beautiful buxom young noblewoman, who is ashamed/mistreated because of her condition...and has to resort to hookers or slaves, everyone needs relief.
Well, there is already some Yuri content planned. It was pretty much set up in the prologue, but Yuri will be more like Yuri. More on the romance side with end result, while keeping in mind that same sex relationships are more than controversial in that world :p
anyhow, i love the work, love the artwork, looking forward to future updates.
Thanks, will do my best :D
 
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Adrasoth

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Am I the only one who did not had any battles or sex scenes? I just had some of the event in the bar and the one in the Chief Mansion, can someone post a walkthrough for thoses scenes please? ^^"
 

Yoshiiki

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Am I the only one who did not had any battles or sex scenes? I just had some of the event in the bar and the one in the Chief Mansion, can someone post a walkthrough for thoses scenes please? ^^"
There are no battles in the demo, so that's why.
Just go back to Mansion next day, same for a bar. If you use: menu->key items->Recollection room, you will be able to see two things: One is events you saw (globally saved, so new game doesn't affect it) and second one is extra room where you can see route progress.

One thing though, I am considering doing a walkthrough, preferably in an offline website form so it's easier to navigate through the branching routes. It's the sheer amount of things I have to do solo, so it's piling up, even when doing full time+ on this xD
I would gladly hire someone to get some stuff of my shoulders, but until there is a written deal and payment involved, I don't want to risk it on the "trust me, bro!". Too many projects failed because of that. Other thing being, patreon goals so I can have enough to hire someone. Until that, I am one dude in a 3 person team xD
 

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i love to hear that!
:D

Also, just as a note on my previous statement. Just because it's a lot of work and I am solo working on it, doesn't mean "don't pile me up with things". Quite the opposite, it's just the issue of time I will need, with draws being the most time consuming from my experience so far xD
 

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@Gab @Yoshiiki - We need another host besides dropbox since it's not on the approved file hosts list.
 

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@Gab @Yoshiiki - We need another host besides dropbox since it's not on the approved file hosts list.
There already is a zippyshare link. At least was in the [REQ],

Spoiler with name "Links to files already hosted for Win OS"
 
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@Yoshiiki, the bar events (at least) don't account for the possibility of the MC going commando when it's already possible upon meeting the requirements. That makes it possible to look more lewd than in pasties despite not being able to wear those yet, and the dialogue (and underwear-tearing part) cease to make sense.
 
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