Well, I came back to this after the art update and I'm actually pretty impressed now. The story escalation seems natural and makes a lot more sense than some other NTS/NTR works I've seen. The music and the occasional female voice clips are really nice too. The only real issue I have is that the dev should think about getting a native proofreader, the grammar is occasionally a bit wonky and there's barely any proper punctuation, but other than that I'm really liking this so far and excited to see more.