contact me through my website nickstorming.org or same name @ gmail , thanks for responding. i dig the art
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Finished the game and well it was kind of stupid. You are the lord but right from the start you don't have any choice but getting sucked by Megan.
If i'm a scientist who has to take care of such high end researches, i won't have any time to loose with girl stuff. I think i will fire those beautifull women and hire some old grannies with a problematic hygiene so i will not get distracted from my task!
I'm a scientist myself (i know a scientist who reads porn VN for teenagers that's not serious but my mother is dead anyway since 18 years so she won't learn about it) and as a scientist i can tell you that this doesn't make sense, you cannot work on that kind of stuff properly with a permanent hard on.
If i'm a scientist who has to take care of such high end researches, i won't have any time to loose with girl stuff. I think i will fire those beautifull women and hire some old grannies with a problematic hygiene so i will not get distracted from my task!
I'm a scientist myself (i know a scientist who reads porn VN for teenagers that's not serious but my mother is dead anyway since 18 years so she won't learn about it) and as a scientist i can tell you that this doesn't make sense, you cannot work on that kind of stuff properly with a permanent hard on.
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I feel like the added context in the dialogue box is useless imo and it just adds meaningless clutter. We don't need to read that someone is gesturing towards seats when there's a hand movement and someone sits down in the next frame
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Plays a porn game, gets mad when there is sexual content cause it not 'realistic' enoughFinished the game and well it was kind of stupid. You are the lord but right from the start you don't have any choice but getting sucked by Megan.
If i'm a scientist who has to take care of such high end researches, i won't have any time to loose with girl stuff. I think i will fire those beautifull women and hire some old grannies with a problematic hygiene so i will not get distracted from my task!
I'm a scientist myself (i know a scientist who reads porn VN for teenagers that's not serious but my mother is dead anyway since 18 years so she won't learn about it) and as a scientist i can tell you that this doesn't make sense, you cannot work on that kind of stuff properly with a permanent hard on.
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I agree. It's cool to use once in a while. I guess the dev stole the story from an E-Book and is going word for word.
- Oct 26, 2017
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I guess you are not a scientist of grammar and pucuation.Finished the game and well it was kind of stupid. You are the lord but right from the start you don't have any choice but getting sucked by Megan.
If i'm a scientist who has to take care of such high end researches, i won't have any time to loose with girl stuff. I think i will fire those beautifull women and hire some old grannies with a problematic hygiene so i will not get distracted from my task!
I'm a scientist myself (i know a scientist who reads porn VN for teenagers that's not serious but my mother is dead anyway since 18 years so she won't learn about it) and as a scientist i can tell you that this doesn't make sense, you cannot work on that kind of stuff properly with a permanent hard on.
Alright, the game looks promising, but the MC's face looks like an old dude that had a lot of plastic surgery. And on a side note: the descriptive writing after dialogue gets old and annoying real quick.
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I have a suggestion for the dev - get rid of the situation explaination text next to the dialogue. It's useless and distracting. It is a visual novel, so the "visuals" should convey that information and not text. Atleast add a toggle to turn it off.
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A little short but looks very promising. The only criticism I have right now is about the mc's looks. He is supposed to be 19 but looks like he his at least in his late 20s.
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Well, I personally like it, I don't understand how it can distract
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Eh, it's not bad. Better than the same old faces that are used repeatedly.
Reminds me of a caricature of an actor that I can't quite place.
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Heh, I noticed this too. Kind of reminded me of a chicken drumstick.
Now no one will be unable to unsee this, muhahahaaaa
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Well... I gave this a shot based on the early reviews, and the dev has some serious talent. Too bad the story is just, IMO, silly and not for me.
Good luck!
Good luck!
good start. a note about the small text, you dont need to emphases what they are doing like you are writing a book, this for example:
i literally can see she is doing that. save that text when you want convey complex emotion that a difficult to see. that being said write however you please, im not your English teacher, i just dont think its necessary to write like that.
i literally can see she is doing that. save that text when you want convey complex emotion that a difficult to see. that being said write however you please, im not your English teacher, i just dont think its necessary to write like that.